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a lovely and peaceful pokemon story with light gamer elements that reminds me of stardew valley.
Really good read for chilling out and enjoying the moment,also good reference to games like stardew valley and harvest moon
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I would've loved to give this wholesome, heartwarming story 5 stars but I can still see a few inconsistencies in the writing such as mixing up the Pokemon occasionally. This is otherwise an amazing read if you like more slice of life with fantastical elements and a side dish of cooking! Would definitely recommend!
As far as I've seen this is one of the best slice of life / farm life Pokemon fan fic. Its pacing is just right world background is great. And I really fell in love with how the author portrays the cute side of the pokemon. Plus the author is constantly updating overall 5/5 stars would recommend
wow,,, perfect translation paired with a nice heartwarming pokemon fanfic, which can cause an emersive reading not realizing the passing of time.
This is just the perfect story I needed to clear up my mind .Just a slice of life story with cute pokemon and a calm farm , a change from the serious and realistic pokemon fic where there is danger everywhere
A good pokemon FF very relaxing [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
this story was surprisingly heartwarming and chill. I Found myself smiling a lot while reading it.The personalities of the Pokemon are nice and the mc is actually a character and not some walking Chinese troupe .The writing quality so far has been good , so let's see where this story goes
great translation non of those very hard to read text you see in mtls and also no Chinese supremacy also consistent update pace... I like it very much, keep updating and I hope author won't drop it... More stones to you 🤩🤩🤩
incredible story, updates often and I really like the characters, give it a chance
So far the story is going well, a good progression, and shows a fun point of view about the Pokémon world, I'm looking forward to seeing where this fanfic goes.
Stardew Valley (or any other farming games) + Pokemon in Paldea Region. I was disappointed by how buggy Scarlet and Violet was and I only had the will to keep going until I got Ceruledge, but this ff sorta made me want to pick up my Switch and do a replay. Just imagine Farming Game progression and add the Pokemon factor. Currently at chapter 38 and it's going at an alright pace, tbh for farming type ffs I'm more accustomed to a slower pace but the current pace is fine. Pokemon ffs that go for the farming route typically snowball fast so I hope the author can do well in controlling that in the future. Am currently enjoying the chapters so far.
amazing ff, quality is nice, i wish you continue this without dropping it, 🥰
So far the stories been great. I like the fact that you use harvest moon as a reference for the farming related stuff is a nice touch. Try some mining when you have time. I remember when I played harvest moon that mining was also one of the ways I made money for upgrades and ore is highly priced in the harvest moon games. Also, when just fishing for something try to introduce some training for the Pokemon. The character can also have some hounds like boltund or Stoutland even Arcanine to help patrol the ranch. Overall, aside from a few suggestions the story has been great so far.
Text wall at the beginning chapters (1-13) but gets better later, interesting read and i think it resembles stardew valley a lot, if the starting chapters could be fixed it would help alot
I really like the story but dear god author please don’t make it into one huge chunk of text!!!! Lots of readers hate that and might even drop it.
揭示劇透
Hey thank you author for the relaxing and wholesome story so far. I love the main character and his way show affectionate, care and a bit of a understanding towards his Pokémon even the ones that is considered the weakest Pokémon in video game and tv series. Your storytelling and writing is on point and I hope you enjoy making this story more than we (the readers) enjoyed reading it. And to those who want to have a relaxing and casual reading come to “Pokémon: A New Path” it the story you are looking for.
I would say I’m having a lot of fun reading this, it is like a slow, casual, farm life vibe with occasional cooking.
This story is very interesting. Light and interesting to read, I hope you will continue author!! We hope to see many great dishes for his companions!!
Attention, potential readers! If you're looking for a fun and unique take on the Pokémon world, check out this fan fiction. It's a translation of a Chinese story that features a culinary twist on Pokémon training. I've personally edited the translation to ensure a smooth and enjoyable reading experience. While the original story may have had some inconsistencies, this version is clean and suitable for all audiences.
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a lovely and peaceful pokemon story with light gamer elements that reminds me of stardew valley.
Really good read for chilling out and enjoying the moment,also good reference to games like stardew valley and harvest moon
[img=Out of it][img=More pls][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Speechless][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Smitten][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]
I would've loved to give this wholesome, heartwarming story 5 stars but I can still see a few inconsistencies in the writing such as mixing up the Pokemon occasionally. This is otherwise an amazing read if you like more slice of life with fantastical elements and a side dish of cooking! Would definitely recommend!
As far as I've seen this is one of the best slice of life / farm life Pokemon fan fic. Its pacing is just right world background is great. And I really fell in love with how the author portrays the cute side of the pokemon. Plus the author is constantly updating overall 5/5 stars would recommend
wow,,, perfect translation paired with a nice heartwarming pokemon fanfic, which can cause an emersive reading not realizing the passing of time.
This is just the perfect story I needed to clear up my mind .Just a slice of life story with cute pokemon and a calm farm , a change from the serious and realistic pokemon fic where there is danger everywhere
A good pokemon FF very relaxing [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
this story was surprisingly heartwarming and chill. I Found myself smiling a lot while reading it.The personalities of the Pokemon are nice and the mc is actually a character and not some walking Chinese troupe .The writing quality so far has been good , so let's see where this story goes
great translation non of those very hard to read text you see in mtls and also no Chinese supremacy also consistent update pace... I like it very much, keep updating and I hope author won't drop it... More stones to you 🤩🤩🤩
incredible story, updates often and I really like the characters, give it a chance
So far the story is going well, a good progression, and shows a fun point of view about the Pokémon world, I'm looking forward to seeing where this fanfic goes.
Stardew Valley (or any other farming games) + Pokemon in Paldea Region. I was disappointed by how buggy Scarlet and Violet was and I only had the will to keep going until I got Ceruledge, but this ff sorta made me want to pick up my Switch and do a replay. Just imagine Farming Game progression and add the Pokemon factor. Currently at chapter 38 and it's going at an alright pace, tbh for farming type ffs I'm more accustomed to a slower pace but the current pace is fine. Pokemon ffs that go for the farming route typically snowball fast so I hope the author can do well in controlling that in the future. Am currently enjoying the chapters so far.
amazing ff, quality is nice, i wish you continue this without dropping it, 🥰
So far the stories been great. I like the fact that you use harvest moon as a reference for the farming related stuff is a nice touch. Try some mining when you have time. I remember when I played harvest moon that mining was also one of the ways I made money for upgrades and ore is highly priced in the harvest moon games. Also, when just fishing for something try to introduce some training for the Pokemon. The character can also have some hounds like boltund or Stoutland even Arcanine to help patrol the ranch. Overall, aside from a few suggestions the story has been great so far.
Text wall at the beginning chapters (1-13) but gets better later, interesting read and i think it resembles stardew valley a lot, if the starting chapters could be fixed it would help alot
I really like the story but dear god author please don’t make it into one huge chunk of text!!!! Lots of readers hate that and might even drop it.
揭示劇透 Hey thank you author for the relaxing and wholesome story so far. I love the main character and his way show affectionate, care and a bit of a understanding towards his Pokémon even the ones that is considered the weakest Pokémon in video game and tv series. Your storytelling and writing is on point and I hope you enjoy making this story more than we (the readers) enjoyed reading it. And to those who want to have a relaxing and casual reading come to “Pokémon: A New Path” it the story you are looking for.
I would say I’m having a lot of fun reading this, it is like a slow, casual, farm life vibe with occasional cooking.
This story is very interesting. Light and interesting to read, I hope you will continue author!! We hope to see many great dishes for his companions!!
Attention, potential readers! If you're looking for a fun and unique take on the Pokémon world, check out this fan fiction. It's a translation of a Chinese story that features a culinary twist on Pokémon training. I've personally edited the translation to ensure a smooth and enjoyable reading experience. While the original story may have had some inconsistencies, this version is clean and suitable for all audiences.