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The novel is quite good, and I got hooked on the story. I hope the translator will be kind enough to provide a link to the original source. I want to read the raws---I can't wait!
If you want to read this, know that it's a story about Targaryens in which it takes 243 chapters to have dragons, extremely drawn out and with unnecessary plots, it's not bad, but unfortunately while the MC does all the hard work, Daenerys keeps taking credit for no reason, so read at your own risk.
揭示劇透
Amazing story, the author put a lot of effort into fleshing out the world to build a really good fanfic. The only downside was that the last dozen or so chapters where a little sporadic and annoying to get through but the ending was satisfying.
Honestly, I usually dont have much hope for translated chinese fanfictions, they usually devolve into absurd, nonsense stories that arent even written or paced right, but this is actually very fucking good. Props to both the author and the translator.
Very good translation. I really liked your work. I look forward to your next translations. And I have to add something more for the 140 characters, Bazinga. 🗿
揭示劇透
Writing Quality 5/5 Stability Updates 5/5 Story Dev 3/5 Character Design 3/5 World Background 3/5 Total Score: 3.8 A moderately entertaining FF. Although the MC's decisions are sometimes seemingly stupid, and there are several plot extensions, the story development has some entertaining parts. However, as the chapters progress, the quality of the writing begins to progressively decline until it becomes unrecognizable symbols of automatic literature. The development of the characters is more or less simple, and their interactions sometimes do not follow a contextual logic. The ending is quite regrettable and rushed, but it is a story to pass the time, so turn off your brain and enjoy.
Even though the ending is not very epic, the overall story is quite exciting and the additional story is quite satisfying because you know the consequences of the Targaryen dynasty after several hundred years.
揭示劇透
It was a good story, I didn't expect the final chapters to be released all at once lol the ending is also a reference to the iconic scenes in the story as Dany doesn't know that the mc has a system whenever he dies then the bastard is resurrected again, it was an iconic final in a way
Thank you for the translation, it was truly a great translation and one of the best fanfictions I have read with more than 500 chapters. Viserys did truly incredible things, most of what he did was not actually possible, he was an ordinary mercenary, but the course of the story made it feel like it really happened. The translation was really good, almost all of China Thanks to this, a refined fanfiction has been created with elements removed.
The story is good even though the story is slow but it doesn't matter. [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
The book is clearly written by Chinese people, rigid, monotonous, with unnecessary plots in which a character, just because he is a magician, becomes an immovable wall in a dramatic and theatrical way. Everything turns out well because he is the protagonist and that's all, It doesn't matter if he tell someone like Illyrio everything that will happen in the future at the beginning of the ff, nothing will go wrong because... Well, he's Chinese, why would his decision bring problems in the future? The protagonist's decisions and way of being slowly become submissive and frustrating, I mean, he don't kneels down to greet just because it would look weird being GoT but it's close. And in terms of emotions, Well, the book is entertaining, but that's all, there's nothing more. There's no romance, there's no satisfaction in winning a battle, there's no euphoria even when dragons are born... But it's entertaining.
the best chinese ff of asoiaf i have ever read..........................................................................................................................
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I am really liking this ff. Looking forward for more chapters!.........…….……….........................................…..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very interesting fanfanic 🥰👍...........................................................................................................................................................
The novel can be considered very good for a Chinese translation. No nationalism, rasism... but recently it has become boring... it was entertaining till bravose arc.... the quality of content is slightly reduced after that.
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come on bro it's already 170 chapters in and there is no sign of a dragon or iron throne . he isn't even westeros . move it
espero puedas seguir traduciendo esto y puedas apoyar al autor para que lo complete
An amazing fic, great story telling, however you do have to read a bit carefully otherwise u can get confused with the timeline of it all. I do love the fact that plot points take time to get resolved and that keeps the reader engaged.
best fanfiction I know of on GOT good pacing of the story and lot of potential. looking forward to more chaps
it's already 150 chapters but still doesn't have an army on its own and still relying on fighting alone every time having that much money but doesn't form an army even though knowing what's happening on the future
It is one of the better translations of a Chinese fiction. Little to no propaganda and only a few Chinese clichés. Grammar is also good so far, as well as the pace for the next new chapters. Unfortunately, I find the story has a very slow pace. MC has a system which is ok. I can recommend it.
OP Mc + Dragons + System... What more do you need to read this book. The problem with this fic is the occasional chinese manner of speech. So if you can ignore that then this fic is for you. Also GoT have very few fics, so please complete this book if possible. I am supporting you with my power stones.
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Hello I want ask how many chapters are there in the original fic? ………………………………..……………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………..……………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………..……………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………..………………………………………………………………………………..
The novel is quite good, and I got hooked on the story. I hope the translator will be kind enough to provide a link to the original source. I want to read the raws---I can't wait!
If you want to read this, know that it's a story about Targaryens in which it takes 243 chapters to have dragons, extremely drawn out and with unnecessary plots, it's not bad, but unfortunately while the MC does all the hard work, Daenerys keeps taking credit for no reason, so read at your own risk.
揭示劇透 Amazing story, the author put a lot of effort into fleshing out the world to build a really good fanfic. The only downside was that the last dozen or so chapters where a little sporadic and annoying to get through but the ending was satisfying.
Honestly, I usually dont have much hope for translated chinese fanfictions, they usually devolve into absurd, nonsense stories that arent even written or paced right, but this is actually very fucking good. Props to both the author and the translator.
Very good translation. I really liked your work. I look forward to your next translations. And I have to add something more for the 140 characters, Bazinga. 🗿
揭示劇透 Writing Quality 5/5 Stability Updates 5/5 Story Dev 3/5 Character Design 3/5 World Background 3/5 Total Score: 3.8 A moderately entertaining FF. Although the MC's decisions are sometimes seemingly stupid, and there are several plot extensions, the story development has some entertaining parts. However, as the chapters progress, the quality of the writing begins to progressively decline until it becomes unrecognizable symbols of automatic literature. The development of the characters is more or less simple, and their interactions sometimes do not follow a contextual logic. The ending is quite regrettable and rushed, but it is a story to pass the time, so turn off your brain and enjoy.
Even though the ending is not very epic, the overall story is quite exciting and the additional story is quite satisfying because you know the consequences of the Targaryen dynasty after several hundred years.
揭示劇透 It was a good story, I didn't expect the final chapters to be released all at once lol the ending is also a reference to the iconic scenes in the story as Dany doesn't know that the mc has a system whenever he dies then the bastard is resurrected again, it was an iconic final in a way
Thank you for the translation, it was truly a great translation and one of the best fanfictions I have read with more than 500 chapters. Viserys did truly incredible things, most of what he did was not actually possible, he was an ordinary mercenary, but the course of the story made it feel like it really happened. The translation was really good, almost all of China Thanks to this, a refined fanfiction has been created with elements removed.
The story is good even though the story is slow but it doesn't matter. [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
The book is clearly written by Chinese people, rigid, monotonous, with unnecessary plots in which a character, just because he is a magician, becomes an immovable wall in a dramatic and theatrical way. Everything turns out well because he is the protagonist and that's all, It doesn't matter if he tell someone like Illyrio everything that will happen in the future at the beginning of the ff, nothing will go wrong because... Well, he's Chinese, why would his decision bring problems in the future? The protagonist's decisions and way of being slowly become submissive and frustrating, I mean, he don't kneels down to greet just because it would look weird being GoT but it's close. And in terms of emotions, Well, the book is entertaining, but that's all, there's nothing more. There's no romance, there's no satisfaction in winning a battle, there's no euphoria even when dragons are born... But it's entertaining.
the best chinese ff of asoiaf i have ever read..........................................................................................................................
👍🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥👍🔥👍👍🔥👍🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥👍🔥👍🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥👍🔥👍🔥👍🔥👍👍🔥👍🔥🔥👍🔥👍🔥👍👍👍🔥👍🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥👍👍🔥👍👍👍🔥👍🔥👍🔥🔥👍👍🔥👍👍🔥👍🔥👍🔥👍👍🔥🔥👍👍👍🔥👍🔥👍👍
I am really liking this ff. Looking forward for more chapters!.........…….……….........................................…..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very interesting fanfanic 🥰👍...........................................................................................................................................................
The novel can be considered very good for a Chinese translation. No nationalism, rasism... but recently it has become boring... it was entertaining till bravose arc.... the quality of content is slightly reduced after that.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
come on bro it's already 170 chapters in and there is no sign of a dragon or iron throne . he isn't even westeros . move it
espero puedas seguir traduciendo esto y puedas apoyar al autor para que lo complete
An amazing fic, great story telling, however you do have to read a bit carefully otherwise u can get confused with the timeline of it all. I do love the fact that plot points take time to get resolved and that keeps the reader engaged.
best fanfiction I know of on GOT good pacing of the story and lot of potential. looking forward to more chaps
it's already 150 chapters but still doesn't have an army on its own and still relying on fighting alone every time having that much money but doesn't form an army even though knowing what's happening on the future
It is one of the better translations of a Chinese fiction. Little to no propaganda and only a few Chinese clichés. Grammar is also good so far, as well as the pace for the next new chapters. Unfortunately, I find the story has a very slow pace. MC has a system which is ok. I can recommend it.
OP Mc + Dragons + System... What more do you need to read this book. The problem with this fic is the occasional chinese manner of speech. So if you can ignore that then this fic is for you. Also GoT have very few fics, so please complete this book if possible. I am supporting you with my power stones.
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Hello I want ask how many chapters are there in the original fic? ………………………………..……………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………..……………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………..……………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………..………………………………………………………………………………..