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Muito bom espero que possa continuar com a tradução 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It's a good work, the translation is good, but there are some missing chapters that makes some scenes disconnected, it's overall a good job. If you could post the missing chapters would be better
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Okay so this fanfic has nothing to do with the MC. This is basically a retelling of the original story with minor details added in.
good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.
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Muito bom espero que possa continuar com a tradução 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It's a good work, the translation is good, but there are some missing chapters that makes some scenes disconnected, it's overall a good job. If you could post the missing chapters would be better
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Okay so this fanfic has nothing to do with the MC. This is basically a retelling of the original story with minor details added in.
good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.good job, I really liked this book.
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fabulous. :3