2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
LV 15 ![Badge]()
I have very high hopes for this story however it has started off wonderfully, the story seems fleshed out and has good suspense so far with where it's at, And I can't wait to see what's next.
LV 14 ![Badge]()
I love the story and how Messmer is portrayed so far and I hope that this will keep up because if it does it is going to be fantastic
LV 15 ![Badge]()
I have very high hopes for this story however it has started off wonderfully, the story seems fleshed out and has good suspense so far with where it's at, And I can't wait to see what's next.
I love the story and how Messmer is portrayed so far and I hope that this will keep up because if it does it is going to be fantastic