3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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The premise of the story is good, the pacing, the interaction is nice too, so please continue! :D
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寫檢討The premise of the story is good, the pacing, the interaction is nice too, so please continue! :D
The premise of the story is good, the pacing, the interaction is nice too, so please continue! :D