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I'm here to support you, your fic will go a long way buddy... even more so with this beautiful cover you've put on it kekw- Keep going with the story because I like the way it's going, success to you author-chan.
It's been a good story with good development of the characters' relationship with the MC
jajaja, no creo que pueda aguantar la vergüenza ya me imagino. Al Mc diciendo cosas lasciva como si fuera algo casual y darkness colorada como un tomate
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Simple explanation..after i read all the chapters..from beginning until the recent one , mc is pathetic,simp,call rias master ,lowing his head .. sacrifice his heart for dragon heart... pathetic.. Doesn't have human arrogant and pride ..No, i correct my words..he don't have our pride and arrogant.. All of us ..if transmigrate or reincarnated will see everything in higher perspective even thought start as weak person...but we never bow down...lol even in our earth not many bow down towards god,human is arrogant...only pray when in difficulty..but most of time ,we didn't even remember god . but mc showing the worse ever i can see.... Blindly accept confession from fallen again...then try to call sacred gear for the first time...s#it ,he can try call it at home first ...but he try when fight ..D#mb decision i ever see, like 10 year old kids
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After reading 57 chapters, I was able to form a solid opinion about this fic, and that opinion can be summed up as high potential, average result. The fic had a lot of potential from the beginning to be an incredible story, but it was severely damaged due to the thoughtless writing. Probably due to the daily chapters, the quality was greatly damaged in several parts of the fic. Throughout the story, many decisions that range from questionable to downright stupid are made. The kind of thing you don't find in a fic that was written with more care or has a decent beta reader. Despite these problems, the concept is still interesting and the fic also has good chapters that serve to balance out these negative points a bit. The end result is a fic with an incredible release schedule, but which lacks quality and requires patience from the reader to endure all the problems that this story has. Conclusion: This could be a decent read if you're the kind of reader who can turn off your brain and simply enjoy the story, but without that ability this fic is likely to end up being a very frustrating read.
hello i just added this story to my collection and have few questions about it, and if you will be so kind to answer them?
Rias, Akeno, Koneko, Rossweiss, Asia, Kuroka, Yasaka and Kunou(once she becomes 15 at least), Serafall, Sona, Runeas, Ophis, Xenovia, Seekvaira, Ravel, Le Fay, Ingvild Leviathan, Gabriel
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I wasn't expecting anything of this novel when because of the romance system but i like that the author is not rushing the events so well done a good novel for me 👍🐸
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I am so confused is this a translation or an original work ??? Also great story I definitely recommend it [img=update][img=update][img=update] 👉🏿👌🏼
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I'm just here to support my great friend, I gave some initial support to the idea (yes, I'll use my merits and demand this, after all I'm a big reader!) But about the story: Just read it, it's good and I highly recommend it! Just have fun
I'm here to support you, your fic will go a long way buddy... even more so with this beautiful cover you've put on it kekw- Keep going with the story because I like the way it's going, success to you author-chan.
It's been a good story with good development of the characters' relationship with the MC
jajaja, no creo que pueda aguantar la vergüenza ya me imagino. Al Mc diciendo cosas lasciva como si fuera algo casual y darkness colorada como un tomate
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揭示劇透 Simple explanation..after i read all the chapters..from beginning until the recent one , mc is pathetic,simp,call rias master ,lowing his head .. sacrifice his heart for dragon heart... pathetic.. Doesn't have human arrogant and pride ..No, i correct my words..he don't have our pride and arrogant.. All of us ..if transmigrate or reincarnated will see everything in higher perspective even thought start as weak person...but we never bow down...lol even in our earth not many bow down towards god,human is arrogant...only pray when in difficulty..but most of time ,we didn't even remember god . but mc showing the worse ever i can see.... Blindly accept confession from fallen again...then try to call sacred gear for the first time...s#it ,he can try call it at home first ...but he try when fight ..D#mb decision i ever see, like 10 year old kids
揭示劇透 After reading 57 chapters, I was able to form a solid opinion about this fic, and that opinion can be summed up as high potential, average result. The fic had a lot of potential from the beginning to be an incredible story, but it was severely damaged due to the thoughtless writing. Probably due to the daily chapters, the quality was greatly damaged in several parts of the fic. Throughout the story, many decisions that range from questionable to downright stupid are made. The kind of thing you don't find in a fic that was written with more care or has a decent beta reader. Despite these problems, the concept is still interesting and the fic also has good chapters that serve to balance out these negative points a bit. The end result is a fic with an incredible release schedule, but which lacks quality and requires patience from the reader to endure all the problems that this story has. Conclusion: This could be a decent read if you're the kind of reader who can turn off your brain and simply enjoy the story, but without that ability this fic is likely to end up being a very frustrating read.
hello i just added this story to my collection and have few questions about it, and if you will be so kind to answer them?
Rias, Akeno, Koneko, Rossweiss, Asia, Kuroka, Yasaka and Kunou(once she becomes 15 at least), Serafall, Sona, Runeas, Ophis, Xenovia, Seekvaira, Ravel, Le Fay, Ingvild Leviathan, Gabriel
Good ..........................................................................................................................................................................................
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I wasn't expecting anything of this novel when because of the romance system but i like that the author is not rushing the events so well done a good novel for me 👍🐸
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I am so confused is this a translation or an original work ??? Also great story I definitely recommend it [img=update][img=update][img=update] 👉🏿👌🏼
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I'm just here to support my great friend, I gave some initial support to the idea (yes, I'll use my merits and demand this, after all I'm a big reader!) But about the story: Just read it, it's good and I highly recommend it! Just have fun