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Hello, I am [Rishi pandey], the owner of NOVELARC, and I’m excited to offer an incredible opportunity for talented writers like you! We invite you to join our platform to publish your novel or fanfiction. As part of our program, we offer $4 per thousand views your chapters receive. Views are tracked and counted every Sunday or on the 1st day of each month, ensuring accurate and timely payouts. To maximize your earnings, you’ll need to bring your own readers to the platform. The more views your chapters generate, the higher your payout will be! If this opportunity interests you, please contact me through: Instagram: [yurichi_adrenaline] Discord: [earth_19998] Alternatively, feel free to share your preferred method of communication, and I will reach out to you directly. Looking forward to collaborating with passionate writers and bringing your stories to readers worldwide! Best regards, [Rishi pandey] NOVELARC
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Buen desarrollo de las relaciones ni muy lento no muy rápido, ademas las miembros del harén son puras cosa que no muchos aprecian ya sea lectores o autores.
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dropped book in chapter 1 already has powers of superman mc already rich nothing really to build on so a waste of time
My opinion of this story might or might not mean much. But I think that it deserves respect for the fact that the storyline is better than some other system stories.
Soy español y me encanta esta fan fic, pero tarda mucho en actualizar, alguien sabe cada cuanto se actualiza? Sigue trabajando duro está muy bueno
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Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about a story in which a person died and was reborn as a symbiote. And then he decided to merge with Parker from the Gwen Spider universe.
It's a good read. Story revolves around MC. Not like those everyday common fiction where, MC fights without reason and boast about his strength, and their main goal always is to how to stop Thanos's snap!
I recently started reading this novel and was pleasantly surprised. The unique ability introduced in the story caught my attention, and I’m looking forward to seeing how it develops in future chapters. While it’s not without flaws, it doesn’t deserve the overly negative reviews from some readers. There are certainly worse stories out there, and this one shows real promise. I reccomend reading this for it’s uniqueness
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The dialogues and the way things unfold don't feel natural. You can read it without much thought to pass the time. But if you want to follow along and read every part with interest, I don't recommend it.
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this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan
This novel deserved to be report and remove out of Webnovel. The character in here is dumb including tony stark. The mc was also stupid. it's not worth reading this just find some random fanfiction to read.
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It's a great story the problem is the grammar, but the story wise it's Great 👍.
it reads like a tml I can see that there was a lot of correction but I'm pretty sure there a story that is one for one like this only it's was first in English and the system was different along with the powers and the Mc name In my option it's not good
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Apart from the confusion in gender of mc the story is developing well but I've got the feeling I've read this somewhere before
Tbh i would say since ur only 15 chaps in go bak n reread ur chapters and fix the gender situation
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Good story you need to work on how do you call the main character you keep saying he then she
Hello, I am [Rishi pandey], the owner of NOVELARC, and I’m excited to offer an incredible opportunity for talented writers like you! We invite you to join our platform to publish your novel or fanfiction. As part of our program, we offer $4 per thousand views your chapters receive. Views are tracked and counted every Sunday or on the 1st day of each month, ensuring accurate and timely payouts. To maximize your earnings, you’ll need to bring your own readers to the platform. The more views your chapters generate, the higher your payout will be! If this opportunity interests you, please contact me through: Instagram: [yurichi_adrenaline] Discord: [earth_19998] Alternatively, feel free to share your preferred method of communication, and I will reach out to you directly. Looking forward to collaborating with passionate writers and bringing your stories to readers worldwide! Best regards, [Rishi pandey] NOVELARC
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Buen desarrollo de las relaciones ni muy lento no muy rápido, ademas las miembros del harén son puras cosa que no muchos aprecian ya sea lectores o autores.
揭示劇透 dropped book in chapter 1 already has powers of superman mc already rich nothing really to build on so a waste of time
My opinion of this story might or might not mean much. But I think that it deserves respect for the fact that the storyline is better than some other system stories.
Soy español y me encanta esta fan fic, pero tarda mucho en actualizar, alguien sabe cada cuanto se actualiza? Sigue trabajando duro está muy bueno
揭示劇透 Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about a story in which a person died and was reborn as a symbiote. And then he decided to merge with Parker from the Gwen Spider universe.
It's a good read. Story revolves around MC. Not like those everyday common fiction where, MC fights without reason and boast about his strength, and their main goal always is to how to stop Thanos's snap!
I recently started reading this novel and was pleasantly surprised. The unique ability introduced in the story caught my attention, and I’m looking forward to seeing how it develops in future chapters. While it’s not without flaws, it doesn’t deserve the overly negative reviews from some readers. There are certainly worse stories out there, and this one shows real promise. I reccomend reading this for it’s uniqueness
re zzz conseguir la plantilla de superman de la edad de plata al toque.👎👎👎👎
The dialogues and the way things unfold don't feel natural. You can read it without much thought to pass the time. But if you want to follow along and read every part with interest, I don't recommend it.
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揭示劇透 this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan
This novel deserved to be report and remove out of Webnovel. The character in here is dumb including tony stark. The mc was also stupid. it's not worth reading this just find some random fanfiction to read.
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It's a great story the problem is the grammar, but the story wise it's Great 👍.
it reads like a tml I can see that there was a lot of correction but I'm pretty sure there a story that is one for one like this only it's was first in English and the system was different along with the powers and the Mc name In my option it's not good
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Apart from the confusion in gender of mc the story is developing well but I've got the feeling I've read this somewhere before
Tbh i would say since ur only 15 chaps in go bak n reread ur chapters and fix the gender situation
Pk tout le monde écoute le MC comme si c'était un gourou [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Good story you need to work on how do you call the main character you keep saying he then she
Sad it’s over but overall I loved it, just wished it was complete.