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I'm a little disappointed with the story. What did I expect when I started reading this fanfic? Well, I expected a greater focus on the romance between the protagonist and Tsunade, but there is almost no interaction between the two, except when the author needs the protagonist to receive a new power or ability to help with the plot. The story didn't need to be just about the romance, as that would be boring, but I expected more, not just something to be used to give the protagonist powers and abilities when convenient. But the story isn't bad, it just wasn't what I expected to read when I saw the title. I wrote this comment using Google Translate.
It's a great story, but I read the MTL and the ending felt lacking and rushed. I hope the translator can complete the story because it has a lot of potential. Even if nothing changes, it still has a good conclusion. However, I hope the protagonist conquers the Shinobi world. It felt like the early chapters were a waste since he already had the groundwork done.
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en un inicio me gusto y hasta el capitulo en el que lo deje no esta mal pero tiene 2 conceptos que no me terminan de gustar 1 el intento de "modernizar" el echo que el mc crea que todo el sistema construido en la historia original esta mal y que ponga por delante las reglas de gobierno o métodos usados hoy en dia como el pináculo de los métodos de gobierno no me termina de agradar por que en mi opinión la forma de gobierno ya establecido forma parte fundamental del trasfondo de la historia ya creada y que un fanfic lo intente cambiar creo que se aleja demasiado del concepto original 2 la demora en la relación el titulo te hace creer que vas a ver la historia del mc y tsunade como un foco principal en esta historia pero esto no es del todo correcto en este caso si bien hay una relación entre ellos recure mucho a la perspectiva oriental, si bien no es tan grave como otros que hay que esperar 500 capítulos hasta el primer beso es mediana mente exasperante como desde el inicio hasta el capitulo 100 la relación entre los dos prácticamente se mantiene estancada en un mismo punto
A hidden gem! Even though it is a chinese novel translation, the story so far is pretty interesting. The romance between MC and Tsunade is fluffy and wholesome. Also, the translator updates very frequently (80 chapters in 2 days!) and its quality is decent. Keep up the good work!
The story lines are interesting.You should read to chapter 10 to decide what you want to do with this fanfiction
Amazing fanfic cant wait to See more and IT seems to be Not a Harem [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
intrigued by the synopsis. Who gave the Hyuga Gattling gun and Akatsuki becomes communist. Dafuq.......................................................
Deserved to be good rating. The story is interesting. The plot is good. The Main character is simple but drawing a lot of plot behind the scene. Im impressed with this story and it deserved to be praised.
I'm a little disappointed with the story. What did I expect when I started reading this fanfic? Well, I expected a greater focus on the romance between the protagonist and Tsunade, but there is almost no interaction between the two, except when the author needs the protagonist to receive a new power or ability to help with the plot. The story didn't need to be just about the romance, as that would be boring, but I expected more, not just something to be used to give the protagonist powers and abilities when convenient. But the story isn't bad, it just wasn't what I expected to read when I saw the title. I wrote this comment using Google Translate.
It's a great story, but I read the MTL and the ending felt lacking and rushed. I hope the translator can complete the story because it has a lot of potential. Even if nothing changes, it still has a good conclusion. However, I hope the protagonist conquers the Shinobi world. It felt like the early chapters were a waste since he already had the groundwork done.
揭示劇透 en un inicio me gusto y hasta el capitulo en el que lo deje no esta mal pero tiene 2 conceptos que no me terminan de gustar 1 el intento de "modernizar" el echo que el mc crea que todo el sistema construido en la historia original esta mal y que ponga por delante las reglas de gobierno o métodos usados hoy en dia como el pináculo de los métodos de gobierno no me termina de agradar por que en mi opinión la forma de gobierno ya establecido forma parte fundamental del trasfondo de la historia ya creada y que un fanfic lo intente cambiar creo que se aleja demasiado del concepto original 2 la demora en la relación el titulo te hace creer que vas a ver la historia del mc y tsunade como un foco principal en esta historia pero esto no es del todo correcto en este caso si bien hay una relación entre ellos recure mucho a la perspectiva oriental, si bien no es tan grave como otros que hay que esperar 500 capítulos hasta el primer beso es mediana mente exasperante como desde el inicio hasta el capitulo 100 la relación entre los dos prácticamente se mantiene estancada en un mismo punto
A hidden gem! Even though it is a chinese novel translation, the story so far is pretty interesting. The romance between MC and Tsunade is fluffy and wholesome. Also, the translator updates very frequently (80 chapters in 2 days!) and its quality is decent. Keep up the good work!
The story lines are interesting.You should read to chapter 10 to decide what you want to do with this fanfiction
Amazing fanfic cant wait to See more and IT seems to be Not a Harem [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
intrigued by the synopsis. Who gave the Hyuga Gattling gun and Akatsuki becomes communist. Dafuq.......................................................
Deserved to be good rating. The story is interesting. The plot is good. The Main character is simple but drawing a lot of plot behind the scene. Im impressed with this story and it deserved to be praised.
