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you are doing a fantastic job. but I wanna ask if it's possible for you to write a fanfic about Ronaldo or R9 please author is it possible [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
Very good story. Looking at the story from the coach's perspective, it's amazing and seeing some great players who are united in one club. What a great story!
This fic is interesting. I had no hope for a fic based on football coaching to be as good as this one No super op power, mc is actually smart, competent and reliable. The games are described really well as far as i have read and the character interaction is good
it's an interesting book and I hope you can translate a CR7 fanfic if there's any at all you're doing a good job with this one hope you translate any CR7 it will be much appreciated thanks
I absolutely love this book, Great book author. Like really really good(Don't mind me glazing a bit 😅) but you're writing is very good and I love where the story is going. Very underated book. So that's my review
Excellent novel. Excellent translation. Good and great reading experience overall. (OG work and the TL) I've read many stories (just seen my profile btw this one is new) and this one is one of the best if not the best. One of the rarest CN WN where the protagonist is not a daughter slave. In fact he had only one child and it's a boy also father loves the son. Automatic 5 star plus. Although protagonist's immediate family dynamics and husband-wife, father-son relationships were not flushed out but at least it is not bad or any other CN lvl atrocious. Story is meh but for wn it is great. From team, club building to management. Many thanks to the Translator for introducing this wonderful gem. Now take all of the power stones.
Great story. Of course it's not a perfecf story but it's a lot better than other stories we have on webnovel. The story development is logical, with high and lows fot the main caracter and it's great.
Really enjoyed reading this. The story is well written, the details about the teams, players, leagues, training, tactics are all really amazing. Recommend it to anyone that enjoys football.
not exactly a fan of Football and find 99% of the names unrecognizable, but hey this was quite enjoyable pastime. P.S. The MC is 25 yo. in case you wanna know.
A good book about football manager career but too much of club politics and less of player interactions in football match
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An actually well developing and expressed football manager story. The golden finger is well balanced and the main character is actually insteresting. Including the side characters for the most part. However, it does leave a number of things to be desired in terms of exploring other side characters. Also, its kind of weird how a lot of stuff are just skimmed through but i guess that’s for pacing, but even still, that stuff thats skimmed through could have been opportunity to further explore other side characters like I prevously mentioned. Well, regardless of my complaints, its a good story. I like it a fair bit being on 150+ chapters already
Leí esta novela antes y tengo que aclarar que fue sumamente BUENA en Mayúsculas, lo mejor de la novela fue en la Etapa del Nápoli. El personaje durante los juegos fue raro, ya que llamo mucha atención, incluso mas que los Jugadores
The story is actually really interesting. I would recommend it to anyone that's into football stories .
A good novel with a reincarnated person as a coach with a gift which is not super OP but still good enough. Translation is good although there are some quality issues but not that much just some sentences(1-3) in a chapter. Overall a good read for a football fan.
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Just found this book but loving it. Hope you keep going. Loving the book and the translation is good. Thank You.
Noice novel. Story is entertaining. BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB
The author has been doing very good soccer novels for a long time, although this one is my favorite. Very good translation, keep it up. [img=Cries]
good read great plot, author is a Ronaldo fan. tho he respect Messi too. no Chinese supremacy or sum like that. wholesome romance. all in all 9.8/10
This is my final review. This is a gem no doubt. One of the few great quality Chinese translations. For the nuances, the quality reduced a bit at around 100th chapter but after that, the translations improved alot. Story good, character is likable, competent and relatable. The development of the story, other characters and their interactions has been played out way WAY better than i expected. Won't say much, i enjoyed this alot
you are doing a fantastic job. but I wanna ask if it's possible for you to write a fanfic about Ronaldo or R9 please author is it possible [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
Very good story. Looking at the story from the coach's perspective, it's amazing and seeing some great players who are united in one club. What a great story!
This fic is interesting. I had no hope for a fic based on football coaching to be as good as this one No super op power, mc is actually smart, competent and reliable. The games are described really well as far as i have read and the character interaction is good
it's an interesting book and I hope you can translate a CR7 fanfic if there's any at all you're doing a good job with this one hope you translate any CR7 it will be much appreciated thanks
I absolutely love this book, Great book author. Like really really good(Don't mind me glazing a bit 😅) but you're writing is very good and I love where the story is going. Very underated book. So that's my review
Excellent novel. Excellent translation. Good and great reading experience overall. (OG work and the TL) I've read many stories (just seen my profile btw this one is new) and this one is one of the best if not the best. One of the rarest CN WN where the protagonist is not a daughter slave. In fact he had only one child and it's a boy also father loves the son. Automatic 5 star plus. Although protagonist's immediate family dynamics and husband-wife, father-son relationships were not flushed out but at least it is not bad or any other CN lvl atrocious. Story is meh but for wn it is great. From team, club building to management. Many thanks to the Translator for introducing this wonderful gem. Now take all of the power stones.
Great story. Of course it's not a perfecf story but it's a lot better than other stories we have on webnovel. The story development is logical, with high and lows fot the main caracter and it's great.
Really enjoyed reading this. The story is well written, the details about the teams, players, leagues, training, tactics are all really amazing. Recommend it to anyone that enjoys football.
not exactly a fan of Football and find 99% of the names unrecognizable, but hey this was quite enjoyable pastime. P.S. The MC is 25 yo. in case you wanna know.
A good book about football manager career but too much of club politics and less of player interactions in football match
Keep updating it,.............,.,.,.,.,.,.,...,.,., ......,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.., ,.,.,.,.,..,,..,.,.....,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,., , ...,.,,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOd strory i need more chapters..................................................................................................................................................................................
An actually well developing and expressed football manager story. The golden finger is well balanced and the main character is actually insteresting. Including the side characters for the most part. However, it does leave a number of things to be desired in terms of exploring other side characters. Also, its kind of weird how a lot of stuff are just skimmed through but i guess that’s for pacing, but even still, that stuff thats skimmed through could have been opportunity to further explore other side characters like I prevously mentioned. Well, regardless of my complaints, its a good story. I like it a fair bit being on 150+ chapters already
Leí esta novela antes y tengo que aclarar que fue sumamente BUENA en Mayúsculas, lo mejor de la novela fue en la Etapa del Nápoli. El personaje durante los juegos fue raro, ya que llamo mucha atención, incluso mas que los Jugadores
The story is actually really interesting. I would recommend it to anyone that's into football stories .
A good novel with a reincarnated person as a coach with a gift which is not super OP but still good enough. Translation is good although there are some quality issues but not that much just some sentences(1-3) in a chapter. Overall a good read for a football fan.
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Just found this book but loving it. Hope you keep going. Loving the book and the translation is good. Thank You.
Noice novel. Story is entertaining. BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB
The author has been doing very good soccer novels for a long time, although this one is my favorite. Very good translation, keep it up. [img=Cries]
good read great plot, author is a Ronaldo fan. tho he respect Messi too. no Chinese supremacy or sum like that. wholesome romance. all in all 9.8/10
This is my final review. This is a gem no doubt. One of the few great quality Chinese translations. For the nuances, the quality reduced a bit at around 100th chapter but after that, the translations improved alot. Story good, character is likable, competent and relatable. The development of the story, other characters and their interactions has been played out way WAY better than i expected. Won't say much, i enjoyed this alot