First!Hello author! I am here to give some ideas in early chapters!I loved the first chapter but what concerned me was the synopsis. Many people including me get an idea or the theme of your book through thr synopsis so just this sentence wasn't enough to get an idea.I started out with many mistakes and many authors recommended me that synopsis should be one of the most attrac tive parts. So I hope you will soon upload a proper synopsis.Over all, I would rate this now and I hopw to read more.Thank you. Keep up the hard work.
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First!Hello author! I am here to give some ideas in early chapters!I loved the first chapter but what concerned me was the synopsis. Many people including me get an idea or the theme of your book through thr synopsis so just this sentence wasn't enough to get an idea.I started out with many mistakes and many authors recommended me that synopsis should be one of the most attrac tive parts. So I hope you will soon upload a proper synopsis.Over all, I would rate this now and I hopw to read more.Thank you. Keep up the hard work.