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It was grate at the beggining. Like he was really psychiatrist and good salted fish but suddenly he started to act and mess around everywhere. I would rather see him countinue do counceling rather than running around and doing who know what shit.
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It's really good. Too bad the mc had a sudden change of personality. and when he met Hela, she turned into a loli and the mc was like loli this loli that. it's fkin creeping me out. I hope she turns into her original form later.
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The first 50 chapters are well translated but after 50 it’s drops off with poorly translated sentences that aren’t really logical and ruined the reading experience for me
Five stars for a wonderful work of art. I can't wait to see what happens next.............................................................................................................................
Story was very nice to read till chapter 62 approximately. This is a translation work and translation was very good till ch. 62 but now it's directly dropped to MTL level and it is barely readable. Lots of comments have mentioned this but there doesn't really appear to be any improvement now so unfortunately it's difficult to read now even if story is interesting.
Suprisingly good. I found no obvious racist shit like most chinese books. The story is intresting. Normally authors make up reasons as to why their mcs keep the plot on line with the original but in this book not playing the hero falls in line with the mcs character so it feels natural. Overall one of the better chinese books
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Me encanto, la verdad que esta muy bien traducido y la historia de por si es muy entretenida aparte de que tiene algunas frases interesantes que se nota la traduccion.
Honestly one better fan-fics i’ve read. good mc and story is interesting. Despite his strength the story isn’t boring and displays his use of powers in life well. Hope to see how far this goes and more updates in the future.
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This ff isn’t too bad, it seems a little fast pace romance wise. Overall the characters seem to be developing well and the world is the classic cinematic mcu. I do wonder about the ethics of a psychologist dating patients as i am pretty sure you would lose your medical license super fast.
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So far it is a very good read, an MC with personality, intelligent, mature, with almost nothing negative in him, there are vivid characters, developed relationships, although there are moments when it feels rushed but I suppose that is one's perception and ambiguous feeling. what you have at the moment and what the reader wants to believe that the character has, a very good reading of Marvel, I hope for more and I hope that it is not ruined with time travel, dimensions, etc.
It's a very good story and has great development. Please don't abandon the story. Note: I'm not good at English, sorry if something is written wrong.
this is a good story, I just hope that the author doesn't decide to just give up one day, and the mc is too overpowered i wonder how he will deal with this later in the story.
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in all the other marvel fanfics it's always about being a superhero and join them in their journeys so a fresh start like this one is always a welcome.
translation worth 5 star review, good translation even thought the chapters were short
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Look, if you fully turn off your brain then the plot is half decent. But you need to go full on brainless. Tl is good, everything else is average, a good time waste wish fulfillment, but nothing even remotely intelligent.
It was grate at the beggining. Like he was really psychiatrist and good salted fish but suddenly he started to act and mess around everywhere. I would rather see him countinue do counceling rather than running around and doing who know what shit.
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It's really good. Too bad the mc had a sudden change of personality. and when he met Hela, she turned into a loli and the mc was like loli this loli that. it's fkin creeping me out. I hope she turns into her original form later.
揭示劇透 The first 50 chapters are well translated but after 50 it’s drops off with poorly translated sentences that aren’t really logical and ruined the reading experience for me
Five stars for a wonderful work of art. I can't wait to see what happens next.............................................................................................................................
Story was very nice to read till chapter 62 approximately. This is a translation work and translation was very good till ch. 62 but now it's directly dropped to MTL level and it is barely readable. Lots of comments have mentioned this but there doesn't really appear to be any improvement now so unfortunately it's difficult to read now even if story is interesting.
Suprisingly good. I found no obvious racist shit like most chinese books. The story is intresting. Normally authors make up reasons as to why their mcs keep the plot on line with the original but in this book not playing the hero falls in line with the mcs character so it feels natural. Overall one of the better chinese books
Legalzin, da para passar o tempo Legalzin, da para passar o tempo Legalzin, da para passar o tempo Legalzin, da para passar o tempo Legalzin, da para passar o tempo Legalzin, da para passar o tempo Legalzin, da para passar o tempo
Me encanto, la verdad que esta muy bien traducido y la historia de por si es muy entretenida aparte de que tiene algunas frases interesantes que se nota la traduccion.
Honestly one better fan-fics i’ve read. good mc and story is interesting. Despite his strength the story isn’t boring and displays his use of powers in life well. Hope to see how far this goes and more updates in the future.
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This ff isn’t too bad, it seems a little fast pace romance wise. Overall the characters seem to be developing well and the world is the classic cinematic mcu. I do wonder about the ethics of a psychologist dating patients as i am pretty sure you would lose your medical license super fast.
What is the MTL title?[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
So far it is a very good read, an MC with personality, intelligent, mature, with almost nothing negative in him, there are vivid characters, developed relationships, although there are moments when it feels rushed but I suppose that is one's perception and ambiguous feeling. what you have at the moment and what the reader wants to believe that the character has, a very good reading of Marvel, I hope for more and I hope that it is not ruined with time travel, dimensions, etc.
It's a very good story and has great development. Please don't abandon the story. Note: I'm not good at English, sorry if something is written wrong.
this is a good story, I just hope that the author doesn't decide to just give up one day, and the mc is too overpowered i wonder how he will deal with this later in the story.
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in all the other marvel fanfics it's always about being a superhero and join them in their journeys so a fresh start like this one is always a welcome.
translation worth 5 star review, good translation even thought the chapters were short
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Look, if you fully turn off your brain then the plot is half decent. But you need to go full on brainless. Tl is good, everything else is average, a good time waste wish fulfillment, but nothing even remotely intelligent.