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it is an amazing story one of the few good stories based on genshin and iIhope to see future updates.
Slow & depressing story..... I have read 10 chapters for giving it a chance but it's taking too much time to start with a good kabooom!! Author has also added too much information dumb here and there while talking about extra things which are many times not related to plot. It's like a story with questions and answers explaining every fine detail as if someone will be taking a test for all this information.
Textbook FF(in a good way) MC actually changing the story~ Starting At Fontaine is the first for me.
Heres my unbiased review despite me being a staunch Furina/Focalors supporter, owning even C6 Neuvilette and C6 Furina herself. First off, I usually have low expectations for Genshin FanFics due to 80% of them being pretty horribly written (either with zero plot or the plot just diesn't make sense with the characters) So, writing quality is good, it can still be improved but its already pretty good. Story development makes sense, doesn't rush the plot and many of the characters involved like former Knave (that evil woman), Perrie and Clervie interacting with the MC all makes sense. Like there isn't any overwhelming plot points that didn't make sense. Character design for the MC and his allies are well built. Lorewise, it all connects with Fontaine's own lore and doesn't sound unbelievable. Updates wise, its goated great. But take a rest sometimes too and don't forget hydrate yourself with the quality Fontaine water. World background is great too. I love how the writer combined the Archon quest with their own plot.
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Honestly been loving this read. And I read lot of books, many of those are fanfics. This fanfic one of top favorites now!
I still haven't read it, just saying that after a long search, I found this genshin fan fic without harem.... finally I'll give a proper review once i read 20 chaps
salah satu fancfic genshin terbaik, aku suka dengan ceritanya. Aku aka membiarkanmu untuk memasak Penulis-san. HIDUP FURINA!, Furina SIMP disini. Jangan jatuhkan aku bersamamu sampai akhir........................................................
Well written. The dynamic between characters is quite engaging and the plot is quite decent.
Excellent story, constant updating and a well-developed Protagonist. I hope you don't rush Furina's romance with Tempest, doing something too superficial could ruin the story. I'm very curious to know how Tempest became Admiral, his future relationships with Fontaine's characters, and how he met Nahida.
It's really great, it's updated every day and the direction the story is developing and the main character is really good but can't you give Furina a reason for her loyalty,Did he see Furina as a release from his father's cruelty, or Or does Tempest think this is the right thing to do?Maybe he is loyal to Furina because she saved him when he was about to die But this is impossible because even before he was injured he had loyalty to Furina. even if he rebelled to save his sister and mother and restore his clan to its former glory, he was also thinking of Furina and worried that she wouldn't forgive him, it was a bit unreasonable for him to show such loyalty to someone he had only seen once in his life.
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you'll get an instant 5 star since you follow the rules, no harem with furina on it/no harem, and I like Furina, even though I can't play Genshin cuz of my stupid potato phone, I'm deeply in love with her character. So Kudos to you author! may the goddess smile at you.
Can I ask what AI generator did you use. ..........................................................................
so far interesting . keep up the good work pal.. from same author but.. I can't keep update my work!
Interesting Well written as well I'm intrigued I'm watching your future with great interests
Very interesting beginning I hope you continue it to see the extend of this story.
Biased review from the author himself. I created this Fanfic because I'm the biggest Furina simp ever, to the point that I didn't even finished the archon quest because I can't stand seeing her crying, this is my first fanfic, and my only fanfic, and I intend to finish it. No harem in this story, Furina is the sole love interest and one day... Focalors as well.
it is an amazing story one of the few good stories based on genshin and iIhope to see future updates.
Slow & depressing story..... I have read 10 chapters for giving it a chance but it's taking too much time to start with a good kabooom!! Author has also added too much information dumb here and there while talking about extra things which are many times not related to plot. It's like a story with questions and answers explaining every fine detail as if someone will be taking a test for all this information.
Textbook FF(in a good way) MC actually changing the story~ Starting At Fontaine is the first for me.
Heres my unbiased review despite me being a staunch Furina/Focalors supporter, owning even C6 Neuvilette and C6 Furina herself. First off, I usually have low expectations for Genshin FanFics due to 80% of them being pretty horribly written (either with zero plot or the plot just diesn't make sense with the characters) So, writing quality is good, it can still be improved but its already pretty good. Story development makes sense, doesn't rush the plot and many of the characters involved like former Knave (that evil woman), Perrie and Clervie interacting with the MC all makes sense. Like there isn't any overwhelming plot points that didn't make sense. Character design for the MC and his allies are well built. Lorewise, it all connects with Fontaine's own lore and doesn't sound unbelievable. Updates wise, its goated great. But take a rest sometimes too and don't forget hydrate yourself with the quality Fontaine water. World background is great too. I love how the writer combined the Archon quest with their own plot.
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Honestly been loving this read. And I read lot of books, many of those are fanfics. This fanfic one of top favorites now!
I still haven't read it, just saying that after a long search, I found this genshin fan fic without harem.... finally I'll give a proper review once i read 20 chaps
salah satu fancfic genshin terbaik, aku suka dengan ceritanya. Aku aka membiarkanmu untuk memasak Penulis-san. HIDUP FURINA!, Furina SIMP disini. Jangan jatuhkan aku bersamamu sampai akhir........................................................
Well written. The dynamic between characters is quite engaging and the plot is quite decent.
Excellent story, constant updating and a well-developed Protagonist. I hope you don't rush Furina's romance with Tempest, doing something too superficial could ruin the story. I'm very curious to know how Tempest became Admiral, his future relationships with Fontaine's characters, and how he met Nahida.
It's really great, it's updated every day and the direction the story is developing and the main character is really good but can't you give Furina a reason for her loyalty,Did he see Furina as a release from his father's cruelty, or Or does Tempest think this is the right thing to do?Maybe he is loyal to Furina because she saved him when he was about to die But this is impossible because even before he was injured he had loyalty to Furina. even if he rebelled to save his sister and mother and restore his clan to its former glory, he was also thinking of Furina and worried that she wouldn't forgive him, it was a bit unreasonable for him to show such loyalty to someone he had only seen once in his life.
揭示劇透 you'll get an instant 5 star since you follow the rules, no harem with furina on it/no harem, and I like Furina, even though I can't play Genshin cuz of my stupid potato phone, I'm deeply in love with her character. So Kudos to you author! may the goddess smile at you.
Can I ask what AI generator did you use. ..........................................................................
so far interesting . keep up the good work pal.. from same author but.. I can't keep update my work!
Interesting Well written as well I'm intrigued I'm watching your future with great interests
Very interesting beginning I hope you continue it to see the extend of this story.
Biased review from the author himself. I created this Fanfic because I'm the biggest Furina simp ever, to the point that I didn't even finished the archon quest because I can't stand seeing her crying, this is my first fanfic, and my only fanfic, and I intend to finish it. No harem in this story, Furina is the sole love interest and one day... Focalors as well.