4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
hey writer, whats the long gap for? Have you dropped the novel? I was kinda looking forward to it.... .................. . . . . . . . . . . . . ..
I think this is an interesting story, the premise is good for the future. I can't judge the story further yet, I think the concept of the summary you gave is what makes me look forward to your story, it's just that I think the cheat you gave to mc is too op. (TL)
Should add all the female relatives from the main character current and past life to the harem. Also the main character should only have daughters and they should be add to the harem also well. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hey writer, whats the long gap for? Have you dropped the novel? I was kinda looking forward to it.... .................. . . . . . . . . . . . . ..
I think this is an interesting story, the premise is good for the future. I can't judge the story further yet, I think the concept of the summary you gave is what makes me look forward to your story, it's just that I think the cheat you gave to mc is too op. (TL)
Should add all the female relatives from the main character current and past life to the harem. Also the main character should only have daughters and they should be add to the harem also well. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!