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hey author, what's up with the other novel?. It's been a while since it had been updated
AUTHOR We need more chapters ! 9999+ chapters. I like how MC is smart and intelligent instead of being stupid. I do wish you throw some good harem but where it starts developing slowly towards love. Also please stop making him be scared or beta infront of the girl at times its not cool when he gets scared etc. I mean he is the one who is managing everything so why be scared of her when he is the one who saved her from slavery....
Great Novel 👏👏 don't stop writing it. I personally think this novel has potential to be one of the best ones's out there .
Genius MC without a Genius MC? Yes! lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol
Novel is a masterpiece ! I do hope author throws in some romance and harem in there MC is intelligent He uses his brain and he is slowly developing on his path. This combines business along with cultivation I like the mixture as there is a delicate balance between both Also I hope author eventually transitions this to possibly an upper world? Since clearly there are other planets so there has to be upper world where you can pursue real immortality ? sects etc possibly ! He could build his power, take his force and go to upper world and start competing there!
thinking of dropping this novel because author doesn't keep updating regularly
okay author dont be greedy and update regularly rather than updating it in the privilage section or the audience will lose their interest.
Hey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏
I’ve read up to chapter 44, and the novel is enjoyable. Felix works his way from the bottom to the top. He’s smart, but not the most aware person, which balances him out. I know it’s early, but the world building seems lacking. The MC seems to operate in a void outside of politics and governance. Being rich doesn’t make you immune from the political landscape. Owning a restaurant or buying a mansion (which I feel he did too early in the novel), requires more than just funds. It often times involves red tape from the government. I guess that’s something the system takes care off?
it is very good. i don't know how it's going to be in future, but i hope it continue. I am looking forward to reading it. [img=recommend]
don't stop this one. it's good one to be honest I was waiting for this kind of novel so you better write it full don't stop midway
Kingdom Building, Business, and System are my favorite genres, but it's a shame there's no harem here! I'm very curious to see what kind of business is developed in this Fantasy world! Also, I think the chapters are too short!!!
Don't you look at me like that. l heard it's a tradition here. -------------- Check out my new novel and give me your honest reviews.
hey author, what's up with the other novel?. It's been a while since it had been updated
AUTHOR We need more chapters ! 9999+ chapters. I like how MC is smart and intelligent instead of being stupid. I do wish you throw some good harem but where it starts developing slowly towards love. Also please stop making him be scared or beta infront of the girl at times its not cool when he gets scared etc. I mean he is the one who is managing everything so why be scared of her when he is the one who saved her from slavery....
Great Novel 👏👏 don't stop writing it. I personally think this novel has potential to be one of the best ones's out there .
Genius MC without a Genius MC? Yes! lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol
Novel is a masterpiece ! I do hope author throws in some romance and harem in there MC is intelligent He uses his brain and he is slowly developing on his path. This combines business along with cultivation I like the mixture as there is a delicate balance between both Also I hope author eventually transitions this to possibly an upper world? Since clearly there are other planets so there has to be upper world where you can pursue real immortality ? sects etc possibly ! He could build his power, take his force and go to upper world and start competing there!
thinking of dropping this novel because author doesn't keep updating regularly
okay author dont be greedy and update regularly rather than updating it in the privilage section or the audience will lose their interest.
Hey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏
I’ve read up to chapter 44, and the novel is enjoyable. Felix works his way from the bottom to the top. He’s smart, but not the most aware person, which balances him out. I know it’s early, but the world building seems lacking. The MC seems to operate in a void outside of politics and governance. Being rich doesn’t make you immune from the political landscape. Owning a restaurant or buying a mansion (which I feel he did too early in the novel), requires more than just funds. It often times involves red tape from the government. I guess that’s something the system takes care off?
it is very good. i don't know how it's going to be in future, but i hope it continue. I am looking forward to reading it. [img=recommend]
don't stop this one. it's good one to be honest I was waiting for this kind of novel so you better write it full don't stop midway
Kingdom Building, Business, and System are my favorite genres, but it's a shame there's no harem here! I'm very curious to see what kind of business is developed in this Fantasy world! Also, I think the chapters are too short!!!
Don't you look at me like that. l heard it's a tradition here. -------------- Check out my new novel and give me your honest reviews.