4評論
- 翻譯品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
nice plot overall. hopefully the quality will noy drop. fun,engaging with right amount of faceslapping.
The story and plot is fresh and good. I keep retorting to passages that leaves me at lost on how to comprehend the situation. In one of the chapter, he got rewarded after his mission where he described about the nature of a mountain, the breeze, animals and butterflies, and other things that essentially feel like another world, and you know what the MC say about his reward? MC: I ONLY GOT A FKING TREE!? After reading a few chaps, I concluded that it’s not only a fking tree, it’s a fking FOREST that has EVERYTHING, moving animals in the distance, butterflies, wind, a MOUNTAIN!? I tell you, reading some passages will leave you misunderstanding the situation, and retort inconsistencies will leave you drain in energy. The good thing is that it’s quite less after later chapters but the first few? it’s better to be dumb and just continue reading it anyway. It’s an interesting story, and cried a lot in some chapters, I would recommend people from reading it. The GIF is me surrendering towards the author for his/her writing style to cause me brain damage on the first few chaps.
揭示劇透
very awesome novel. I like his other novels and if you liked them you will probably like this one too
nice plot overall. hopefully the quality will noy drop. fun,engaging with right amount of faceslapping.
The story and plot is fresh and good. I keep retorting to passages that leaves me at lost on how to comprehend the situation. In one of the chapter, he got rewarded after his mission where he described about the nature of a mountain, the breeze, animals and butterflies, and other things that essentially feel like another world, and you know what the MC say about his reward? MC: I ONLY GOT A FKING TREE!? After reading a few chaps, I concluded that it’s not only a fking tree, it’s a fking FOREST that has EVERYTHING, moving animals in the distance, butterflies, wind, a MOUNTAIN!? I tell you, reading some passages will leave you misunderstanding the situation, and retort inconsistencies will leave you drain in energy. The good thing is that it’s quite less after later chapters but the first few? it’s better to be dumb and just continue reading it anyway. It’s an interesting story, and cried a lot in some chapters, I would recommend people from reading it. The GIF is me surrendering towards the author for his/her writing style to cause me brain damage on the first few chaps.
揭示劇透 
very awesome novel. I like his other novels and if you liked them you will probably like this one too