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I can not stess enough how good this story is. The unique and brilliant introduction and the sublime character development potenitial. i have read many mha fanfics but only this one starts very differently than the rest. Keep up the good work author and pls don't discontinue .
So I happen to really enjoy the use of tattoos as a power source in fiction, and almost no one is creative enough with its use. I’m excited to see where you take this, and I’m now the second person to follow your profile.
Awesome book and not even done with the first chapter! Giving it all my power stones tomorrow.
Great story, great writing style, and great OC with a cool quirk. Keep up the great quality content.
You are an awesome author. Your Original Character and the story-building background for him is SO GOOD! Congrats and great work! Love it!
Voy a escribir en español porque me siento codicioso, de momento me gustó lo que se ha presentado de la historia espero grandes cosas de esto
A wonderful book to see from altfward for hia return to the fanfic scene! It's a very wonderful premise, and so far we've seen glimpses into a complicated past. Lots of foreshadowing and the author has a unique way of really inciting outr curiosity. And the MC has a very interesting and unique power set too. with a huge potential for character development and extra world building not seen in the original materiakl. can't wait to see more of this!
i hate the story and that’s my opinion but besides tht it’s a decent story
It’s an extremely promising story I hope you choose to finish it. It’s unfortunate that your story royal gambit is no longer being written, and it’s unfair the thief doxxed you. I’m very sorry that this happened to you. I find your writing style very pleasant. You did a great job author, I hope you have a great day.
Amazing potential. Amazing potential background and potential for character development. I need to take some notes from you sir because you had one of the best starts to a story and your character quirk potential and background of their family is amazing. Keep up the good work
Cara que história boa, 5 capítulos e essa historia ja me cativou, espero que continue, bom trabalho. . .
Hello :) Of course, I will also follow in the footsteps of my fellow fanfiction brothers and sisters and post the first review of my story. Let's use this as the location to ask questions. Post your questions directly to this review (not someone else's question, as I will not be notified of your question). I will do my best to respond promptly. Happy reading - ALT
I can not stess enough how good this story is. The unique and brilliant introduction and the sublime character development potenitial. i have read many mha fanfics but only this one starts very differently than the rest. Keep up the good work author and pls don't discontinue .
So I happen to really enjoy the use of tattoos as a power source in fiction, and almost no one is creative enough with its use. I’m excited to see where you take this, and I’m now the second person to follow your profile.
Awesome book and not even done with the first chapter! Giving it all my power stones tomorrow.
Great story, great writing style, and great OC with a cool quirk. Keep up the great quality content.
You are an awesome author. Your Original Character and the story-building background for him is SO GOOD! Congrats and great work! Love it!
Voy a escribir en español porque me siento codicioso, de momento me gustó lo que se ha presentado de la historia espero grandes cosas de esto
A wonderful book to see from altfward for hia return to the fanfic scene! It's a very wonderful premise, and so far we've seen glimpses into a complicated past. Lots of foreshadowing and the author has a unique way of really inciting outr curiosity. And the MC has a very interesting and unique power set too. with a huge potential for character development and extra world building not seen in the original materiakl. can't wait to see more of this!
i hate the story and that’s my opinion but besides tht it’s a decent story
It’s an extremely promising story I hope you choose to finish it. It’s unfortunate that your story royal gambit is no longer being written, and it’s unfair the thief doxxed you. I’m very sorry that this happened to you. I find your writing style very pleasant. You did a great job author, I hope you have a great day.
Amazing potential. Amazing potential background and potential for character development. I need to take some notes from you sir because you had one of the best starts to a story and your character quirk potential and background of their family is amazing. Keep up the good work
Cara que história boa, 5 capítulos e essa historia ja me cativou, espero que continue, bom trabalho. . .
Hello :) Of course, I will also follow in the footsteps of my fellow fanfiction brothers and sisters and post the first review of my story. Let's use this as the location to ask questions. Post your questions directly to this review (not someone else's question, as I will not be notified of your question). I will do my best to respond promptly. Happy reading - ALT