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This novel features a promising protagonist: a smart and calculating MC. What's disappointing is that the MC refuses to kill his five disciples. However, this doesn't mean he can't weaken them by severing some of their limbs or reducing their cultivation levels. It's too absurd for the MC to simply sever his relationship with his disciples then not owe each other anymore, especially after giving them everything and saving them from childhood tragedies. Considering his extensive experience with betrayal it doesn't make sense for him to let them go freely with fullbody even give them some kind of bodyguard.
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This novel features a promising protagonist: a smart and calculating MC. What's disappointing is that the MC refuses to kill his five disciples. However, this doesn't mean he can't weaken them by severing some of their limbs or reducing their cultivation levels. It's too absurd for the MC to simply sever his relationship with his disciples then not owe each other anymore, especially after giving them everything and saving them from childhood tragedies. Considering his extensive experience with betrayal it doesn't make sense for him to let them go freely with fullbody even give them some kind of bodyguard.
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