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it's good, but I'm not in the mood for a story with genre, the Kingdom building, and politics. I'll read later when I'm in a mood for this kind of thing.
I’m sorry but I think you’re writing style is a little bit boring. You explain things too much instead of actually telling the story. For example you spend paragraph after paragraph explaining why the MC can’t do this or explaining MC’s plan instead of writing more dialogue and MC’s steps toward that plan, or at least that is how I feel like it is. And you also do lots of explaining on world background, and although sometimes it is good, I feel you do it too much and it really makes the story boring for me
Genshin fanfic so 5 star. But Im pretty sure being a god in Tevyat is a pretty miserable. But let's see how Author cooks...............................
Sinceramente comenzó interesante, pero mientras más leía , más sueño me daba , osea es puro mologo y pensamientos y casi nada de acción y cada rato menciona al rey , y como quiere mejorar sus vidas, que te termina aburriendo ( para los que les guste un MC con el 90% de monólogos , es tu fanfic, para mí no me convence, si hubiera un equilibrio entre mologo y acción, feliz lo seguiria xd).
Another day, another shameless author review, all I want to say is I'm new here, and I want to share this to story with everyone and to enjoy it, so as I do. If there are any some errors in some chapters, I'd like to apologise in advance, and also, you can ask me about this novel under this review. Thank you for reading and enjoy.
I am done, is the author writing a story on genshin or forcing his idealogy down our throats?
it's good, but I'm not in the mood for a story with genre, the Kingdom building, and politics. I'll read later when I'm in a mood for this kind of thing.
I’m sorry but I think you’re writing style is a little bit boring. You explain things too much instead of actually telling the story. For example you spend paragraph after paragraph explaining why the MC can’t do this or explaining MC’s plan instead of writing more dialogue and MC’s steps toward that plan, or at least that is how I feel like it is. And you also do lots of explaining on world background, and although sometimes it is good, I feel you do it too much and it really makes the story boring for me
Genshin fanfic so 5 star. But Im pretty sure being a god in Tevyat is a pretty miserable. But let's see how Author cooks...............................
Sinceramente comenzó interesante, pero mientras más leía , más sueño me daba , osea es puro mologo y pensamientos y casi nada de acción y cada rato menciona al rey , y como quiere mejorar sus vidas, que te termina aburriendo ( para los que les guste un MC con el 90% de monólogos , es tu fanfic, para mí no me convence, si hubiera un equilibrio entre mologo y acción, feliz lo seguiria xd).
Another day, another shameless author review, all I want to say is I'm new here, and I want to share this to story with everyone and to enjoy it, so as I do. If there are any some errors in some chapters, I'd like to apologise in advance, and also, you can ask me about this novel under this review. Thank you for reading and enjoy.
I am done, is the author writing a story on genshin or forcing his idealogy down our throats?