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Good start, a couple of writing errors and structure errors but its readable, the more i read the more disapointed i got, anything after the death of that minotaur demon lord is just not worth reading in my opinion. takes the focus away from the modern military aspect of this novel and just becomes a fully fledged fanatsy novel with guns.
i'm still early into the book but it seems like mc is the selfless hero type which is honestly not my cup of tea , does this continue further into the book?
Loved reading the story and authors use of the system is one of the best iv been glad to see more settings
author-san this is a very good novel plz keep it up and add more chapters plz, Plz don't leave us on a cliff hanger plz.
Damn,finally a good one👌👌👌I'm getting hungry for a content with no harem nor romance.
I have found myself hooked on this novel despite there not being many chapters so far. please don't just up and disappear leaving this novel abandoned like others have
Once again I enjoyed reading your military story, this story you have shown a lot of potential and I'm looking forward to reading more new chapters soon.
please don't stop this one, it's really good. 9 chapters, and I'm already waiting for kore
Although it's only 5 chapters so far, and I hope you don't take too long to add more, I am already enjoying the story. I loved your zombie version, so I am very hopeful about this novel!
I like you novel.The English is good and there are not a lot of error. I just wan to point out that the title you give to the novel is Military System.So I think the MC should focus and getting more powerful weapons and military vehicles. The first part is good, but later you move away from military to magic. Also, the demon king side figure out the use and make the copy of thr M4 within only one chapter that very fast. If your tilte and focus is the military system you should give the MC the adavantage of technology. Also the background of the world you haven't explain it properly. I really like military novel, yours is pretty good. So what I have written are my point of view.I appreshiate it if you read my comment and reply.If I have said anything wrong, I apologise.
Good start, a couple of writing errors and structure errors but its readable, the more i read the more disapointed i got, anything after the death of that minotaur demon lord is just not worth reading in my opinion. takes the focus away from the modern military aspect of this novel and just becomes a fully fledged fanatsy novel with guns.
i'm still early into the book but it seems like mc is the selfless hero type which is honestly not my cup of tea , does this continue further into the book?
Loved reading the story and authors use of the system is one of the best iv been glad to see more settings
author-san this is a very good novel plz keep it up and add more chapters plz, Plz don't leave us on a cliff hanger plz.
Damn,finally a good one👌👌👌I'm getting hungry for a content with no harem nor romance.
I have found myself hooked on this novel despite there not being many chapters so far. please don't just up and disappear leaving this novel abandoned like others have
Once again I enjoyed reading your military story, this story you have shown a lot of potential and I'm looking forward to reading more new chapters soon.
please don't stop this one, it's really good. 9 chapters, and I'm already waiting for kore
Although it's only 5 chapters so far, and I hope you don't take too long to add more, I am already enjoying the story. I loved your zombie version, so I am very hopeful about this novel!
I like you novel.The English is good and there are not a lot of error. I just wan to point out that the title you give to the novel is Military System.So I think the MC should focus and getting more powerful weapons and military vehicles. The first part is good, but later you move away from military to magic. Also, the demon king side figure out the use and make the copy of thr M4 within only one chapter that very fast. If your tilte and focus is the military system you should give the MC the adavantage of technology. Also the background of the world you haven't explain it properly. I really like military novel, yours is pretty good. So what I have written are my point of view.I appreshiate it if you read my comment and reply.If I have said anything wrong, I apologise.