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A thumbs up to the Authorr, you have my stars🫡. Exceptional storyline although it seems its paused at the moment. My expectations are surely high for more .
The Author bots his comments 😭 the majority of them are people who made the account in the same day, made only two comments/reviews and it’s only on author and they only read one book and another thing they all have (Yet to read) while talking about things that happened in the novel
i love this book but there are times when the characters are talking and idk who if talking and also idk where the talking ends and the narroration begins. Other than it being just slightly confusing because of that fact, I really did enjoy reading this book and will look forward to the upcoming updates to see where this story goes. :) also I'll add this to my library.
I like the idea of this book! it isn't my type but its cool! it just has missing pieces for the story to be complete but is good! I'd check it out if I were you!!.
This is a story with 0 quotations and no difference between speech and description with no idea who is speaking to who and a author who refuses to change what is clearly not working decide to read or not on your on desgression
So first of all...it was the synopsis that drew my attention, it is a must read for all fantasy lovers, I love the plots and everything. Is it weird I'm in love with Michael? The author did a good job, but update more please!!
l love this novel, it's intricate and has a different flavour it feels like lm literally just unlocking a whole new category of novels. I recommend u to read it and yes u who is scrolling to see if its good. Author it's good but maybe update more pliz🥺
"What if our lives are just a story written by another?" An intriguing concept. Micheal seems oblivious to the strange occurrences around him, which makes a greater starter. The writing style is energetic, with humorous inner monologues from Micheal and his friends. Almost every chapter ends abruptly which is great for suspense.
I got only three words for this book . Give me more😭😭 Give it right now. Give it!!!! ......... ... ................. .. .................................
The book which makes you feel different emotions in some seconds, deserve to be called a good book.👌 Your character building ability is quite strong.
I've been through laughs and sorrows in each chapter. I thank the writer for making such a masterpiece. Not all stories might have held such a high ground if a few chapters but this has. I will continue being a super fan.
Simply creative, easily understood, action based, free world view and a lil sauce of rage throughout my needs of pure thrilling reads. This is truly a work of art[img=golden ticket]
Great book. Comedy embodied and action oriented. Love this and will continue to love this novel. You make writers proud👌 ...............................
I enjoyed the first few chapters. The synopsis immediately caught my interest. Enjoyable to read. I felt connected to the story and could see it all play out in front of me. The jokes and the comedy are very nice. I caught myself laughing a few times. Please keep it up!
Wow! The synopsis had me rethinking what life really is😂 The story is really good, ain't gonna lie. However, it would be great if the author added quotations marks whenever a character speaks. Overall, I give praise to the author for creating such a great story. Keep it up!
i really liked this novel , its funny ,light hearted a perfect read when you need a good laugh and just want to feel good and connected with the characters , i honestlyy enjoyed it through out , Keep up with the good work !!!
Comical from the start, power based and a lot of action🤣🤣 Don’t even get me started on the dragon fight. I feel that fight was rigged 😩. This book is surely the loml now🙏🥹
Funny, charming, and sometimes brave as hell. I enjoy every moment which includes Micheal and I cried in some parts where he faced a lot of pain. I love this novel, keep publishing more.
Too good I could give it gold bars instead. It's very funny and intriguing 😂😂I kept laughing most of the time and my emotions were so strong in parts of the story too
So I’m loving the jokes and comedy that this story holds. It has great potential and I can’t wait to see what is in store for our mc!
Such a great novel😘😊 Been loving this from the start. I love romance novels a lot but this brinks a spark to my heart. Love it❤️❤️❤️………………………………..
I don't know who would read this story and not like cause the writer is obviously talented and funny too. His creative is unique. Let's not forget the sound effects, it gets me everytime. The suspense makes it all worth the wait for the next episode. Michael is one hell of a three-in-one character. Then comes another Jerry, I can't wait to know what he does.
awesome sorry line❤️ this took me to another dimension entirely😹✨. pls update daily 🙃👋
This book is fantastic! It's a perfect blend of comedy and action. I enjoyed every plot twist, especially the scene where he's half-burnt and standing in front of a dragon 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥. The writer's talent is extraordinary; it's hard to believe they're human. And Michael? F*** he is hilarious 😂😂.
This is a beautiful piece I must say 😊❤️ I love the inspiration behind it 👍 The Authors choice of words , the characters,the parts they play ☺️ It’s the best so far 👍❤️ I love it and would recommend it for everyone ❤️
👍 Great. This book is so good. Can't wait for the next chapter..................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Book itself has a great quality work, it leaves me wondering when will the next chapter be out. The Author could be a up and coming author that has a successful book. I can see a bright future with the plot and the story progression if it continues to go smoothly. Looking to see more from this book.
Author has moved to a new account and book of the same title, namely: AUTHOR: War of Mortal and Gods by the same penname
A thumbs up to the Authorr, you have my stars🫡. Exceptional storyline although it seems its paused at the moment. My expectations are surely high for more .
The Author bots his comments 😭 the majority of them are people who made the account in the same day, made only two comments/reviews and it’s only on author and they only read one book and another thing they all have (Yet to read) while talking about things that happened in the novel
i love this book but there are times when the characters are talking and idk who if talking and also idk where the talking ends and the narroration begins. Other than it being just slightly confusing because of that fact, I really did enjoy reading this book and will look forward to the upcoming updates to see where this story goes. :) also I'll add this to my library.
I like the idea of this book! it isn't my type but its cool! it just has missing pieces for the story to be complete but is good! I'd check it out if I were you!!.
This is a story with 0 quotations and no difference between speech and description with no idea who is speaking to who and a author who refuses to change what is clearly not working decide to read or not on your on desgression
So first of all...it was the synopsis that drew my attention, it is a must read for all fantasy lovers, I love the plots and everything. Is it weird I'm in love with Michael? The author did a good job, but update more please!!
l love this novel, it's intricate and has a different flavour it feels like lm literally just unlocking a whole new category of novels. I recommend u to read it and yes u who is scrolling to see if its good. Author it's good but maybe update more pliz🥺
"What if our lives are just a story written by another?" An intriguing concept. Micheal seems oblivious to the strange occurrences around him, which makes a greater starter. The writing style is energetic, with humorous inner monologues from Micheal and his friends. Almost every chapter ends abruptly which is great for suspense.
I got only three words for this book . Give me more😭😭 Give it right now. Give it!!!! ......... ... ................. .. .................................
The book which makes you feel different emotions in some seconds, deserve to be called a good book.👌 Your character building ability is quite strong.
I've been through laughs and sorrows in each chapter. I thank the writer for making such a masterpiece. Not all stories might have held such a high ground if a few chapters but this has. I will continue being a super fan.
Simply creative, easily understood, action based, free world view and a lil sauce of rage throughout my needs of pure thrilling reads. This is truly a work of art[img=golden ticket]
Great book. Comedy embodied and action oriented. Love this and will continue to love this novel. You make writers proud👌 ...............................
I enjoyed the first few chapters. The synopsis immediately caught my interest. Enjoyable to read. I felt connected to the story and could see it all play out in front of me. The jokes and the comedy are very nice. I caught myself laughing a few times. Please keep it up!
Wow! The synopsis had me rethinking what life really is😂 The story is really good, ain't gonna lie. However, it would be great if the author added quotations marks whenever a character speaks. Overall, I give praise to the author for creating such a great story. Keep it up!
i really liked this novel , its funny ,light hearted a perfect read when you need a good laugh and just want to feel good and connected with the characters , i honestlyy enjoyed it through out , Keep up with the good work !!!
Comical from the start, power based and a lot of action🤣🤣 Don’t even get me started on the dragon fight. I feel that fight was rigged 😩. This book is surely the loml now🙏🥹
Funny, charming, and sometimes brave as hell. I enjoy every moment which includes Micheal and I cried in some parts where he faced a lot of pain. I love this novel, keep publishing more.
Too good I could give it gold bars instead. It's very funny and intriguing 😂😂I kept laughing most of the time and my emotions were so strong in parts of the story too
So I’m loving the jokes and comedy that this story holds. It has great potential and I can’t wait to see what is in store for our mc!
Such a great novel😘😊 Been loving this from the start. I love romance novels a lot but this brinks a spark to my heart. Love it❤️❤️❤️………………………………..
I don't know who would read this story and not like cause the writer is obviously talented and funny too. His creative is unique. Let's not forget the sound effects, it gets me everytime. The suspense makes it all worth the wait for the next episode. Michael is one hell of a three-in-one character. Then comes another Jerry, I can't wait to know what he does.
awesome sorry line❤️ this took me to another dimension entirely😹✨. pls update daily 🙃👋
This book is fantastic! It's a perfect blend of comedy and action. I enjoyed every plot twist, especially the scene where he's half-burnt and standing in front of a dragon 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥. The writer's talent is extraordinary; it's hard to believe they're human. And Michael? F*** he is hilarious 😂😂.
This is a beautiful piece I must say 😊❤️ I love the inspiration behind it 👍 The Authors choice of words , the characters,the parts they play ☺️ It’s the best so far 👍❤️ I love it and would recommend it for everyone ❤️
👍 Great. This book is so good. Can't wait for the next chapter..................................................................................................................................................................................................
揭示劇透 Book itself has a great quality work, it leaves me wondering when will the next chapter be out. The Author could be a up and coming author that has a successful book. I can see a bright future with the plot and the story progression if it continues to go smoothly. Looking to see more from this book.
Author has moved to a new account and book of the same title, namely: AUTHOR: War of Mortal and Gods by the same penname