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Shameless review from the Scholar here. If I won't give it 5 stars, who else would dare to? Also, consider this review to be Q/N: If you have any questions, feel free to ask them here!
Just update regularly and fast with some elements of sports entertainment also like buy some sports clubs in NFL,NBA,MLB,PL etc
It actually feels like a ‘novel’. Mc travels past, and faces with the emotional circumstances. He forgets the names of not essential places-characters. The thing that im trying to say is, it feels natural and this is rare in novels this days.
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Good story , moderate pace , mystery is there , but faster update or mass release pls
Enjoyed for a while but stopped when author introduced hidden organizations and shit targeting him and he cant do shit. I like my MC's OP and this helplessness gave me anxiety
Tava gostando mas por volta do capítulo 99 perdi todo tesão na história, ele age igual um idiota, leva uma facada completamente atoa, conta que veio do futuro, age como uma criança ingênua, fora ele ser bem irritante é bom
I 'm currently chapter 118. all i can say about this novel is freaking good 8/10 smut- plot 9/10 writing 10/10 many more you won't be bored if you like this kinf of novel so (⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐) for me thanks for this wonderful novel author stay healthy i hope we got more chapters in coming months🤭❤️
Redoing my review after more than 30 chaps. Still love it. The lemons I was waiting for came and I wasn't dissapointed. MC is smart, the dialogues are realistic and not cringe. And the character design is interesting
Great novel, keep it going. If anyone has doubts about it, the quality is very high.
I love it. Very clean writing and language. I must say that the author usually rashes through with his works, so I relly hope that you will take your time Author.
The writing is great. The story is realistic and I hope it remains like that. I need more of this. Will be great to see how the MC will proceed with this life. Segs?
A novel with promising aspects. This is well refined and the writing keeps you engaged in the story. I recommend it.
This is the first story review I will do on webnovel and I am happy it is this novel. The writing language is ok, the main character shows the maturity of a regressed middle age man who wants to change the future. though there are not enough chapters to fully consent to the world background, but the current chapters are enough to give a good glimpse of the Author's writing skill so I doubt I will be disappointed. I can happy recommend this story to others to read since it is different from other novels with mc: that pushes through with op systems that is common these days.
Shameless review from the Scholar here. If I won't give it 5 stars, who else would dare to? Also, consider this review to be Q/N: If you have any questions, feel free to ask them here!
Just update regularly and fast with some elements of sports entertainment also like buy some sports clubs in NFL,NBA,MLB,PL etc
It actually feels like a ‘novel’. Mc travels past, and faces with the emotional circumstances. He forgets the names of not essential places-characters. The thing that im trying to say is, it feels natural and this is rare in novels this days.
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Good story , moderate pace , mystery is there , but faster update or mass release pls
Enjoyed for a while but stopped when author introduced hidden organizations and shit targeting him and he cant do shit. I like my MC's OP and this helplessness gave me anxiety
Tava gostando mas por volta do capítulo 99 perdi todo tesão na história, ele age igual um idiota, leva uma facada completamente atoa, conta que veio do futuro, age como uma criança ingênua, fora ele ser bem irritante é bom
I 'm currently chapter 118. all i can say about this novel is freaking good 8/10 smut- plot 9/10 writing 10/10 many more you won't be bored if you like this kinf of novel so (⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐) for me thanks for this wonderful novel author stay healthy i hope we got more chapters in coming months🤭❤️
Redoing my review after more than 30 chaps. Still love it. The lemons I was waiting for came and I wasn't dissapointed. MC is smart, the dialogues are realistic and not cringe. And the character design is interesting
Great novel, keep it going. If anyone has doubts about it, the quality is very high.
I love it. Very clean writing and language. I must say that the author usually rashes through with his works, so I relly hope that you will take your time Author.
The writing is great. The story is realistic and I hope it remains like that. I need more of this. Will be great to see how the MC will proceed with this life. Segs?
A novel with promising aspects. This is well refined and the writing keeps you engaged in the story. I recommend it.
This is the first story review I will do on webnovel and I am happy it is this novel. The writing language is ok, the main character shows the maturity of a regressed middle age man who wants to change the future. though there are not enough chapters to fully consent to the world background, but the current chapters are enough to give a good glimpse of the Author's writing skill so I doubt I will be disappointed. I can happy recommend this story to others to read since it is different from other novels with mc: that pushes through with op systems that is common these days.