3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
The poster of this novel is a saint...though i remember it being paywalled in the original author's patreon for like maybe 5$. qwertyyuiopp
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The main character should be more dominant and you should expand the world more. The power level should also be increased and if the lifespan of the cultivators is so long, why do they become the strongest person in just 2-3 years? Let more time pass, but the novel should not be slow, there should be plenty of time skips.
The poster of this novel is a saint...though i remember it being paywalled in the original author's patreon for like maybe 5$. qwertyyuiopp
Bom...…........…........…........…........…........…..........…........…........…........…........…........….........…........…........…........…........…........…......
The main character should be more dominant and you should expand the world more. The power level should also be increased and if the lifespan of the cultivators is so long, why do they become the strongest person in just 2-3 years? Let more time pass, but the novel should not be slow, there should be plenty of time skips.