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First I need everyone to know that the writing style of the author is probably the best I have ever read on WebNovel. The entire novel is so well written and so detailed that you can easily picture the scenes as you read. The characters are wonderful, with realistic personalities and thoughts. Just in the first 50 chapters I have watched the MC grow with his circumstances evolving into the "Apex Predator" he is becoming. The characters around him also have their own personalities special traits that make them more interesting instead of feeling like bots implanted. I couldn't be more happy with this story and author, he seems to understand what true fantasy/action/magic/isekai readers want in a novel with those main tags. He hasn't given into the complaints by the same people (Harem Haters) who never continue supporting any novel regardless of harem or not. I predict this story will be in the top 5 by the time it hits 300 chapters. So come read this incredible story and support.
A good story so far, it has great potential. Hopefully more people will give it a chance and some support. I gave power stones and a golden ticket to show my support. 😘😘😘
The author making 1 giant paragraph or swapping the letter type in the novel is killing it for me so I’m out
well written and paced book, good intrigue and strong mc. not going to go on depth and spoil it, just five in and enjoy
Story was okay but it’s super frustrating to read. I stopped at chapter 29 because most chapters aren’t separated into paragraphs and there are random sections of a black colored text that is hard to read when you are using darkness mode. The author said he formats correctly and that webnovel is the problem but support isn’t helping him. Which is fine ig, it just makes it way to frustrating to read so I give up.
Story could be good but excessive impossible to read formatting issues that haven’t been fixed in a month, not sure if the author eventually figured out what was causing them so they don’t happen later but it’s impossible to read as the text is forced to a small size and fixed color and doesn’t respond to the app theme info. Sounds like WebNovel support sucks at helping them fix… but I dropped due to this, which is sad as was enjoyable beyond that.
Pretty Underrated at the time of writing this review. I think the story is pretty good so far. Love the characters and hope to see more your work.
First off, the story itself it very good. The only problem I have with it is how descriptive it is. It is almost like the author took a thesaurus and word vomited on the page. It almost feels like searching for word count by overly describing the most mundane details. Again the story is good. It’s just the writing is difficult to stomach sometimes.
I've read all the unlocked chapters so far and I have to say I've enjoyed the author's way of writing...the prose and narration is top tier and devoid of grammatical errors common in web novels. The character descriptions are well detailed giving an extra level of immersion to the spicy scenes. The author is well aware of the tropes involved in such a story and has applied their unique twist to it. A fast paced story with enough intrigue and a pinch of spiciness to keep you reading. I'll follow along to see how the story goes..but so far it's a phenomenal start...keep it up.
The fact that it takes a lot of skill to create true[img=gift]beauty is understatement of how much hardwork and ingenuity put into this wonderful book...Keep Going!!!❤️🙏🏽🇰🇪
I am a couple of chapters in but my thoughts so far are as such. I love the details given to every set piece and the story as a whole. You could never say you didn't get a vivid picture of what was in the author's mind at any particular time. It is so far the strongest element that I enjoyed. Fantasy reincarnation is tough to sell as a fresh concept. A lot of ground has already been tread so it is something an author has to be wary about and I can say that so far, the story is in good hands. The dynamic between what the main character is and what he's perceived as is interesting. For some characters, I'd like to wait and see where their progress goes. Definitely worth a read if you're a fantasy. Cheers to the author.
Now this is what i call a good novel! The world building peak, action amazing and the culture supreme. thank you author for the novel give us more chapters please.
It is an engaging and unique fantasy novel. The plot of David manipulating the world he's transported into is captivating. The antihero theme adds depth, though some pacing issues and predictability detract slightly. Overall, it's a thrilling read that keeps you hooked. looking forward for new updates
this is the Author, my novel is based on suspense. so please don't be so rude to discredit me claiming that you don't understand the novel while you read 3 chapters. for the others who support me happy reading.
First I need everyone to know that the writing style of the author is probably the best I have ever read on WebNovel. The entire novel is so well written and so detailed that you can easily picture the scenes as you read. The characters are wonderful, with realistic personalities and thoughts. Just in the first 50 chapters I have watched the MC grow with his circumstances evolving into the "Apex Predator" he is becoming. The characters around him also have their own personalities special traits that make them more interesting instead of feeling like bots implanted. I couldn't be more happy with this story and author, he seems to understand what true fantasy/action/magic/isekai readers want in a novel with those main tags. He hasn't given into the complaints by the same people (Harem Haters) who never continue supporting any novel regardless of harem or not. I predict this story will be in the top 5 by the time it hits 300 chapters. So come read this incredible story and support.
A good story so far, it has great potential. Hopefully more people will give it a chance and some support. I gave power stones and a golden ticket to show my support. 😘😘😘
The author making 1 giant paragraph or swapping the letter type in the novel is killing it for me so I’m out
well written and paced book, good intrigue and strong mc. not going to go on depth and spoil it, just five in and enjoy
Story was okay but it’s super frustrating to read. I stopped at chapter 29 because most chapters aren’t separated into paragraphs and there are random sections of a black colored text that is hard to read when you are using darkness mode. The author said he formats correctly and that webnovel is the problem but support isn’t helping him. Which is fine ig, it just makes it way to frustrating to read so I give up.
Story could be good but excessive impossible to read formatting issues that haven’t been fixed in a month, not sure if the author eventually figured out what was causing them so they don’t happen later but it’s impossible to read as the text is forced to a small size and fixed color and doesn’t respond to the app theme info. Sounds like WebNovel support sucks at helping them fix… but I dropped due to this, which is sad as was enjoyable beyond that.
Pretty Underrated at the time of writing this review. I think the story is pretty good so far. Love the characters and hope to see more your work.
First off, the story itself it very good. The only problem I have with it is how descriptive it is. It is almost like the author took a thesaurus and word vomited on the page. It almost feels like searching for word count by overly describing the most mundane details. Again the story is good. It’s just the writing is difficult to stomach sometimes.
I've read all the unlocked chapters so far and I have to say I've enjoyed the author's way of writing...the prose and narration is top tier and devoid of grammatical errors common in web novels. The character descriptions are well detailed giving an extra level of immersion to the spicy scenes. The author is well aware of the tropes involved in such a story and has applied their unique twist to it. A fast paced story with enough intrigue and a pinch of spiciness to keep you reading. I'll follow along to see how the story goes..but so far it's a phenomenal start...keep it up.
The fact that it takes a lot of skill to create true[img=gift]beauty is understatement of how much hardwork and ingenuity put into this wonderful book...Keep Going!!!❤️🙏🏽🇰🇪
I am a couple of chapters in but my thoughts so far are as such. I love the details given to every set piece and the story as a whole. You could never say you didn't get a vivid picture of what was in the author's mind at any particular time. It is so far the strongest element that I enjoyed. Fantasy reincarnation is tough to sell as a fresh concept. A lot of ground has already been tread so it is something an author has to be wary about and I can say that so far, the story is in good hands. The dynamic between what the main character is and what he's perceived as is interesting. For some characters, I'd like to wait and see where their progress goes. Definitely worth a read if you're a fantasy. Cheers to the author.
Now this is what i call a good novel! The world building peak, action amazing and the culture supreme. thank you author for the novel give us more chapters please.
It is an engaging and unique fantasy novel. The plot of David manipulating the world he's transported into is captivating. The antihero theme adds depth, though some pacing issues and predictability detract slightly. Overall, it's a thrilling read that keeps you hooked. looking forward for new updates
this is the Author, my novel is based on suspense. so please don't be so rude to discredit me claiming that you don't understand the novel while you read 3 chapters. for the others who support me happy reading.