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Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
this is good novel... I've read the MTL version, everything was good both comedy and actions were really balance BUT THE ORIGINAL NOVEL IS STOP UPDATING. like 2years ago idk if its dropped or simply on hiatus but last time I checked it, it still the same chapter Mr. translator plz confirm this
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to make this short the synopsis is literally a one-to-one copy of "men in marvel:starting with a model body"and the worst part of it is this have a lower chapter number then the original copy that meant there is a good chance that they are copying the story from the original one
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
this is good novel... I've read the MTL version, everything was good both comedy and actions were really balance BUT THE ORIGINAL NOVEL IS STOP UPDATING. like 2years ago idk if its dropped or simply on hiatus but last time I checked it, it still the same chapter Mr. translator plz confirm this
Ask me whatever you want --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
to make this short the synopsis is literally a one-to-one copy of "men in marvel:starting with a model body"and the worst part of it is this have a lower chapter number then the original copy that meant there is a good chance that they are copying the story from the original one