5評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
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Hey buddy, Hi I don't know what happened, But please continue. Because I personally like your story. And I'm sure many people will like it. So keep creating.
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Hey buddy, Hi I don't know what happened, But please continue. Because I personally like your story. And I'm sure many people will like it. So keep creating.