59評論
4.72
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
"I'll miss you, that's for sure. So many emotions and moments that have stuck with me through each chapter. Thank you for every page, for every word that makes this journey so unique. Your hard work and dedication show in every detail, and I feel lucky to be a part of this story. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!"
It's a very interesting and extremely unusual story. Let's start with the fact that this is a reincarnation in Stephen's Universe and not in Lapis Lazuli. What the author did to Sasha seemed strange at first, but in principle this game of thoughts is very fascinating. The only problem is that a huge number of POVs allow you to better observe a difficult situation and are necessary, but due to the rare release of chapters, this greatly hinders immersion. You'll forget what happened from one person when you start reading from another. In addition, there were about 5 important scenes in the entire second volume, which is scary. It's scary that at one point the author will simply burn out and leave the story before the end of the prologue.
I’ve been wanting to review this story for quite some time, but I just couldn’t find the right words to do it. Since their first fanfic, the author has grown a lot, improved, and brought new ideas. I think the only thing I can say to the author is that it’s okay. As you said, writing is a hobby—you don’t need to pressure yourself to release a chapter on time. Sometimes, it’s fine to go with the mindset of: “This month, I’ll upload four chapters, whenever and however I want.” It’s a hobby, after all. Hobbies are meant to be enjoyed, not to be stressful.
My God. Well designed, unique character who stays true to her original motivations and intentions while still growing as a person. Losses and setbacks that feel organic and realistic. Genuinely touching dialogue and relationships. Bro this shit is FIRE. The Author is COOKING.
me gusta mucho esta historia y como se introdujo a la protagonista, me es muy divertido toda la "conspiración" que hacen alrededor de Asha como que es parte de algo más grande que de lo que se aparenta
best, balancing the gender bender and the plot , the misunderstandings and multiple perspectives , aww yeah boiiii. recommend
Esta god tu historia, no me quejo de nada comence a leer y me enganche y lo termine en una noche. gracias sigue así 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
es interesante pero aveces puede ser bastante lenta el avance de la historia. y el hecho que siga estando "herida" me molesta un poco. se siente un poco raro pero no es malo en si solo espero que se cure de una vez y no avanza en eso.
Damn, that's cool :D This is my first time seeing a Steven Universe fanfic in Webnovel and my first impressions from the first 10 chapters have surpassed what I had previously expected. I haven't read everything yet, but I sincerely wish the author luck! :)
This is honestly one of the best fanfics I have read not to mention the best SU fanfic I have seen! Good job! I hope you continue this to the very end. And until I write again friend Talos guide you.
yes absolutely freaking yes I want more so much more it is warm and cuddly and intriguing and mysterious mmmm
muito bom,faz tempo que eu não leio uma historia que não fique enrrolando a historia ou dando descrisões desnessesaria sobre alguma coisa.
Love this Love this love this so much 😍 me won't more souch more shshshshsbsdhshdhdhdhdhddbdbdhdhdhdhshshshshshshshshshsbsbsbshshsgdgdgdgdgsgs
nice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nice,nice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nice
What a good fic, it's the best fic of Steven Universe, I can say that it's the only one worthy of raising Myonir. You really should give it a chance, the author is very talented.
It's a fantastic fic, I just love it, love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice, love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice.
I love this fanfic from the Steven Universe universe. The story captures the essence of the characters in a deep and authentic way, bringing their unique personalities to life. The narrative is so well structured that every scene seems to come to life, managing to convey all the magic and emotion of the original series.
Me parece un excelente fantic de Steven universe, la protagonista es muy interesante y, como dice su autor, la historia no es de acción o romance, simplemente es el día a día de una peridot,(no la peridot original sino otra). Se que ya se lo han dicho muchos pero yo igual espero que el autor no abandone este trabajo.
Too boring, too rambling, too slow, too problematic. There is no balance in this story, it just shows a cheap drama that is basically a protagonist complaining. Good grammar, bad narrative. The first chapter is interesting, then there's a bit of drama, and then some more, and then the cheap drama never ends.
Real story spoilers. it's a slow burn, burning low and slow. so slow that I got bored around chapter 25 and just started skimming the rest to see if anything interesting was going to happen. the entirety of the fic can be explained down to this. The MC is an overcooked peridot with analysis and minor transmutation abilities who wakes up on a husk of a planet. fixes an old warp pad and warps to earth, breaking her gem in the meantime. the break is clean and the MC can use her transmutation power on herself to keep her gem in one piece. the break turns her into an invalid for a long time, the warp pad took her to the desert where lion was. eventually lion takes her to a hospital where she gets adopted by connies mom. just reading the titles of the chapters I can assume connies mom abandons Connie. that may seem like a lot but remember, that's like 25+ chapters of stuff condensed into like, 3 paragraphs if I cared to partion it correctly.
揭示劇透
It is a very well-crafted story. I hope it continues to develop. Please write more!!
Just because it's from Steven Universe it's worth reading. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
An amazing fanfic, I rarely leave any form of review unless something catches my interest and this did so perfectly. The only thing that I can say that is negative is that there isn't enough chapters.
This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome
siendo sincero entre con bajas espectativas y me está encantando la historia, las interacciones del mc con los demás personajes es bastante entrertenido
Love your fanfic ! You're the first author who actually made me watch the original, thanks !
"I'll miss you, that's for sure. So many emotions and moments that have stuck with me through each chapter. Thank you for every page, for every word that makes this journey so unique. Your hard work and dedication show in every detail, and I feel lucky to be a part of this story. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!"
It's a very interesting and extremely unusual story. Let's start with the fact that this is a reincarnation in Stephen's Universe and not in Lapis Lazuli. What the author did to Sasha seemed strange at first, but in principle this game of thoughts is very fascinating. The only problem is that a huge number of POVs allow you to better observe a difficult situation and are necessary, but due to the rare release of chapters, this greatly hinders immersion. You'll forget what happened from one person when you start reading from another. In addition, there were about 5 important scenes in the entire second volume, which is scary. It's scary that at one point the author will simply burn out and leave the story before the end of the prologue.
I’ve been wanting to review this story for quite some time, but I just couldn’t find the right words to do it. Since their first fanfic, the author has grown a lot, improved, and brought new ideas. I think the only thing I can say to the author is that it’s okay. As you said, writing is a hobby—you don’t need to pressure yourself to release a chapter on time. Sometimes, it’s fine to go with the mindset of: “This month, I’ll upload four chapters, whenever and however I want.” It’s a hobby, after all. Hobbies are meant to be enjoyed, not to be stressful.
My God. Well designed, unique character who stays true to her original motivations and intentions while still growing as a person. Losses and setbacks that feel organic and realistic. Genuinely touching dialogue and relationships. Bro this shit is FIRE. The Author is COOKING.
me gusta mucho esta historia y como se introdujo a la protagonista, me es muy divertido toda la "conspiración" que hacen alrededor de Asha como que es parte de algo más grande que de lo que se aparenta
best, balancing the gender bender and the plot , the misunderstandings and multiple perspectives , aww yeah boiiii. recommend
Esta god tu historia, no me quejo de nada comence a leer y me enganche y lo termine en una noche. gracias sigue así 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
es interesante pero aveces puede ser bastante lenta el avance de la historia. y el hecho que siga estando "herida" me molesta un poco. se siente un poco raro pero no es malo en si solo espero que se cure de una vez y no avanza en eso.
Damn, that's cool :D This is my first time seeing a Steven Universe fanfic in Webnovel and my first impressions from the first 10 chapters have surpassed what I had previously expected. I haven't read everything yet, but I sincerely wish the author luck! :)
This is honestly one of the best fanfics I have read not to mention the best SU fanfic I have seen! Good job! I hope you continue this to the very end. And until I write again friend Talos guide you.
yes absolutely freaking yes I want more so much more it is warm and cuddly and intriguing and mysterious mmmm
muito bom,faz tempo que eu não leio uma historia que não fique enrrolando a historia ou dando descrisões desnessesaria sobre alguma coisa.
Love this Love this love this so much 😍 me won't more souch more shshshshsbsdhshdhdhdhdhddbdbdhdhdhdhshshshshshshshshshsbsbsbshshsgdgdgdgdgsgs
nice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nice,nice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nicenice, nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice,nice
What a good fic, it's the best fic of Steven Universe, I can say that it's the only one worthy of raising Myonir. You really should give it a chance, the author is very talented.
It's a fantastic fic, I just love it, love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice, love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice.
I love this fanfic from the Steven Universe universe. The story captures the essence of the characters in a deep and authentic way, bringing their unique personalities to life. The narrative is so well structured that every scene seems to come to life, managing to convey all the magic and emotion of the original series.
Me parece un excelente fantic de Steven universe, la protagonista es muy interesante y, como dice su autor, la historia no es de acción o romance, simplemente es el día a día de una peridot,(no la peridot original sino otra). Se que ya se lo han dicho muchos pero yo igual espero que el autor no abandone este trabajo.
Too boring, too rambling, too slow, too problematic. There is no balance in this story, it just shows a cheap drama that is basically a protagonist complaining. Good grammar, bad narrative. The first chapter is interesting, then there's a bit of drama, and then some more, and then the cheap drama never ends.
Real story spoilers. it's a slow burn, burning low and slow. so slow that I got bored around chapter 25 and just started skimming the rest to see if anything interesting was going to happen. the entirety of the fic can be explained down to this. The MC is an overcooked peridot with analysis and minor transmutation abilities who wakes up on a husk of a planet. fixes an old warp pad and warps to earth, breaking her gem in the meantime. the break is clean and the MC can use her transmutation power on herself to keep her gem in one piece. the break turns her into an invalid for a long time, the warp pad took her to the desert where lion was. eventually lion takes her to a hospital where she gets adopted by connies mom. just reading the titles of the chapters I can assume connies mom abandons Connie. that may seem like a lot but remember, that's like 25+ chapters of stuff condensed into like, 3 paragraphs if I cared to partion it correctly.
揭示劇透 It is a very well-crafted story. I hope it continues to develop. Please write more!!
Just because it's from Steven Universe it's worth reading. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
An amazing fanfic, I rarely leave any form of review unless something catches my interest and this did so perfectly. The only thing that I can say that is negative is that there isn't enough chapters.
This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome This is awesome this is awesome
siendo sincero entre con bajas espectativas y me está encantando la historia, las interacciones del mc con los demás personajes es bastante entrertenido
Love your fanfic ! You're the first author who actually made me watch the original, thanks !