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I definitely didn’t see Josephine leaving, that pretty much shocked me. So will the story end with a harem? Cuz I don’t want to finish reading this and end up with Su Luo just picking one. The fact that the story has the harem tag is the primary reason I chose this soccer story out of the rest.
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Hello sir I am Rishi Pandey and have read your novel i would like to do a collaboration with you and we would like to assure you that this collaboration may become your like changing collaboration so please contact me for further information my Instagram is [yurichi_adrenaline]
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For a football fanfic this one goes very fast so its not boring, read 100+ chaps very fast and waiting for new chaps. Only prob i have is the mc's infidelity with no regrets to his gf. Other than that the story is exciting from a football pov
this translation won't be finished until 5 years from now, the raw has reached 1400 chapters, bro plz post 3 chapters per day hehehe
The author is supremacy chinese. Whoever translates this story does it badly, he does not even change the Chinese names that the author has. Mc chinese supremacy . [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
Don't read this novel; 1. China namba wan 2. Chinese is still the namba wan 3. Ofc the ching chong is still the number one in whole wide world. 4. What do you expect? ofc chinese people are the superior RACE (They eat all kinds of insect, even Bats which is the reason of Covid-19) 5. Certified Meat rider of CCP 6. Whinny the poo as the president of china? 😭 7. Please be kind, humble and kowtow to Chinese person if you see them, Thanks to them that they still don't start a war againts the world.
Easily one of the best finds I’ve ever read. I’m so in love with this book that I sometimes forget Su Lou isn’t real. Keep up the amazing work ;)
Don't read this story it changes in the middle Don't read this story it changes in the middle Don't read this story it changes in the middle
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
An incredible work of art Author. Keep up the great work and thanks for your efforts. I believe in you and also can you please tell if there is a raw for this
This novel starts off with an interesting premise but it becomes unreadable after the first ten or so chapters. The main issue for me is that the author is unable to keep track of what’s going on in the story.
I definitely didn’t see Josephine leaving, that pretty much shocked me. So will the story end with a harem? Cuz I don’t want to finish reading this and end up with Su Luo just picking one. The fact that the story has the harem tag is the primary reason I chose this soccer story out of the rest.
揭示劇透 Hello sir I am Rishi Pandey and have read your novel i would like to do a collaboration with you and we would like to assure you that this collaboration may become your like changing collaboration so please contact me for further information my Instagram is [yurichi_adrenaline]
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For a football fanfic this one goes very fast so its not boring, read 100+ chaps very fast and waiting for new chaps. Only prob i have is the mc's infidelity with no regrets to his gf. Other than that the story is exciting from a football pov
this translation won't be finished until 5 years from now, the raw has reached 1400 chapters, bro plz post 3 chapters per day hehehe
The author is supremacy chinese. Whoever translates this story does it badly, he does not even change the Chinese names that the author has. Mc chinese supremacy . [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
Don't read this novel; 1. China namba wan 2. Chinese is still the namba wan 3. Ofc the ching chong is still the number one in whole wide world. 4. What do you expect? ofc chinese people are the superior RACE (They eat all kinds of insect, even Bats which is the reason of Covid-19) 5. Certified Meat rider of CCP 6. Whinny the poo as the president of china? 😭 7. Please be kind, humble and kowtow to Chinese person if you see them, Thanks to them that they still don't start a war againts the world.
Easily one of the best finds I’ve ever read. I’m so in love with this book that I sometimes forget Su Lou isn’t real. Keep up the amazing work ;)
Don't read this story it changes in the middle Don't read this story it changes in the middle Don't read this story it changes in the middle
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
An incredible work of art Author. Keep up the great work and thanks for your efforts. I believe in you and also can you please tell if there is a raw for this
This novel starts off with an interesting premise but it becomes unreadable after the first ten or so chapters. The main issue for me is that the author is unable to keep track of what’s going on in the story.