Reviews of The Tales of Draconic Warlock by ChaosSpawn - Webnovel

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Alanray64

This started out as an interesting novel but rapidly dropped into mediocrity. The novel is done first person and really I think that this is what kills it. He overthinks, waffles on about being low key and not bringing travesty down upon himself and family and basically this just makes a person lose interest with the character in general. When reading, it really does not give the reader a sense of connection and feels like instead I am reading a shopping list of things to do. The MC tends to wander in descriptions and goes off on tangent when suddenly, skips back by commenting he was going off topic or was wandering. One particular detail the author uses is continually bloating word count with status screen information, it is used often and virtually the list is so long, filled with skills etc, that I just skip way past it. It isn’t needed and I am sure that this could be handled in a simpler manner. Basic synopsis MC is reborn into a world as the youngest son of a Viscount. Standard tropes are revealed, a marriage arrangement, receiving OP skills, miraculously surviving certain death scenarios, faction fighting within the family and of course earning the enemity of a potential protagonist. There are other classic tropes included but just read and find them. A lot of his issues is his previous lifes morals and values etc, which are really not totally applicable in his current environment. Currently the MC is in a new world of much potential but he just seems to wimpy to me. (My opinion) his attitude towards slavery, to beast and monster summoning was to overthought and could have been handled far better, but again.. my opinion. I did give it a fair go, forget what chapter I made it to but in the end I decided enough and move on. Overall the concept is interesting, the section where he discovers the Nexus coukd have been done better and developed further but was never allowed to reach its potential. Anyways, a number of readers will like it and I do encourage those to decide for themselves if it is for them.

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Prakhar_Pandey_1394

Story is interesting but somtimes story pace is either very fast or slow, sometimes seems bit repetitive and there could be more character development as there is no interaction with student in 2&3 year in academy but dozens of time MC lost in self monolog and he only trains but still interesting and give it a try and update are delayed in past two months

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Ghan_Joo

This novel had a lot of potential at the start but it's been going downhill for a while. MC with devour skill and physic and for some reason only used it at the start on weak beasts to get either useless , repetitive or convenient. When he got access to stronger beasts he stopped using it. The author wastes a lot of time talking about philosophical BS either irrelevant to the story or already wrote about it. MC's main affinity is shadow and he only has 2 basic lame attack skills (that he uses at least) The shadow element is wasted on him. MC complains about his skills being low lvl when he could have abused his clone ability .The dude had a portable HQ/Space , infinte mana can't understand why he only use it sparingly. MC is dumb and if you aren't convinced by now ,the man goes to a beast tide claiming it's a Exp heaven and at the same breath how he can't show his skills and the beasts lower tier than him don't give him any Exp -_- .

1mth
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Brandon_Hook

no romance tag but harem? its not one of those novels with alot of love interests and a dense/indifferent mc right?

3mth
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RoadWolfProduction

Hey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏

5mth
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Sathish_Annarapu

Damn bro! the mc is literally a walking calamity bruh. Anyway I like the novel. Hoping for the updates

5mth
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sidharth_singh

Good Novel Gives many New chapter please

6mth
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STBull100

A good start to a well written novel. Looking forward to more chapters 😁

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Alanray64

This started out as an interesting novel but rapidly dropped into mediocrity. The novel is done first person and really I think that this is what kills it. He overthinks, waffles on about being low key and not bringing travesty down upon himself and family and basically this just makes a person lose interest with the character in general. When reading, it really does not give the reader a sense of connection and feels like instead I am reading a shopping list of things to do. The MC tends to wander in descriptions and goes off on tangent when suddenly, skips back by commenting he was going off topic or was wandering. One particular detail the author uses is continually bloating word count with status screen information, it is used often and virtually the list is so long, filled with skills etc, that I just skip way past it. It isn’t needed and I am sure that this could be handled in a simpler manner. Basic synopsis MC is reborn into a world as the youngest son of a Viscount. Standard tropes are revealed, a marriage arrangement, receiving OP skills, miraculously surviving certain death scenarios, faction fighting within the family and of course earning the enemity of a potential protagonist. There are other classic tropes included but just read and find them. A lot of his issues is his previous lifes morals and values etc, which are really not totally applicable in his current environment. Currently the MC is in a new world of much potential but he just seems to wimpy to me. (My opinion) his attitude towards slavery, to beast and monster summoning was to overthought and could have been handled far better, but again.. my opinion. I did give it a fair go, forget what chapter I made it to but in the end I decided enough and move on. Overall the concept is interesting, the section where he discovers the Nexus coukd have been done better and developed further but was never allowed to reach its potential. Anyways, a number of readers will like it and I do encourage those to decide for themselves if it is for them.

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1h
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Prakhar_Pandey_1394

Story is interesting but somtimes story pace is either very fast or slow, sometimes seems bit repetitive and there could be more character development as there is no interaction with student in 2&3 year in academy but dozens of time MC lost in self monolog and he only trains but still interesting and give it a try and update are delayed in past two months

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7d
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Ghan_Joo

This novel had a lot of potential at the start but it's been going downhill for a while. MC with devour skill and physic and for some reason only used it at the start on weak beasts to get either useless , repetitive or convenient. When he got access to stronger beasts he stopped using it. The author wastes a lot of time talking about philosophical BS either irrelevant to the story or already wrote about it. MC's main affinity is shadow and he only has 2 basic lame attack skills (that he uses at least) The shadow element is wasted on him. MC complains about his skills being low lvl when he could have abused his clone ability .The dude had a portable HQ/Space , infinte mana can't understand why he only use it sparingly. MC is dumb and if you aren't convinced by now ,the man goes to a beast tide claiming it's a Exp heaven and at the same breath how he can't show his skills and the beasts lower tier than him don't give him any Exp -_- .

1mth
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Brandon_Hook

no romance tag but harem? its not one of those novels with alot of love interests and a dense/indifferent mc right?

3mth
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RoadWolfProduction

Hey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏

5mth
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Sathish_Annarapu

Damn bro! the mc is literally a walking calamity bruh. Anyway I like the novel. Hoping for the updates

5mth
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sidharth_singh

Good Novel Gives many New chapter please

6mth
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STBull100

A good start to a well written novel. Looking forward to more chapters 😁

6mth
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