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"It’s a good novel, and I really enjoy the story overall, but the author tends to dive too deep into technical details. Buttt it's still very good to read.
In the beginning this was a great story, with lots of potential and interesting characters and developments. However in later chapters the author is clearly plagiarizing (Getting a Technology System in Modern Day) after reading 150+ chapters it is severely disappointed that this is how the author ends up writing the story.
do you use spell check you have so mean works that are missing letters get a editor to check your work it is a good book
For me, the story and mc building has been good up to a point. I feel like there is too much unresolved BS holding up the story. meeting his parents, unresolved enemies that just seem to continuely compound instead of being dealt with i.e Richard, Noah, Jagesh, the government/politicians, and the tech industry. IMO it's time for some closure with a few of these things and time to move on to other exploits.
Nice story, like this genre, the world and story could have developed with a bit more depth, mc progress is a little... he could have been a bit more ruthless, overall nice mesh up with Getting A Technology System In Modern Day ,
I'm only giving u this rating because things r different but u pretty much copied getting a technology system in modern day and you changed it where they have no mana so there you go and the female is way more active in the story
A great novel to read. I just think MC character development is a bit slow like till ch 73 he isn't decisive at all he should get rid of the bad guys but leave them for the time being because he's too weak and doesn't have enough influence. Can he not think of contacting his enemies enemy and provide info for them so he doesn't have to do the dirty work like why the hell he does contacts jay's father (diaper or something don't remember his name) he could make the same amount of money with just a few moths work, and thanks author for the good work I just feel that MC is smart in some fields and the other dumb that's my humble opinion. And forgive me for any writing mistakes, English isn't my mother language.
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why does the plot the same as the other novel called " technology system in modern day world"? for me its the same progress in this story.
For everyone who likes technology mixed with some fantasy like a system, this novel is definitely for you. I’m currently at chapter 188 and I’m really loving the pace so far: not too fast and not too slow. We follow the growth of Evan( the mc), an hardworking boy whose incredible intelligence is only overshadowed by his abusing adoptive parents. The arrival of the system makes Evan’s potential shine through and finally giving the opportunity to set himself free. P.S. It’s also already been suggested that the plot will not stop with Earth, but there are whole other universes out there, even ones with magic. so I’m super hyped for the future to come. Keep up the good work author, this novel is starting to become a masterpiece.
I was really interested in the story and starting was quite promising but MC is really hard to watch. The MC get a system, system provides him max comprehension and he started a tea shop selling the magical tea he got rewarded by the system when he is a weak nobody. This attracts the bad guys,but before solving that he starts developing a super software and attracts the attention of richest in the world 😞. it's fine that MC takes time to decisive and not so wimpy as he was constantly tortured by adopted parents but he gets nosy and try to solve other's problems before clearing his own. what is even more frustrating is that he doesn't have any common sense. i don't know if it changes after 81 ( i only read till here)
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A good read Its just eerily similar to another novel that also involves technology i have seen before is this based in that?
can't stop reading this one so far. most other novels lose me in the first couple chapters, I'm looking forward to seeing how this one plays out.
I got baited. Wish fulfillment system based in India which but mc’s name is Evan which is a common American name and can be traced back to welsh. Authors like to Americanize shit which is Kinda annoying. I feel it’s better for authors to make up a world rather than base it off real life but hey whatever attracts you widest amount of people is best I guess.
2 chapters in and I can see a lot of similarities from an Indian movie I know " Ala vaikuntapuram lo "
author is this a harem novel or not if it is then is there Yuri in harem not a fan of it
the story is great just want to say don't describe all the store item until it is necessary but overall great work keep up writing new chapter
a good read with a fresh concept. there isn't any cliche and mc doesn't make stupid decisions but you can feel the character development as you read more and the system isn't unreasonably op. all in all a great find keep up the good work author
im loving it so far, definitely good wn so i recommend it.. also the main country of this wn seems to be india... its a first i must say... but the mc seems to have quite a complicated background, but we'll see. DEFINITELY RECOMMEND IT. AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK SO FAR, AUTHOR!
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
This is a great story. No annoying clichés, good pacing and great storytelling.
I love this novel so far I like how the mc is a clam character and takes things step by step and I like how the mc doesn’t do all the tasks that the system gives because it not what he wants which gives a new light to this novel one thing that i like the author to do is not to lock the chapters to early do it when the story starts like between 40 to 60 that’s good because people get to get a rough idea about the story and will like to buy the extra chapters and once lock you can’t changed it which a lot of authors do and people don’t like to pay one author mess up and lock his chapters to 5 which made a lot of people mad and since he can’t change it the novel went down hell. Good luck love it so far just some tip
I’m loving this novel so far. Please continue to update cause I’m invested at this point
It is interesting so far I love novels like this with advanced technology and growing oneself looking forward to future chapters
chapter 261 here HAHAHH pangea? HAHAH very similar to aron and nova with GAIA OS?
"It’s a good novel, and I really enjoy the story overall, but the author tends to dive too deep into technical details. Buttt it's still very good to read.
In the beginning this was a great story, with lots of potential and interesting characters and developments. However in later chapters the author is clearly plagiarizing (Getting a Technology System in Modern Day) after reading 150+ chapters it is severely disappointed that this is how the author ends up writing the story.
do you use spell check you have so mean works that are missing letters get a editor to check your work it is a good book
For me, the story and mc building has been good up to a point. I feel like there is too much unresolved BS holding up the story. meeting his parents, unresolved enemies that just seem to continuely compound instead of being dealt with i.e Richard, Noah, Jagesh, the government/politicians, and the tech industry. IMO it's time for some closure with a few of these things and time to move on to other exploits.
Nice story, like this genre, the world and story could have developed with a bit more depth, mc progress is a little... he could have been a bit more ruthless, overall nice mesh up with Getting A Technology System In Modern Day ,
I'm only giving u this rating because things r different but u pretty much copied getting a technology system in modern day and you changed it where they have no mana so there you go and the female is way more active in the story
A great novel to read. I just think MC character development is a bit slow like till ch 73 he isn't decisive at all he should get rid of the bad guys but leave them for the time being because he's too weak and doesn't have enough influence. Can he not think of contacting his enemies enemy and provide info for them so he doesn't have to do the dirty work like why the hell he does contacts jay's father (diaper or something don't remember his name) he could make the same amount of money with just a few moths work, and thanks author for the good work I just feel that MC is smart in some fields and the other dumb that's my humble opinion. And forgive me for any writing mistakes, English isn't my mother language.
揭示劇透 why does the plot the same as the other novel called " technology system in modern day world"? for me its the same progress in this story.
For everyone who likes technology mixed with some fantasy like a system, this novel is definitely for you. I’m currently at chapter 188 and I’m really loving the pace so far: not too fast and not too slow. We follow the growth of Evan( the mc), an hardworking boy whose incredible intelligence is only overshadowed by his abusing adoptive parents. The arrival of the system makes Evan’s potential shine through and finally giving the opportunity to set himself free. P.S. It’s also already been suggested that the plot will not stop with Earth, but there are whole other universes out there, even ones with magic. so I’m super hyped for the future to come. Keep up the good work author, this novel is starting to become a masterpiece.
I was really interested in the story and starting was quite promising but MC is really hard to watch. The MC get a system, system provides him max comprehension and he started a tea shop selling the magical tea he got rewarded by the system when he is a weak nobody. This attracts the bad guys,but before solving that he starts developing a super software and attracts the attention of richest in the world 😞. it's fine that MC takes time to decisive and not so wimpy as he was constantly tortured by adopted parents but he gets nosy and try to solve other's problems before clearing his own. what is even more frustrating is that he doesn't have any common sense. i don't know if it changes after 81 ( i only read till here)
揭示劇透 A good read Its just eerily similar to another novel that also involves technology i have seen before is this based in that?
can't stop reading this one so far. most other novels lose me in the first couple chapters, I'm looking forward to seeing how this one plays out.
I got baited. Wish fulfillment system based in India which but mc’s name is Evan which is a common American name and can be traced back to welsh. Authors like to Americanize shit which is Kinda annoying. I feel it’s better for authors to make up a world rather than base it off real life but hey whatever attracts you widest amount of people is best I guess.
2 chapters in and I can see a lot of similarities from an Indian movie I know " Ala vaikuntapuram lo "
author is this a harem novel or not if it is then is there Yuri in harem not a fan of it
the story is great just want to say don't describe all the store item until it is necessary but overall great work keep up writing new chapter
a good read with a fresh concept. there isn't any cliche and mc doesn't make stupid decisions but you can feel the character development as you read more and the system isn't unreasonably op. all in all a great find keep up the good work author
im loving it so far, definitely good wn so i recommend it.. also the main country of this wn seems to be india... its a first i must say... but the mc seems to have quite a complicated background, but we'll see. DEFINITELY RECOMMEND IT. AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK SO FAR, AUTHOR!
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
This is a great story. No annoying clichés, good pacing and great storytelling.
I love this novel so far I like how the mc is a clam character and takes things step by step and I like how the mc doesn’t do all the tasks that the system gives because it not what he wants which gives a new light to this novel one thing that i like the author to do is not to lock the chapters to early do it when the story starts like between 40 to 60 that’s good because people get to get a rough idea about the story and will like to buy the extra chapters and once lock you can’t changed it which a lot of authors do and people don’t like to pay one author mess up and lock his chapters to 5 which made a lot of people mad and since he can’t change it the novel went down hell. Good luck love it so far just some tip
I’m loving this novel so far. Please continue to update cause I’m invested at this point
It is interesting so far I love novels like this with advanced technology and growing oneself looking forward to future chapters
chapter 261 here HAHAHH pangea? HAHAH very similar to aron and nova with GAIA OS?