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Can definitely see some influence from overgeared but it also is very much its own story. Only 200 chapters in so far but thoroughly enjoying the adventure! Looking forward to how you expand the world more.
Ive been reading this and have enjoyed it quite a lot but one thing I don't like is how everyone outside of the MC's friend group are such terrible people for no reason whatsoever and it gets annoying with how often it appears.
This story is simply a children's tale about friendship, with a childlike drama that seems completely silly to an adult. Therefore, if you are over 18, I am not sure you will find it interesting to read. The story is suitable for its target audience, but others may want to pass on it.
Just wanted to say it's been a while since a story has really gotten me hooked. Loving LBP so far, and I'm hoping to see how far it goes.
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Goddess of luck + unrivalled determination = Op mc. keep the good work.[img=strong]
It's a good novel that is well written and the pacing is good. The only negative is the MC's character enrages me to a nonsensical point. She is super pushy and seems to do everything in her power to misunderstand what is happening to the MC or his words. Incredibly annoying.
Its good, i cant say nothing about writing quality but i will say my personal review, the characters, the creator have one personality for each thats fine and gives something to the novel, the history is good, it isnt slow or fast and its complete, the mc is overpowered type but slow to get overpowered, not stupid, good people, hard to get friends but he knows that they can be his friends, highly recomended and its the type that you can forget and read again like the first time
揭示劇透
I've read hundreds of books and this story is definitely up there on my list of favorites. I love how the story flows between the game world and the real world. The system and skills are all extremely thought out and detailed.
it's the best story, so far I have read. it's fantastic. if you are looking for more adventure, twists and plots... this book is for you. please support our author to keep him motivated and release more chapters... keep up the good work bro.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great book so far love the characters, story and world building. Can’t wait see what happens next. It’s in my favourites list for sure.
absolutely LOVE this story! highly recommend! it's become one of my absolute favorites on WN. Leon(MC) isn't not stuck up or a jerk in any way, and he is a great family guy who's extremely motivated to accomplish his goals. the world background is fairly detailed but not overly so that it becomes distracting. this story also has GREAT comedy moments that absolutely tickled my soul! 100/10 rating imo.❤️👍👌
I'm at ch. 35 and while initially it was good it's quickly becoming dull. Nothing has happened and he hasn't leveled up once or really accomplished anything. Nothing of interest has happened or even seems to be happening time soon. Da fks the point of a passive leveling system if it's that slow.
I read the description and it looks really really good.... But there is one question does the game merge into the real world at some point and/or does the game become real and is the MC with the girls in real life if and when they find out who the guy is if the game stays a game or at least they get to know him and be with him either way hownit all happens and if they know the real him and everything?? Because honestly I really hope they end up with him no matter how it all plays out!
I like the original version of the novel as well. I like the changes made to this version that adds additional information and events that make it better. I like the fact that the novel focuses on both aspects of the main characters life ( the game and real world ). It makes reading this novel more realistic and enjoyable.
this definitely became one of my favorite novels almost immediately. It has excellent pacing and the world building is definitely top notch. broken definitely deserves his name as a broken character OP and yet not at the same time a perfect blend
First, i love this book before the rewrite and i used to wonder why there's no update. It turns out there's new book with the new title and it kinda complete the plot of the fist book. All i want to say is i hope you keep updating this until it's finished.
Awesome story line and great character design. It is one of my top 10 story and extremely enjoyable. The story pulls you and makes you feel like your right there in the book. Can't wait to see how it processes 😁
I'm giving this a review because i enjoyed the original novel this author wrote, but i won't be reading this as it makes me feel like i wasted 200+ chapters worth of coins on its predecessor, which isnt cheap. However the story is great and is well worth a read, to fresh readers at least, good luck on the rewrite author-san.
Hey there, welcome! I created this space to answer any questions you may have. As a non-native English speaker, I worked on this book by myself. So, if you come across any errors in the writing, please feel free to let me know. I created a complete document about the book. It includes everything, from book details to stats progression, character sheets, equipment, and skills. I will share the document with you later on in the auxiliary chapter. Enjoy your reading!
I am liking this re make as well although I am noticing a few changes here and there. I am wondering will you go for larger changes compared to the original, or more small changes that may end up causing larger changes?
I really liked the original version, so before I get invested into this one, are you going to drop this one too? Why would this time be different? Should I disregard everything I learned from legendary level zero?
Hi... Readers... What's in store for you in this story? Please take a moment to read my summary. [img=Mad] 1. It's a VR game where the MC lives two lives: one in the game and one in real life. But mostly, he will dive into the game. [img=recommend] 2. Blacksmith? Kingdom Building? YES, YES, YES. The MC will spend a lot of time crafting items, building his own city... and eventually, building his Kingdom! [img=gift] 3. Wives? Yes! The MC will marry (Is this a spoiler?) The game world runs three times faster than real life, so he will spend years inside the game. [img=Shocked] 4. Romance? Yes! Harem? Uhm... Yes? Yes! [img=Loving it] 5. Action? Yes, but this novel will focus more on character relationships, friendships, romance, and life inside the game, which is not always about fighting monsters. But don't worry, there will be big battles, from one-on-one duels and party raids to massive wars! [img=gift] 6. The plot is very thick! I've made extensive Google Sheets to document everything. But don't fret, all details will be revealed gradually as the story progresses. [img=golden ticket] 7. Characters? They are alive, with their own personalities and emotions. They aren't just random figures thrown into the story. You'll definitely feel connected to them as you delve deeper into the narrative. [img=recommend] 8. One thing I pride myself on is CONSISTENCY. In the status, skill names, character names and backgrounds, equipment details, and items owned by the MC. Challenge the stat points and numbers shown in each chapter. I'm meticulous with my notes! [img=proud] 9. For those who love detailed novels in the gaming genre, I hope you'll find satisfaction in reading this story. Everything is presented in a structured and well-organized manner. [img=exp] 10. Ask me more. [img=recommend]
Can definitely see some influence from overgeared but it also is very much its own story. Only 200 chapters in so far but thoroughly enjoying the adventure! Looking forward to how you expand the world more.
Ive been reading this and have enjoyed it quite a lot but one thing I don't like is how everyone outside of the MC's friend group are such terrible people for no reason whatsoever and it gets annoying with how often it appears.
This story is simply a children's tale about friendship, with a childlike drama that seems completely silly to an adult. Therefore, if you are over 18, I am not sure you will find it interesting to read. The story is suitable for its target audience, but others may want to pass on it.
Just wanted to say it's been a while since a story has really gotten me hooked. Loving LBP so far, and I'm hoping to see how far it goes.
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Goddess of luck + unrivalled determination = Op mc. keep the good work.[img=strong]
It's a good novel that is well written and the pacing is good. The only negative is the MC's character enrages me to a nonsensical point. She is super pushy and seems to do everything in her power to misunderstand what is happening to the MC or his words. Incredibly annoying.
Its good, i cant say nothing about writing quality but i will say my personal review, the characters, the creator have one personality for each thats fine and gives something to the novel, the history is good, it isnt slow or fast and its complete, the mc is overpowered type but slow to get overpowered, not stupid, good people, hard to get friends but he knows that they can be his friends, highly recomended and its the type that you can forget and read again like the first time
揭示劇透 I've read hundreds of books and this story is definitely up there on my list of favorites. I love how the story flows between the game world and the real world. The system and skills are all extremely thought out and detailed.
it's the best story, so far I have read. it's fantastic. if you are looking for more adventure, twists and plots... this book is for you. please support our author to keep him motivated and release more chapters... keep up the good work bro.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great book so far love the characters, story and world building. Can’t wait see what happens next. It’s in my favourites list for sure.
absolutely LOVE this story! highly recommend! it's become one of my absolute favorites on WN. Leon(MC) isn't not stuck up or a jerk in any way, and he is a great family guy who's extremely motivated to accomplish his goals. the world background is fairly detailed but not overly so that it becomes distracting. this story also has GREAT comedy moments that absolutely tickled my soul! 100/10 rating imo.❤️👍👌
I'm at ch. 35 and while initially it was good it's quickly becoming dull. Nothing has happened and he hasn't leveled up once or really accomplished anything. Nothing of interest has happened or even seems to be happening time soon. Da fks the point of a passive leveling system if it's that slow.
I read the description and it looks really really good.... But there is one question does the game merge into the real world at some point and/or does the game become real and is the MC with the girls in real life if and when they find out who the guy is if the game stays a game or at least they get to know him and be with him either way hownit all happens and if they know the real him and everything?? Because honestly I really hope they end up with him no matter how it all plays out!
I like the original version of the novel as well. I like the changes made to this version that adds additional information and events that make it better. I like the fact that the novel focuses on both aspects of the main characters life ( the game and real world ). It makes reading this novel more realistic and enjoyable.
this definitely became one of my favorite novels almost immediately. It has excellent pacing and the world building is definitely top notch. broken definitely deserves his name as a broken character OP and yet not at the same time a perfect blend
First, i love this book before the rewrite and i used to wonder why there's no update. It turns out there's new book with the new title and it kinda complete the plot of the fist book. All i want to say is i hope you keep updating this until it's finished.
Awesome story line and great character design. It is one of my top 10 story and extremely enjoyable. The story pulls you and makes you feel like your right there in the book. Can't wait to see how it processes 😁
I'm giving this a review because i enjoyed the original novel this author wrote, but i won't be reading this as it makes me feel like i wasted 200+ chapters worth of coins on its predecessor, which isnt cheap. However the story is great and is well worth a read, to fresh readers at least, good luck on the rewrite author-san.
Hey there, welcome! I created this space to answer any questions you may have. As a non-native English speaker, I worked on this book by myself. So, if you come across any errors in the writing, please feel free to let me know. I created a complete document about the book. It includes everything, from book details to stats progression, character sheets, equipment, and skills. I will share the document with you later on in the auxiliary chapter. Enjoy your reading!
I am liking this re make as well although I am noticing a few changes here and there. I am wondering will you go for larger changes compared to the original, or more small changes that may end up causing larger changes?
I really liked the original version, so before I get invested into this one, are you going to drop this one too? Why would this time be different? Should I disregard everything I learned from legendary level zero?
Hi... Readers... What's in store for you in this story? Please take a moment to read my summary. [img=Mad] 1. It's a VR game where the MC lives two lives: one in the game and one in real life. But mostly, he will dive into the game. [img=recommend] 2. Blacksmith? Kingdom Building? YES, YES, YES. The MC will spend a lot of time crafting items, building his own city... and eventually, building his Kingdom! [img=gift] 3. Wives? Yes! The MC will marry (Is this a spoiler?) The game world runs three times faster than real life, so he will spend years inside the game. [img=Shocked] 4. Romance? Yes! Harem? Uhm... Yes? Yes! [img=Loving it] 5. Action? Yes, but this novel will focus more on character relationships, friendships, romance, and life inside the game, which is not always about fighting monsters. But don't worry, there will be big battles, from one-on-one duels and party raids to massive wars! [img=gift] 6. The plot is very thick! I've made extensive Google Sheets to document everything. But don't fret, all details will be revealed gradually as the story progresses. [img=golden ticket] 7. Characters? They are alive, with their own personalities and emotions. They aren't just random figures thrown into the story. You'll definitely feel connected to them as you delve deeper into the narrative. [img=recommend] 8. One thing I pride myself on is CONSISTENCY. In the status, skill names, character names and backgrounds, equipment details, and items owned by the MC. Challenge the stat points and numbers shown in each chapter. I'm meticulous with my notes! [img=proud] 9. For those who love detailed novels in the gaming genre, I hope you'll find satisfaction in reading this story. Everything is presented in a structured and well-organized manner. [img=exp] 10. Ask me more. [img=recommend]