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This isn't the fanfic that I expected it to be. Losing interest when the "another world" was too unfamiliar to me.
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Fellow writer here *saberglory* would you like to work with me in a novel project am writing I need something with your writing expertise if so please contact me (Angola number: +44-954919096 Am sure it will pick your interest!
The story is too heavy and too dark, Well, I expected it to be lighter, simpler and more casual so I was caught off guard reading it while expecting it to be a relaxing story. With its moderately stressful story and too extreme power standard, it literally makes my head hurt while reading it. But at least, the Bofuri characters are not deviant too much from their originals.
great story and it's a bit sad that theirs to little fanfics about bofuri it has Soo much more to it for a story.
I went into this fic expecting it to be a lot more lighthearted than it is. The setting of the world they are in is much darker than bofuri that does not match very well for me.
Ya I'm gonna have to give this 5 stars in spite of tge fact that the author is curently doing tge dbz thing with making the villain group mysteriously nearly as strong as the main cast or slightly stronger in sone cases.
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oh man there's a fanfic to this and it's an Isekai all I have to say is👇 but it would be funny to see there faces when they realize there not in the game anymore
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very good story with great potential🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
personally I like it. this follows the usual trend of an isekai with one's game character. I however don't know in what world they got transported. is it a isekai to another anime or a komplett new world? would be nice to know, for now my rating is: 4 stars in writing quality 3 stars in story development 3 stars in character design 5 stars in Updating stability 2 stars for world backgrounds
I like it so far, especially since it's a Bofuri Fic. Will the rest of Maple Tree Guild eventually isekai to Maple and crew, or will it just be the four for the rest of the story?
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Because I'm fan of the anime and like your work even though maple is naive I'm not going to judge the author because maple personality was too lively to change her mind set drastically.
Does mine mean like an overlord is pretty cool it's sad that the whole group didn't come I really want to see the world of the rising shield hero I want to have that will work out she was in it
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love the book so far even though it does have a lot of chapters keep up the good work .............................................................................
Отбило желание читать слабохарактерность MC. Таких фанфиков слишком много. °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°
This isn't the fanfic that I expected it to be. Losing interest when the "another world" was too unfamiliar to me.
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Fellow writer here *saberglory* would you like to work with me in a novel project am writing I need something with your writing expertise if so please contact me (Angola number: +44-954919096 Am sure it will pick your interest!
The story is too heavy and too dark, Well, I expected it to be lighter, simpler and more casual so I was caught off guard reading it while expecting it to be a relaxing story. With its moderately stressful story and too extreme power standard, it literally makes my head hurt while reading it. But at least, the Bofuri characters are not deviant too much from their originals.
great story and it's a bit sad that theirs to little fanfics about bofuri it has Soo much more to it for a story.
I went into this fic expecting it to be a lot more lighthearted than it is. The setting of the world they are in is much darker than bofuri that does not match very well for me.
Ya I'm gonna have to give this 5 stars in spite of tge fact that the author is curently doing tge dbz thing with making the villain group mysteriously nearly as strong as the main cast or slightly stronger in sone cases.
揭示劇透 oh man there's a fanfic to this and it's an Isekai all I have to say is👇 but it would be funny to see there faces when they realize there not in the game anymore
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very good story with great potential🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
personally I like it. this follows the usual trend of an isekai with one's game character. I however don't know in what world they got transported. is it a isekai to another anime or a komplett new world? would be nice to know, for now my rating is: 4 stars in writing quality 3 stars in story development 3 stars in character design 5 stars in Updating stability 2 stars for world backgrounds
I like it so far, especially since it's a Bofuri Fic. Will the rest of Maple Tree Guild eventually isekai to Maple and crew, or will it just be the four for the rest of the story?
揭示劇透 Because I'm fan of the anime and like your work even though maple is naive I'm not going to judge the author because maple personality was too lively to change her mind set drastically.
Does mine mean like an overlord is pretty cool it's sad that the whole group didn't come I really want to see the world of the rising shield hero I want to have that will work out she was in it
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love the book so far even though it does have a lot of chapters keep up the good work .............................................................................
Отбило желание читать слабохарактерность MC. Таких фанфиков слишком много. °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°