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I don't know what to say...concept is good but dialogues are messed up, chapters too. I stopped reading after chapter 5. If Author correct whole story I will come back and rate this higher. I cheer for you Creator. Good luck 👍
I don't know what to say...concept is good but dialogues are messed up, chapters too. I stopped reading after chapter 5. If Author correct whole story I will come back and rate this higher. I cheer for you Creator. Good luck 👍