5評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
4/2/5/5/5 A hopeful review. As it stands, there's not much content in this story to accurately judge, but with the way it's progressing I could absolutely see myself placing this fanfiction in my category of favorites. The setting is perfect, set just after the 2nd ninja war, with the protagonist being in the same year as Team Minato. The protagonist Asahi is a little cold/stoic due to the seriousness of his situation (having been placed just before the 3rd war), but he can sometimes let out his more fun side when he gets worked up, this makes for a compelling character to follow and one that's easy to insert/immerse yourself with. The translation is a bit stiff and hard to follow at times but it's more than passable. My hope for this series dwindles a bit when I see how the translator at one point just left this series sitting without updates for a month, so I'm afraid I have to take away several stars there.
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I'm gonna rate it 5 stars first. You guys do share your views after some chapters. Looking forward to it.
I really really like it ❤️ I wish that author doesn't lose inspiration and continue writing^•^
4/2/5/5/5 A hopeful review. As it stands, there's not much content in this story to accurately judge, but with the way it's progressing I could absolutely see myself placing this fanfiction in my category of favorites. The setting is perfect, set just after the 2nd ninja war, with the protagonist being in the same year as Team Minato. The protagonist Asahi is a little cold/stoic due to the seriousness of his situation (having been placed just before the 3rd war), but he can sometimes let out his more fun side when he gets worked up, this makes for a compelling character to follow and one that's easy to insert/immerse yourself with. The translation is a bit stiff and hard to follow at times but it's more than passable. My hope for this series dwindles a bit when I see how the translator at one point just left this series sitting without updates for a month, so I'm afraid I have to take away several stars there.
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I'm gonna rate it 5 stars first. You guys do share your views after some chapters. Looking forward to it.
I really really like it ❤️ I wish that author doesn't lose inspiration and continue writing^•^