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Estoy enganchado y esperando el siguiente capítulo de esta gran historia que me inspira a más después de todo esta historia se vuelve mas interesa para una persona cuando más profundiza la historia de cote
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Oi come back author. Don't be like the fan fiction writers who stop writing because they're too lazy. Don't become wat u swore to destroy. Good story tho. Best cote ff I dare say
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I don’t what to say, the premise is good but maybe chapter 16 and 17 better remove and his mother there made me lose sense of immersion.
One of the best cote fanfics I've seen the only problem i have is the slow updates overall it's fantastic
A wonderful and interesting novel I've enjoyed more than I expected and I find myself after reading every chapter I stronger to another chapter and has made the characteristics and characteristics of characters wonderfully I wish you will continue with this level and thank you for your efforts
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this shit so peak bro. 😭 fire mind games and psychological battles. actually believable characters + good portrayal drug-induced moments at times (still fire) the real yamagod 🙏
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That's a amazing story, i just hope yamauchi humbles the class D somehow 😂. I don't know why i don't like horikita so see her lose would be fun.. -w-'. Anyway i will wait for the future updates, keep going with the great work!
-Ok overall I just want to say that the quality of writing is extremely good. You really get the classroom of the elite vibe from how the author starts off chapters, along with good grammar and format. Definitely a 5 star author when it comes to writing skills. -The updated stability I rated 4 stars because there aren’t many chapters out yet and I binged all of them so I’m not sure how consistent the author is. Based on the time each chapter came out though I thought 4 stars was adequate. -Ok story development I rated as a 3 stars. Not to be harsh just because as I stated before there aren’t too many chapters out at this point of writing my review. Also because I’m on the fence about a plot point the author introduced, but I will see what direction they take with it and not be like you keyboard warriors and complain about it until they just stop updating their story. -For character design how could I not rate this a 5 stars. Its an extremely unique take for a classroom of the elite fanfiction. I love how the author starts the main storyline right as yamauchi would be getting expelled. Yet the person whos thoughts we follow as yamauchi also gets good background and isn’t extremely overpowered. -Finally I rated the world background as a solid 4 start. I’m not going to just give out a 5 star rating just because I’m all caught up on the light novels. I feel like as long as you know the world of classroom of the elite you will enjoy this story. Comprehensive overall rating is a 4.2 as of chapter 20 hope this review encourages more readers to this book. Let’s blow this 💩 up guys trust me this author has talent!
A very good no beyond good Cote fanfic in my opinion. Also the tricks used here are no childish tricks all are calculated very well. I highly recommend this fanfic to you all.
me gusto mucho no vi ningun fanfic que toma como protagonista personajes como yamauchi es algo nuevo mas mas.........................................
Five stars all around, this is a masterclass of writing. The MC isn't the smartest, or strongest, and at the moment, he isn't well-liked by the class (for good reason) and that's a great thing. The tension between the MC and the other characters was a joy to read. The drama, inter-personal relationships and mind-games are great to read. Keep up the good work, it feels like this story is going to be a blast.
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I am not gonna lie, I did not expected it to be this good. the story is going in a great direction, I hope author don't drop it. the writing quality is solid - 5 ⭐ the grammar is on point - 5 ⭐ the character of new Yamauchi is also very interesting. -5 ⭐ And all the other aspects are also good. I am giving this ff a solid 4.9 star ⭐ Review.
This is such an interesting take on cote, also yamachi lowkey in that dp looks like adachi from p4
I give it a 4.9 out of 5. It is going in a great direction. Very interesting too. Basically what would happen if someone who is not strong or smart got into a world with prior knowledge. Even more interesting is that it's Yamauchi. EVEN MORE INTERESTING is that it's during his expulsion. So people might also notice that he underwent SIGNIFICANT changes. Really interesting take. I would love to see more.
This is a really good and unique cote ff. The writing quality, spelling and grammar are all on point. I don't really have any major criticism about this ff. It has a good start and has been an enjoyable read so far so I think that others should at least give this ff a try. Btw Yamagod is the goat.
An interesting idea with another person in Yamauchi's body, with a backstory and all that. Although it is now obvious that the main character is definitely not strong and cannot be, neither intellectually nor physically, since this is Yamauchi's body. He also doesn't seem to know how to fight, and he is also a loner. It turns out to be an interesting main character with the abilities of an extra in everything except IT skills and probably gaming, but that's so-so. I am interested in the continuation, but I don't have any hopes for the main character, because there are no prerequisites. He hasn't done a single workout, his body is weak, he reads well, yes, but this is a work of art, and he has a lot of fun playing games, and in the end he broke his leg because of Ryuuen. Well, you can evaluate courage or recklessness, depending on how you look at it. Plot 4.5/5, Main Character 4/5, Main Character's abilities 2/5, Fanfic writing 4.5/5.
Estoy enganchado y esperando el siguiente capítulo de esta gran historia que me inspira a más después de todo esta historia se vuelve mas interesa para una persona cuando más profundiza la historia de cote
揭示劇透 Oi come back author. Don't be like the fan fiction writers who stop writing because they're too lazy. Don't become wat u swore to destroy. Good story tho. Best cote ff I dare say
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I don’t what to say, the premise is good but maybe chapter 16 and 17 better remove and his mother there made me lose sense of immersion.
One of the best cote fanfics I've seen the only problem i have is the slow updates overall it's fantastic
A wonderful and interesting novel I've enjoyed more than I expected and I find myself after reading every chapter I stronger to another chapter and has made the characteristics and characteristics of characters wonderfully I wish you will continue with this level and thank you for your efforts
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this shit so peak bro. 😭 fire mind games and psychological battles. actually believable characters + good portrayal drug-induced moments at times (still fire) the real yamagod 🙏
love it but i need moar >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
That's a amazing story, i just hope yamauchi humbles the class D somehow 😂. I don't know why i don't like horikita so see her lose would be fun.. -w-'. Anyway i will wait for the future updates, keep going with the great work!
-Ok overall I just want to say that the quality of writing is extremely good. You really get the classroom of the elite vibe from how the author starts off chapters, along with good grammar and format. Definitely a 5 star author when it comes to writing skills. -The updated stability I rated 4 stars because there aren’t many chapters out yet and I binged all of them so I’m not sure how consistent the author is. Based on the time each chapter came out though I thought 4 stars was adequate. -Ok story development I rated as a 3 stars. Not to be harsh just because as I stated before there aren’t too many chapters out at this point of writing my review. Also because I’m on the fence about a plot point the author introduced, but I will see what direction they take with it and not be like you keyboard warriors and complain about it until they just stop updating their story. -For character design how could I not rate this a 5 stars. Its an extremely unique take for a classroom of the elite fanfiction. I love how the author starts the main storyline right as yamauchi would be getting expelled. Yet the person whos thoughts we follow as yamauchi also gets good background and isn’t extremely overpowered. -Finally I rated the world background as a solid 4 start. I’m not going to just give out a 5 star rating just because I’m all caught up on the light novels. I feel like as long as you know the world of classroom of the elite you will enjoy this story. Comprehensive overall rating is a 4.2 as of chapter 20 hope this review encourages more readers to this book. Let’s blow this 💩 up guys trust me this author has talent!
A very good no beyond good Cote fanfic in my opinion. Also the tricks used here are no childish tricks all are calculated very well. I highly recommend this fanfic to you all.
me gusto mucho no vi ningun fanfic que toma como protagonista personajes como yamauchi es algo nuevo mas mas.........................................
Five stars all around, this is a masterclass of writing. The MC isn't the smartest, or strongest, and at the moment, he isn't well-liked by the class (for good reason) and that's a great thing. The tension between the MC and the other characters was a joy to read. The drama, inter-personal relationships and mind-games are great to read. Keep up the good work, it feels like this story is going to be a blast.
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I am not gonna lie, I did not expected it to be this good. the story is going in a great direction, I hope author don't drop it. the writing quality is solid - 5 ⭐ the grammar is on point - 5 ⭐ the character of new Yamauchi is also very interesting. -5 ⭐ And all the other aspects are also good. I am giving this ff a solid 4.9 star ⭐ Review.
This is such an interesting take on cote, also yamachi lowkey in that dp looks like adachi from p4
I give it a 4.9 out of 5. It is going in a great direction. Very interesting too. Basically what would happen if someone who is not strong or smart got into a world with prior knowledge. Even more interesting is that it's Yamauchi. EVEN MORE INTERESTING is that it's during his expulsion. So people might also notice that he underwent SIGNIFICANT changes. Really interesting take. I would love to see more.
This is a really good and unique cote ff. The writing quality, spelling and grammar are all on point. I don't really have any major criticism about this ff. It has a good start and has been an enjoyable read so far so I think that others should at least give this ff a try. Btw Yamagod is the goat.
An interesting idea with another person in Yamauchi's body, with a backstory and all that. Although it is now obvious that the main character is definitely not strong and cannot be, neither intellectually nor physically, since this is Yamauchi's body. He also doesn't seem to know how to fight, and he is also a loner. It turns out to be an interesting main character with the abilities of an extra in everything except IT skills and probably gaming, but that's so-so. I am interested in the continuation, but I don't have any hopes for the main character, because there are no prerequisites. He hasn't done a single workout, his body is weak, he reads well, yes, but this is a work of art, and he has a lot of fun playing games, and in the end he broke his leg because of Ryuuen. Well, you can evaluate courage or recklessness, depending on how you look at it. Plot 4.5/5, Main Character 4/5, Main Character's abilities 2/5, Fanfic writing 4.5/5.