2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Alright, so here's my review, as the Poison Tester. English quality is great, only saw one typo so far. Updating stability, also great. Now here's where it gets a bit iffy: So our two MCs have attained godlike power. The female lead is the god of vampires, and the male lead has absorbed the souls of billions of mortals. They feel like they deserve to retire, so they go to Harry Potter's wizarding world. What I don't understand is why they do any of the things they do. If they wanted a leisurely retirement to get some alone time, they could have kept a low profile, but for some reason they want jobs. If they wanted to experience something new, they wouldn't have gone to a world they already know everything about. They have godlike power, so why play at being little wizards?
Alright, so here's my review, as the Poison Tester. English quality is great, only saw one typo so far. Updating stability, also great. Now here's where it gets a bit iffy: So our two MCs have attained godlike power. The female lead is the god of vampires, and the male lead has absorbed the souls of billions of mortals. They feel like they deserve to retire, so they go to Harry Potter's wizarding world. What I don't understand is why they do any of the things they do. If they wanted a leisurely retirement to get some alone time, they could have kept a low profile, but for some reason they want jobs. If they wanted to experience something new, they wouldn't have gone to a world they already know everything about. They have godlike power, so why play at being little wizards?
Tjis story kind mans me feel sick and read 5 to 7 chapters