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This book is really really good but I do have a couple suggestions so I hope the Author can take a look and consider them... First is Y not get the MCs sister out of the organization she is in and then put her in his as like a high official this way she doesn't have to worry about being in that organization anymore and being attached to it and if the guy doesn't want to let her go then have the MC bring him into the dark Realm and then either kill him or leave him there and if he kills him then carve a message in his chest and send the body to the doorstep of the organization and tell them that if they come after her or her family that they will all be hunted... The second is Y not get the MCs mentor at the college and her to friends that helped the MC in the past to come to his organization and this way he can have at least 2 big families in his organization and this way he knows they wont back stab him and he can give the 3rd girl a research place and let her research whatever she wants this way he can make discoveries and get more funding and resources and have the MC even take control of some secret realms.. like have the MC go in and have a team wait outside this way he can take a look first and see if there is anything extremely valuable to take... And the MC still have to go back to the secret realm that has that tower that he went to when he was in his first year of high school and only maid it to the 4th level and this way he can gain mor things and sell them even though he doest need it... and Y not have the MC look for some resource point that dont have anyone or when its time to get some y not have him gain at least 5 and have them be breeding point, mineral points, healing plant points and any other point that r valuable this way he can have a ton of resources and income coming in right to him self and have the mentor and her friend that has the action house help him out with refining them and selling the things they get because if they enter his organization then it would be way better for him to use them and no one else unless he has the old Qiu or whatever his nam was that has the big croc have him or his nephew/the kid that the MC is working with now join his organization too and this way they can also make it a big thing for there organization to secure poit spots and get income coming from the people that want/need the help and the MC can use all of this to gain connections and see what if he can infiltrate other organizations or big families that r doing illegal things and take them down... And Y not have the book that is in the MCs head be able to take assistances like he did woth his sister but Y not have it so the MC is able to give them all the skills he has already amd when he gets new ones he can give them to him as well but he get a portion of there fragments and the MC is the only one aloud to unlock the new skills and give them out this way he can help the ones he takes as an assistant to become extremely strong and they r able to help him more in the future but they have to be people that he trust 100% and have it so if they go ro talk about they dont remember it but also have the MC be able to feel and have him be able to rip it out of there heads or kill them on the spot if they go to talk but at least have the MC confront the person that tried to talk about and if they admit that they where trying to talk about then have the MC not give them any new skills for awhile and punch them that way so they know they r lagging behind the others that did get the new skill and mabe have the MC be able to be able to look for evolution paths for other beasts and the mini-games for skills and some of the other things that he can only do for his beast this way he can tell the people he trust on what to do to make them stronger this way he can gain more favors and resources from them... And can u please get the MC a girlfriend already... it really sucks that he just stays to himself... maybe have the MC and his mentor get together or the mentors friend that her family owns the auction house especially if they come to his organization but it definitely be great for the 3 women to join his organization to help with everything and the research girl can have access to more things scenes it would in the exotic region and the MC can have teams search the region for things to let her research on and have the results be huge.. way better then where she is before if she joins the organization because they wouldnt let her do what she wants or needs to to get results... but please consider these Ideas because honestly it would be great to have the MCs sister and his mentor and her 2 friends come over to his organization this way it would help him a ton and have more support by at least 2 big families and even if that Qiu or whatever the name is has his nephew or whoever he is join to make a team for resource points would help a ton as well and it would definitely be more exciting to have the MC get a girlfriend already too because it seems like the MC is lonelywhen reading the book!!! I hope it gets taken inro consideration..
Addicting story, I caught up to 400+ chapters in a week. Only issue is the translator often mixes up he and she, him and her. Also I still get regularly confused when they use beast taming and beast Tamer, because it doesn't refer to what you think it does. I like the relatively fast pacing of the story, chapters don't feel like filler.
great novel amazimg potential just need to suffer with the translation other wise amazing work p.s :author or publisher i dont care u got a real gem here for the love of god fix your translation imean the several and i mean several name changes for same character in the same chapter pick aname and fix it up❗❗❗❗
hey great story qnd characrers and really good wrting my main problem is that there is inconsistency in names of creatures across chapter also therse amistake in writing of "beast tamer" instead of "tamed beast"
Other than the translation I have no complaints. Translation needs improvement, its better than mtl but still very bad
Overall great story, better translation than MTL. However the later chapters are split into parts when they were originally just 1 which seems like a money grab.
good story bad translating for example when a character is talking about their beasts they keep saying beast taming instead like what is the name of your beast taming instead of just beast
This is such a good taming story. I’ve Read to CH77 so far. I like that the beasts are the main forms of combat. As I’ve read other novels that say taming but it’s just they get a beast then use their own power. Great world so far and many little drops of thing to come in the future. Main character has some intelligence but is also not just a master. He trains and tries to find the loopholes when possible but also has hard work.
An interesting concept wasted on a terrible translation and supporting characters. The machine just butchers a bunch of the titles and the supporting characters are all horrible people but we’re supposed to like some of them because they’re related to the mc. I honestly think the cliche of an orphan mc would have been an improvement in this case.
is there anyway that more chapters can be put out quicker or more at a time?? It sucks reading 1 chapter then having to wait like a hole days just for 1 more especially when its in the middle of reading chapters that leave u hagging and have to wait for the next chapter to see or figure out what happens next!! I like the book a lot and has a lot of potential but the attitudes and actions of the stupid ugly crocodile and the stupid dragon that just takes and destroys everything r to much and the MC babys them way to much and then need to be tought lesses on what to do and not to do!!! And he doesnt have to always have the stupid beasts out of the beast space because thats what the beast space is for!!! The MC needs to sto being a puch over and being run by his own stupid beasts because its only making him stupider he needs to tell them to stop there shit and that he is the owner and he needs to stol giving into them especially for food for the stupid ugly crocodile alls it does is wants to eat and think all the food in the world is for it and always comes running it needs to lurn that when its read and when its time to get feed the MC will tell it and call it over and will it will have to have manners and the MC needs to actually hit the thing to make it understand its doing shit wrong or else it wont learn and honestly the MC doesnt teach the stupid ugly beast (all of them) how they should act or be as beast/pets and plue they need to understand that they r nothing but weapons and things to fight with and thats it nothing more and that theu can always be replaced if they do not stop there shit!!!!
Interesting setting, interesting start, interesting story and characters, and good plot development speed. That being said the translations a little rough and some of the cultural specific things don’t translate over at all like the MCs second beast name or race.
Yeah the translation eventually kills what would otherwise be an enjoyable read. It’s a shame but the machine just can’t seem to translate this one well and was getting things wrong from the beginning but after around 60 chapters the genders are all over the place and you just lose grasp of what’s happening.
This review is based on the free chapters! Cultivation. Tamed Beasts. Cute Tamed Beast. Quiet System. OP MC's sister. MC is Chen Xing, a student and he has a cute crocodile Tamed Beast, Taotie. Story isn't bad, actually. Translation quality isn't bad, but there are inconsistencies. Taotie is a cutie though, so I would continue reading when I get a free 24 hr voucher. Check the story out yourself and see if it's your cup of tea.
i am one of the impatient readers(sorry, not sorry).. gave up after reading 200+ chapters because the way the story in each chapter gets jumbled up. I can accept "beast taming" cause it automatically translates in my brain, but getting the story line in every dang chapter messed up, my brain can't process anymore 🥲😅may be it's the author's way of preventing others from stealing their work🤷🏻
Interesting novel. The plot is already quite intense in the beginning of the book where there are mysteries surrounding the sister. The world building is also quite good however the interaction between mc and his friends are non-existent, idk if the mc is antisocial or the author just doesn't think it's important for the plot. Personally, i think having a conversation of mc and his friends will be quite fun.
揭示劇透 Im just starting to read this book and I have to say its pretty good for now but thay definitely can be way better improvements.... I improvement would be NOT have a some stupid crocodile in this bookcor any other stupid animals!!! There needs to be dragons, Phoenix's and other animals/beast that r way worth it and r expected for ther MC to have and honestly if the MC has more then 1 of those species with him like wolfs or other ones that would be awesome!!!! instead of having 1 of whatever he gets y now let him get or find multiple of them so they can all work as a team and everything!!!
The story seems interesting so far (I am only 4 chapters in). However, they constantly (every time, which is every couple of paragraphs) call tamed beasts "beast tamers" or "beast taming," which is very annoying. The translation seems fine otherwise.
This is just a couple more this I thought of after re-reading this book... I hope that when that time come for the lazy shity dragon to evolve that it evolves into a dragon that stands on 4 feet and not just on the 2 back leds because honestly its seems like it not a real dragon... It seems like its a drake and I hope it is big and I hope the MC doesnt let it watch TV at all ever again and I hope it getsway smarter... and for the stupid ugly crocodile needs to smarten up like come on already having such a big beast but yet its so stupid it can even fight on his own... unlike the bird he can fight on his own if needed and I hope that the rest of the MCs beast r smart and can fight on there own if needed and if the MC is gojng to get another beast y not have it be a snake that when it evolves it becomes huge and has wings and is of the ice element because the MC doesnt have an ice element beast yet... and I hope that the MCs mom and dad can end up raising more beast or at least become a tamer that can basically live for ever this way the parents wont die any time soon and we know his sister will be able to do whe the Mchas done as long as he helps her and if the MC doesnt want to be with his mentor or the other women from the action house then Y not have the MC be with the girl from the CHi family that is helping him mine one of the resource points or even the the granddaughter of the crocodile guy they r the same age so it wouldnt be bad or unless it comes oyt that he or his sister r adopted and then have them together... idk but Iamd re-reading this book and a lot more makes sense now.. and Y doesnt the MC use tha hair cut skill to use divinity healing on his father??? And what happened with the dogs at the university?? hes not gain skill pints anymore from them and hes graduated so does that mean he can go back there even to that houses?? And wi tree h all of the money and property he has y not have his family move and hire really strong tamers to protect them... and I when Im re-reading this book the more and more I it looks like the MC is all lonely and focused on his beast witch is not really a good thing and if the MC is able to be with a girl that has one of those big families then the MC wouldnt ahve to worry about protection for his parents and he can even have others raise the parents beast for them this way his parents dont have to put in to much worknat there age till they get get to be at the piint they feel younger then they can take over if that is what the MC wants to gave happen...
This book is really really good but I do have a couple suggestions so I hope the Author can take a look and consider them... First is Y not get the MCs sister out of the organization she is in and then put her in his as like a high official this way she doesn't have to worry about being in that organization anymore and being attached to it and if the guy doesn't want to let her go then have the MC bring him into the dark Realm and then either kill him or leave him there and if he kills him then carve a message in his chest and send the body to the doorstep of the organization and tell them that if they come after her or her family that they will all be hunted... The second is Y not get the MCs mentor at the college and her to friends that helped the MC in the past to come to his organization and this way he can have at least 2 big families in his organization and this way he knows they wont back stab him and he can give the 3rd girl a research place and let her research whatever she wants this way he can make discoveries and get more funding and resources and have the MC even take control of some secret realms.. like have the MC go in and have a team wait outside this way he can take a look first and see if there is anything extremely valuable to take... And the MC still have to go back to the secret realm that has that tower that he went to when he was in his first year of high school and only maid it to the 4th level and this way he can gain mor things and sell them even though he doest need it... and Y not have the MC look for some resource point that dont have anyone or when its time to get some y not have him gain at least 5 and have them be breeding point, mineral points, healing plant points and any other point that r valuable this way he can have a ton of resources and income coming in right to him self and have the mentor and her friend that has the action house help him out with refining them and selling the things they get because if they enter his organization then it would be way better for him to use them and no one else unless he has the old Qiu or whatever his nam was that has the big croc have him or his nephew/the kid that the MC is working with now join his organization too and this way they can also make it a big thing for there organization to secure poit spots and get income coming from the people that want/need the help and the MC can use all of this to gain connections and see what if he can infiltrate other organizations or big families that r doing illegal things and take them down... And Y not have the book that is in the MCs head be able to take assistances like he did woth his sister but Y not have it so the MC is able to give them all the skills he has already amd when he gets new ones he can give them to him as well but he get a portion of there fragments and the MC is the only one aloud to unlock the new skills and give them out this way he can help the ones he takes as an assistant to become extremely strong and they r able to help him more in the future but they have to be people that he trust 100% and have it so if they go ro talk about they dont remember it but also have the MC be able to feel and have him be able to rip it out of there heads or kill them on the spot if they go to talk but at least have the MC confront the person that tried to talk about and if they admit that they where trying to talk about then have the MC not give them any new skills for awhile and punch them that way so they know they r lagging behind the others that did get the new skill and mabe have the MC be able to be able to look for evolution paths for other beasts and the mini-games for skills and some of the other things that he can only do for his beast this way he can tell the people he trust on what to do to make them stronger this way he can gain more favors and resources from them... And can u please get the MC a girlfriend already... it really sucks that he just stays to himself... maybe have the MC and his mentor get together or the mentors friend that her family owns the auction house especially if they come to his organization but it definitely be great for the 3 women to join his organization to help with everything and the research girl can have access to more things scenes it would in the exotic region and the MC can have teams search the region for things to let her research on and have the results be huge.. way better then where she is before if she joins the organization because they wouldnt let her do what she wants or needs to to get results... but please consider these Ideas because honestly it would be great to have the MCs sister and his mentor and her 2 friends come over to his organization this way it would help him a ton and have more support by at least 2 big families and even if that Qiu or whatever the name is has his nephew or whoever he is join to make a team for resource points would help a ton as well and it would definitely be more exciting to have the MC get a girlfriend already too because it seems like the MC is lonelywhen reading the book!!! I hope it gets taken inro consideration..
Addicting story, I caught up to 400+ chapters in a week. Only issue is the translator often mixes up he and she, him and her. Also I still get regularly confused when they use beast taming and beast Tamer, because it doesn't refer to what you think it does. I like the relatively fast pacing of the story, chapters don't feel like filler.
great novel amazimg potential just need to suffer with the translation other wise amazing work p.s :author or publisher i dont care u got a real gem here for the love of god fix your translation imean the several and i mean several name changes for same character in the same chapter pick aname and fix it up❗❗❗❗
hey great story qnd characrers and really good wrting my main problem is that there is inconsistency in names of creatures across chapter also therse amistake in writing of "beast tamer" instead of "tamed beast"
Other than the translation I have no complaints. Translation needs improvement, its better than mtl but still very bad
Overall great story, better translation than MTL. However the later chapters are split into parts when they were originally just 1 which seems like a money grab.
good story bad translating for example when a character is talking about their beasts they keep saying beast taming instead like what is the name of your beast taming instead of just beast
This is such a good taming story. I’ve Read to CH77 so far. I like that the beasts are the main forms of combat. As I’ve read other novels that say taming but it’s just they get a beast then use their own power. Great world so far and many little drops of thing to come in the future. Main character has some intelligence but is also not just a master. He trains and tries to find the loopholes when possible but also has hard work.
An interesting concept wasted on a terrible translation and supporting characters. The machine just butchers a bunch of the titles and the supporting characters are all horrible people but we’re supposed to like some of them because they’re related to the mc. I honestly think the cliche of an orphan mc would have been an improvement in this case.
is there anyway that more chapters can be put out quicker or more at a time?? It sucks reading 1 chapter then having to wait like a hole days just for 1 more especially when its in the middle of reading chapters that leave u hagging and have to wait for the next chapter to see or figure out what happens next!! I like the book a lot and has a lot of potential but the attitudes and actions of the stupid ugly crocodile and the stupid dragon that just takes and destroys everything r to much and the MC babys them way to much and then need to be tought lesses on what to do and not to do!!! And he doesnt have to always have the stupid beasts out of the beast space because thats what the beast space is for!!! The MC needs to sto being a puch over and being run by his own stupid beasts because its only making him stupider he needs to tell them to stop there shit and that he is the owner and he needs to stol giving into them especially for food for the stupid ugly crocodile alls it does is wants to eat and think all the food in the world is for it and always comes running it needs to lurn that when its read and when its time to get feed the MC will tell it and call it over and will it will have to have manners and the MC needs to actually hit the thing to make it understand its doing shit wrong or else it wont learn and honestly the MC doesnt teach the stupid ugly beast (all of them) how they should act or be as beast/pets and plue they need to understand that they r nothing but weapons and things to fight with and thats it nothing more and that theu can always be replaced if they do not stop there shit!!!!
Interesting setting, interesting start, interesting story and characters, and good plot development speed. That being said the translations a little rough and some of the cultural specific things don’t translate over at all like the MCs second beast name or race.
Yeah the translation eventually kills what would otherwise be an enjoyable read. It’s a shame but the machine just can’t seem to translate this one well and was getting things wrong from the beginning but after around 60 chapters the genders are all over the place and you just lose grasp of what’s happening.
This review is based on the free chapters! Cultivation. Tamed Beasts. Cute Tamed Beast. Quiet System. OP MC's sister. MC is Chen Xing, a student and he has a cute crocodile Tamed Beast, Taotie. Story isn't bad, actually. Translation quality isn't bad, but there are inconsistencies. Taotie is a cutie though, so I would continue reading when I get a free 24 hr voucher. Check the story out yourself and see if it's your cup of tea.
i am one of the impatient readers(sorry, not sorry).. gave up after reading 200+ chapters because the way the story in each chapter gets jumbled up. I can accept "beast taming" cause it automatically translates in my brain, but getting the story line in every dang chapter messed up, my brain can't process anymore 🥲😅may be it's the author's way of preventing others from stealing their work🤷🏻
Interesting novel. The plot is already quite intense in the beginning of the book where there are mysteries surrounding the sister. The world building is also quite good however the interaction between mc and his friends are non-existent, idk if the mc is antisocial or the author just doesn't think it's important for the plot. Personally, i think having a conversation of mc and his friends will be quite fun.
揭示劇透 Im just starting to read this book and I have to say its pretty good for now but thay definitely can be way better improvements.... I improvement would be NOT have a some stupid crocodile in this bookcor any other stupid animals!!! There needs to be dragons, Phoenix's and other animals/beast that r way worth it and r expected for ther MC to have and honestly if the MC has more then 1 of those species with him like wolfs or other ones that would be awesome!!!! instead of having 1 of whatever he gets y now let him get or find multiple of them so they can all work as a team and everything!!!
The story seems interesting so far (I am only 4 chapters in). However, they constantly (every time, which is every couple of paragraphs) call tamed beasts "beast tamers" or "beast taming," which is very annoying. The translation seems fine otherwise.
This is just a couple more this I thought of after re-reading this book... I hope that when that time come for the lazy shity dragon to evolve that it evolves into a dragon that stands on 4 feet and not just on the 2 back leds because honestly its seems like it not a real dragon... It seems like its a drake and I hope it is big and I hope the MC doesnt let it watch TV at all ever again and I hope it getsway smarter... and for the stupid ugly crocodile needs to smarten up like come on already having such a big beast but yet its so stupid it can even fight on his own... unlike the bird he can fight on his own if needed and I hope that the rest of the MCs beast r smart and can fight on there own if needed and if the MC is gojng to get another beast y not have it be a snake that when it evolves it becomes huge and has wings and is of the ice element because the MC doesnt have an ice element beast yet... and I hope that the MCs mom and dad can end up raising more beast or at least become a tamer that can basically live for ever this way the parents wont die any time soon and we know his sister will be able to do whe the Mchas done as long as he helps her and if the MC doesnt want to be with his mentor or the other women from the action house then Y not have the MC be with the girl from the CHi family that is helping him mine one of the resource points or even the the granddaughter of the crocodile guy they r the same age so it wouldnt be bad or unless it comes oyt that he or his sister r adopted and then have them together... idk but Iamd re-reading this book and a lot more makes sense now.. and Y doesnt the MC use tha hair cut skill to use divinity healing on his father??? And what happened with the dogs at the university?? hes not gain skill pints anymore from them and hes graduated so does that mean he can go back there even to that houses?? And wi tree h all of the money and property he has y not have his family move and hire really strong tamers to protect them... and I when Im re-reading this book the more and more I it looks like the MC is all lonely and focused on his beast witch is not really a good thing and if the MC is able to be with a girl that has one of those big families then the MC wouldnt ahve to worry about protection for his parents and he can even have others raise the parents beast for them this way his parents dont have to put in to much worknat there age till they get get to be at the piint they feel younger then they can take over if that is what the MC wants to gave happen...