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it's a little out of place and the power level is a little unbalanced but for spending time reading it's pretty good. Although I improved the way of changing the POV, giving it more prominence and lengthening the plot of each chapter a little to make it entertaining..
it's a little out of place and the power level is a little unbalanced but for spending time reading it's pretty good. Although I improved the way of changing the POV, giving it more prominence and lengthening the plot of each chapter a little to make it entertaining..