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overall I loved the story so far... shout out to the author for notice the problem and even planning on how to fix such issues I am looking forward to more
Espectacular, hasta ahora el libro en una genialidad y todo lo que a mostrado me a encantado. No solo es un buen fanfic sino que explica bien las cosas y las desarrolla sin ser tediosas o aburridas.
Hasta ahora la historia a logrado atraparme, me gusta que no descartara la personalidad valiente e imprudente de Finn, me alegra que en momentos importantes pueda dar un paso adelante y no acobardarse, pero que en otros momentos pueda detenerse a pensar con seriedad también es agradable, su interacción con la princesa fue interesante y me intriga como presentarás el resto del mundo o el contenido que agregaste.
Love your work, I can't get enough of it so please don't stop and keep going. PLUS ULTRAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Honestly I haven't even read it but just because I've been waiting for an adventure hour fanfic for a long time I'll give you 5 stars... I hope you continue this story
This is the first Adventure Time fanfiction I've read and I love it. I feel like I've become a kid again and I'm having fun with Finn and Jake's adventures. Although I'm more of an adult now and that makes it better for me. For now I love it, I don't know how the romances will develop (if they'll be cringe or natural), how well crafted the canon or story adventures will be and how strong he'll become. But if Finn manages to accomplish his list of goals, I think it will be very satisfying. PDT: Don't forget the most beautiful waifus, like Princess Bubblegum, Marceline or Flame Princess.
At the moment I love this story because it transmits to me the same thing as when I watched the series as a child, I just hope that it transmits to me the same fear that the lich produced in me and if the romance with the girls is good, that's how it would be. The best Adventure Time fanfic of all time.
it's an alright story. the only thing i have against it is that there isn't much of a story to me, just a lot of the Mc monologuing..
So far I am loving the story and you didn't make this new Finn a retard like I've seen in some other fics, and you were, so far, able to mix some character development in the first chapter, capture the essence of Jake's character and in the latest chapter(15) some quiet time
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this is very good and the pace is very precise, neither slow nor fast which is great. The story also seems to be quite original unlike other stories of this.
Only on chapter one haven’t even read it except first paragraph all I gotta say is I don’t even care if this novels writing is only mid or grammars not good we legit never get adventure time fanfics and when we do they stop after ten chapters so all I gotta say is don’t ever stop writing this until the end please and thank you here is a gif as a gift
I'm only on the first chapter, but my eyes already hurt and i missed read a lot of things already because of the spaces of ( " Sample " ) ( ' Sample ' ) ( . Sample . ) instead of ("Sample") cuz tge whole thing just makes it look off and messes with my eyes not sure about others, but thats how it is for me, but Im not gonna be the bad guy and give low stars so here have a 4, I just hope u fix is all im asking 😂🙏
TFTC, I like this Fan Fic , I need more please _____________-----_________ :) :) __________:) ()()():(:):(:):(:)_________________________________________________________________________________
finally we got a adventure time fanfic its's so faking rare in webnovel and harem too, it like my soul finally found it peace.
Brother no pares está buenísima. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Although I still haven't read enough of this story, the premise is interesting and I hope it has a good plot and development, although I would like the flame princess to also be an option
I as any other author rate my own book with a 5 star ⭐⭐ I first want to start of with a rant . please pardon my anger . First of all . I know my punctuation is kinda shit and all but who said I don't know that already . Some random guy comes to my FANFIC and tries to start advising me as if he can do a better job .( which he can't . I checked out his bio ) and two , at no point was I forcing anyone to donate to my Ko-fi account. That's why it's called a donation . Which a certain once again bozo failed to comprehend . Just to know the bozo , I will not deleat any reviews on this book and therefore for those curious they will be able to easily find him . Like seriously , what does guy expect from a fanfic which I'm writing on my own and also editing on my own . Does he expect it to be some sort of artisticall literature . If only I could block certain people on this app . My day would just be better . End of runt I won't call my self a master of English but i think I am able to right a good fanfic with all the info on the adventure time world Thank you to all my supporters and to all those judgmental hater eat shit
overall I loved the story so far... shout out to the author for notice the problem and even planning on how to fix such issues I am looking forward to more
Espectacular, hasta ahora el libro en una genialidad y todo lo que a mostrado me a encantado. No solo es un buen fanfic sino que explica bien las cosas y las desarrolla sin ser tediosas o aburridas.
Hasta ahora la historia a logrado atraparme, me gusta que no descartara la personalidad valiente e imprudente de Finn, me alegra que en momentos importantes pueda dar un paso adelante y no acobardarse, pero que en otros momentos pueda detenerse a pensar con seriedad también es agradable, su interacción con la princesa fue interesante y me intriga como presentarás el resto del mundo o el contenido que agregaste.
Love your work, I can't get enough of it so please don't stop and keep going. PLUS ULTRAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Honestly I haven't even read it but just because I've been waiting for an adventure hour fanfic for a long time I'll give you 5 stars... I hope you continue this story
This is the first Adventure Time fanfiction I've read and I love it. I feel like I've become a kid again and I'm having fun with Finn and Jake's adventures. Although I'm more of an adult now and that makes it better for me. For now I love it, I don't know how the romances will develop (if they'll be cringe or natural), how well crafted the canon or story adventures will be and how strong he'll become. But if Finn manages to accomplish his list of goals, I think it will be very satisfying. PDT: Don't forget the most beautiful waifus, like Princess Bubblegum, Marceline or Flame Princess.
At the moment I love this story because it transmits to me the same thing as when I watched the series as a child, I just hope that it transmits to me the same fear that the lich produced in me and if the romance with the girls is good, that's how it would be. The best Adventure Time fanfic of all time.
it's an alright story. the only thing i have against it is that there isn't much of a story to me, just a lot of the Mc monologuing..
So far I am loving the story and you didn't make this new Finn a retard like I've seen in some other fics, and you were, so far, able to mix some character development in the first chapter, capture the essence of Jake's character and in the latest chapter(15) some quiet time
揭示劇透 this is very good and the pace is very precise, neither slow nor fast which is great. The story also seems to be quite original unlike other stories of this.
Only on chapter one haven’t even read it except first paragraph all I gotta say is I don’t even care if this novels writing is only mid or grammars not good we legit never get adventure time fanfics and when we do they stop after ten chapters so all I gotta say is don’t ever stop writing this until the end please and thank you here is a gif as a gift
I'm only on the first chapter, but my eyes already hurt and i missed read a lot of things already because of the spaces of ( " Sample " ) ( ' Sample ' ) ( . Sample . ) instead of ("Sample") cuz tge whole thing just makes it look off and messes with my eyes not sure about others, but thats how it is for me, but Im not gonna be the bad guy and give low stars so here have a 4, I just hope u fix is all im asking 😂🙏
TFTC, I like this Fan Fic , I need more please _____________-----_________ :) :) __________:) ()()():(:):(:):(:)_________________________________________________________________________________
finally we got a adventure time fanfic its's so faking rare in webnovel and harem too, it like my soul finally found it peace.
Brother no pares está buenísima. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Although I still haven't read enough of this story, the premise is interesting and I hope it has a good plot and development, although I would like the flame princess to also be an option
I as any other author rate my own book with a 5 star ⭐⭐ I first want to start of with a rant . please pardon my anger . First of all . I know my punctuation is kinda shit and all but who said I don't know that already . Some random guy comes to my FANFIC and tries to start advising me as if he can do a better job .( which he can't . I checked out his bio ) and two , at no point was I forcing anyone to donate to my Ko-fi account. That's why it's called a donation . Which a certain once again bozo failed to comprehend . Just to know the bozo , I will not deleat any reviews on this book and therefore for those curious they will be able to easily find him . Like seriously , what does guy expect from a fanfic which I'm writing on my own and also editing on my own . Does he expect it to be some sort of artisticall literature . If only I could block certain people on this app . My day would just be better . End of runt I won't call my self a master of English but i think I am able to right a good fanfic with all the info on the adventure time world Thank you to all my supporters and to all those judgmental hater eat shit