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The story starts off a bit weird for my taste, but you shouldn't let that stop you. It gets really interesting later with how he uses his power, "Undead," which is similar to Andy's from Undead Unluck, but modified to be both stronger and weaker. One of the best parts is that the author knows the difference between regeneration and not taking damage, so there are actual gory and bloody parts.
Three chapters in and the author has made it so his OC is canonically racist, and seeing how this is a reincarnation fic, there’s a 0% chance that this glaring character flaw will be addressed ever again. After reading up to chapter 4, I can say this fic is pretty good, the setup, sentence structure, and grammar are pretty good. It just sucks that the main character becomes immediately unlikable after the first two chapters. MC was dropping slurs like every other paragraph, at first I figured, ok kinda weird spur of the moment thought, but then I keep reading and he just keeps going, like bro of all the people this god-being picks to reincarnate it’s this POS?
the Story is interesting, and Logical. it's a really good work for being a First Time Author. the Author also Constantly Uploads Chapter after Chapter, and when he Couldn't, he gives us a warning before Hand. I really am excited for the story going forward.
Realmente é a primeira fic do autor, ele tentou fazer uma quebra da 4 parede mais ficou bem ruim então dropei, tipo você está começando agora e já quer fazer algo que mesmo autores experientes falham miserável, bem não terminei o capítulo até o final pois achei bem intragável, mas talvez o autor melhore no futuro afinal é a primeira vez dele, Boa sorte pra você autor nos vemos algum outro dia eu acho.
-Shameless Author Plug- this is my first story in webnovel, so I am giving it 5 stars by being shameless, give it a try, I hope you guys really like it since I have researched a lot for this Fanfiction. 🗿🗿PEACE🗿🗿
The story is very good, the protagonist is good, there is good development and interactions, but the writing is horrible The writing and grammar of the story are rubbish, so much so that sometimes I get lost trying to understand what is written, the most important flaw is the writing is deplorable.
The story starts off a bit weird for my taste, but you shouldn't let that stop you. It gets really interesting later with how he uses his power, "Undead," which is similar to Andy's from Undead Unluck, but modified to be both stronger and weaker. One of the best parts is that the author knows the difference between regeneration and not taking damage, so there are actual gory and bloody parts.
Three chapters in and the author has made it so his OC is canonically racist, and seeing how this is a reincarnation fic, there’s a 0% chance that this glaring character flaw will be addressed ever again. After reading up to chapter 4, I can say this fic is pretty good, the setup, sentence structure, and grammar are pretty good. It just sucks that the main character becomes immediately unlikable after the first two chapters. MC was dropping slurs like every other paragraph, at first I figured, ok kinda weird spur of the moment thought, but then I keep reading and he just keeps going, like bro of all the people this god-being picks to reincarnate it’s this POS?
the Story is interesting, and Logical. it's a really good work for being a First Time Author. the Author also Constantly Uploads Chapter after Chapter, and when he Couldn't, he gives us a warning before Hand. I really am excited for the story going forward.
Realmente é a primeira fic do autor, ele tentou fazer uma quebra da 4 parede mais ficou bem ruim então dropei, tipo você está começando agora e já quer fazer algo que mesmo autores experientes falham miserável, bem não terminei o capítulo até o final pois achei bem intragável, mas talvez o autor melhore no futuro afinal é a primeira vez dele, Boa sorte pra você autor nos vemos algum outro dia eu acho.
-Shameless Author Plug- this is my first story in webnovel, so I am giving it 5 stars by being shameless, give it a try, I hope you guys really like it since I have researched a lot for this Fanfiction. 🗿🗿PEACE🗿🗿
The story is very good, the protagonist is good, there is good development and interactions, but the writing is horrible The writing and grammar of the story are rubbish, so much so that sometimes I get lost trying to understand what is written, the most important flaw is the writing is deplorable.