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It's time for the Author's much-anticipated, unbiased, and brutally honest review! Translation Quality: 5/5 stars! With basic and simple English, nothing can go wrong! Or should I say, "worng"? Stability of Updates: 5/5 stars! The updates are as stable as the Author's mood swings, so buckle up! Story Development: 5/5 stars! The story develops like your favorite ML novel tropes! Clichés are like comfort food for the soul—delicious and predictable! Character Design: 5/5 stars! This time, we have an MC who isn't the typical arrogant, brooding, silent, and handsome indifference type. Instead, we get an average Joe! Finally, someone like us! World Background: 5/5 stars! Rich backgrounds and world-building from the get-go! And by rich, I mean we're stuck in a barren wasteland for a while. Enjoy the scenery, folks!
Update on my review: writing quality: not really picky with this, but the novel has good english and every sentence is easy to understand. Updating Stability: Good. Updates everyday Story Development: Very Good: Each arc is unique and the characters are growing as well as the world bulding Character Design: At first i thought he’s only an average joe but he’s a genius and hard working World Bacground: Each arc takes us to deffirent setting and world building. I luv t
MC's brain is underdeveloped. I'm at 6th chapter and I'll try not to throw up and continue reading even though it's disgusting, since I can see the concept and writing is really good.
a hidden gem! i have no problem with the story, it has potential. the writing is engaging. characters were believable. the world has much to offer, i am guessing this will be long by just the world building. thanks for this masterpiece!
Love the book. I hope theres more chapters. I like the mc and his ideas and the pacing so far. Keep it up 👍
This novel is really good and enjoyable, but why is the privilege so expensive? It doesn’t make any sense like it cost 499 coins to unlock five chapters and privilege.
Hello, I'm currently reading MMORPG Rebirth As An Alchemist and was hoping to ask if you are in need of a editor for your novels? I'm at chapter 200 and I am enjoying it quite a lot, I would like to edit your works if possible as I believe having smooth grammar and sentence structure can make a massive difference in a novels quality.
Disclaimer: It's my first review 😁 First thing first is the Writing Quality is good simple English and there's no problem so far about the grammar and the Story Development us pretty good and keep up the good work Author 💪
Disclaimer: Its my first ever review So first I'd like to say that this is the best Writing Quality that i have found with books of this Type where one has to develop his Territory. I also think that this has a lot of Potential especially with the Options of development given by the Author. So all in all give it a try, i am definitely here to stay [img=update]
It's time for the Author's much-anticipated, unbiased, and brutally honest review! Translation Quality: 5/5 stars! With basic and simple English, nothing can go wrong! Or should I say, "worng"? Stability of Updates: 5/5 stars! The updates are as stable as the Author's mood swings, so buckle up! Story Development: 5/5 stars! The story develops like your favorite ML novel tropes! Clichés are like comfort food for the soul—delicious and predictable! Character Design: 5/5 stars! This time, we have an MC who isn't the typical arrogant, brooding, silent, and handsome indifference type. Instead, we get an average Joe! Finally, someone like us! World Background: 5/5 stars! Rich backgrounds and world-building from the get-go! And by rich, I mean we're stuck in a barren wasteland for a while. Enjoy the scenery, folks!
Update on my review: writing quality: not really picky with this, but the novel has good english and every sentence is easy to understand. Updating Stability: Good. Updates everyday Story Development: Very Good: Each arc is unique and the characters are growing as well as the world bulding Character Design: At first i thought he’s only an average joe but he’s a genius and hard working World Bacground: Each arc takes us to deffirent setting and world building. I luv t
MC's brain is underdeveloped. I'm at 6th chapter and I'll try not to throw up and continue reading even though it's disgusting, since I can see the concept and writing is really good.
a hidden gem! i have no problem with the story, it has potential. the writing is engaging. characters were believable. the world has much to offer, i am guessing this will be long by just the world building. thanks for this masterpiece!
Love the book. I hope theres more chapters. I like the mc and his ideas and the pacing so far. Keep it up 👍
This novel is really good and enjoyable, but why is the privilege so expensive? It doesn’t make any sense like it cost 499 coins to unlock five chapters and privilege.
Hello, I'm currently reading MMORPG Rebirth As An Alchemist and was hoping to ask if you are in need of a editor for your novels? I'm at chapter 200 and I am enjoying it quite a lot, I would like to edit your works if possible as I believe having smooth grammar and sentence structure can make a massive difference in a novels quality.
Disclaimer: It's my first review 😁 First thing first is the Writing Quality is good simple English and there's no problem so far about the grammar and the Story Development us pretty good and keep up the good work Author 💪
Disclaimer: Its my first ever review So first I'd like to say that this is the best Writing Quality that i have found with books of this Type where one has to develop his Territory. I also think that this has a lot of Potential especially with the Options of development given by the Author. So all in all give it a try, i am definitely here to stay [img=update]