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VeeRoze has written a phenomenal book and it’s only her first one! Highly recommend you give it a read and join us in the adventure!
well this sucks...... it sucks that it's not higher in the ranking where it belongs. the story grabs you and won't let you go. while it's been suggested that the MC is a villain atm he's more just reacting to what the world serves him. the romance is a pleasant read and not over bearing. the power level makes the MC strong while not blowing everything from his path and he does take losses from which he grows. really doesn't feel like a first for the author. though....still not forgiving that first death. still hasn't been repayed.....but...it will happen. and I cannot wait for it!
this book is very good, definitely above the normal webnovel standards. I don't know why it's not more popular. the author recently went on a 3 month hiatus and I was almost worried the book would never end. I hope I can see the ending.
it's a very intriguing story with a variety of characters with different goals which are similar to most people if put under similar circumstances.
Haven’t read it just looked at it and title and thought harem them clicked and was right so definitely very expectable so far
This book has a beautiful world built in detail and mystery. The characters are enticing and the story will keep any reader glued to their screen. The action is well written, the romance steamy and the mystery continues to draw you in. Great story 5 stars and looking forward to where the author will take us next!
As an author that knows the difficulty of writing a novel truly different and unique from the norm. Its's a shame and saddening to see such a masterpiece not getting the attention it deserves whilst so many "cliche novels" are occupying higher rankings. Hopefully the readers would come to enjoy original novels one day and this novel will get the attention that it deserves. Author keep up the good work !
Love this story It has the dark hero . The world building is great and has great character dynamic
I will (most likely) update this review if my opinion changes — not too far in, but so far, promising story and am liking the world building. Plus, detecting some DnD-inspired elements, so gotta love that lol
Great build up of characters, strong writing, and loving the story line so far! Can’t wait to see where it goes!
It is really good. I like the story and were it is heading. I can’t wait for the author to make a new chapter. I just started reading this today and I am already loving this book.
I really like where this is going. assuming the author keeps it going. i will update this review if things change. but for now i like it!
can't believe it's a first time author very well developed world characters and power system keep it up, its my daily read now so in the future i may even get some priv chappys!
VeeRoze has written a phenomenal book and it’s only her first one! Highly recommend you give it a read and join us in the adventure!
well this sucks...... it sucks that it's not higher in the ranking where it belongs. the story grabs you and won't let you go. while it's been suggested that the MC is a villain atm he's more just reacting to what the world serves him. the romance is a pleasant read and not over bearing. the power level makes the MC strong while not blowing everything from his path and he does take losses from which he grows. really doesn't feel like a first for the author. though....still not forgiving that first death. still hasn't been repayed.....but...it will happen. and I cannot wait for it!
this book is very good, definitely above the normal webnovel standards. I don't know why it's not more popular. the author recently went on a 3 month hiatus and I was almost worried the book would never end. I hope I can see the ending.
it's a very intriguing story with a variety of characters with different goals which are similar to most people if put under similar circumstances.
Haven’t read it just looked at it and title and thought harem them clicked and was right so definitely very expectable so far
This book has a beautiful world built in detail and mystery. The characters are enticing and the story will keep any reader glued to their screen. The action is well written, the romance steamy and the mystery continues to draw you in. Great story 5 stars and looking forward to where the author will take us next!
As an author that knows the difficulty of writing a novel truly different and unique from the norm. Its's a shame and saddening to see such a masterpiece not getting the attention it deserves whilst so many "cliche novels" are occupying higher rankings. Hopefully the readers would come to enjoy original novels one day and this novel will get the attention that it deserves. Author keep up the good work !
Love this story It has the dark hero . The world building is great and has great character dynamic
I will (most likely) update this review if my opinion changes — not too far in, but so far, promising story and am liking the world building. Plus, detecting some DnD-inspired elements, so gotta love that lol
Great build up of characters, strong writing, and loving the story line so far! Can’t wait to see where it goes!
It is really good. I like the story and were it is heading. I can’t wait for the author to make a new chapter. I just started reading this today and I am already loving this book.
I really like where this is going. assuming the author keeps it going. i will update this review if things change. but for now i like it!
can't believe it's a first time author very well developed world characters and power system keep it up, its my daily read now so in the future i may even get some priv chappys!