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The story itself up to what I have available, (chapter 50) Has been very enjoyable and interesting. A few VERY minor spelling errors but consistency is there in terms of names and genders not changing every few paragraphs like in some books. Overall very enjoyable read, even though I admit I was a bit confused by the second summon so quickly after the first, but not sure how that will end up yet. In the end this is a really new story and ill update the review once more is available. My one major concern is Ive noticed a couple dropped stories by the author and im really hoping this isnt going to become one of those as it has a lot of promise. The world building is good, although not everything is well explained, probably on purpose to go more in depth into it later (structure of the cities, it was talking about sectors but that doesnt really get explained at all as of yet.)
If not for grammar or spelling issues it'd get a full 5/5. so far (as of now only 146 chapters) it's a great story! People will argue it's SL copy...while I could see that it'd be more to say it's a dragon version but no less worthy of praise. tbh this as well as a few other stories I've read are similar but different to SL and very well worth the read and need of recognition. Don't just drop becaus you believe it to be a knock off. read it all. enjoy the story. don't compare bananas to plantains! Give this author support!
The book is very interesting till chapter 11 that I have read recently but I can say for sure the story is good and the characters relation how they know each other and what ranks or power do they have really amazes me BTW 5 Stars recommended to read
I thought book had a good premise but there are some things i dont like. 1. He had an SSS Rank Talent. Even If Summoners are bad, they should think that such a high talent is something worth. 2. I was hoping there is no girlfriend/friend betraying him cliche. 3. When Cinder was summoned we saw her rank but after that no info panel for the other dragons and Daven summoning was even skipped. 4. He was threatening to get that sap from the world tree using force. I dont like MC's that resort to force when they dont get something and the other party is innocent. That's were i left. All in all: Not my Jam
揭示劇透
I only read the initial chapters, but I liked the world so far. The world building and mc's power sound pretty interesting. The grammar is very good, nothing to say about that
i love the development and the slow gaining of powers by the MC it's a good story
First of all, it's awesome. But some things need more work. 1. Some stories are out of place. Especially the PENALTY QUEST "It is so drawn out, instead of giving it its own arc, you squeezed it into a penalty quest making it boring and out of place". It is a penalty quest event but it lasted more than 5 chapters I think. It made me feel like I skipped a hundred chapters. 2. PROLONGED SCENES, when the reaper guild triggered the signal jammer I was surprised that it took 2 chapters before the scene played out. I think you should cut it short OR go for the fight scene then insert the trigger activation close to the end so as not to waste the build-up. I hope this help. Keep up the good work
揭示劇透
Up to chapter 182 I was enjoying the story, but 183-185 appear to be a platform malfunction. As if a totally different novel about a Gear Mage intruded. Customer support is useless again. I would love to read more about Alister but this other story is not even in the same universe. I'll check back to see it it gets fixed but otherwise I am done and will stop reading this story. Sad.
Idk what's the use of even reading it. The first few chapters show that MC and everyone else are brainless and the rest of the novel will be simply razing everything with an OP MC and same old cliche plots. You make a new novel then at least put more effort into it, not cliche everything while adding a grain of your own wishes.
Story is like many others of the kind, would say often even a bit better. Give it a try, but be warned that there are a lot of grammar mistakes. And author wont fix them or even try it. Read a bit into pay chapters and have to say, if grammar is important for you, dont buy them. If you can ignore those many mistakes go ahead
So alpha wolf dragon sigma male I hope MC continues to mog every little beta who dares get in his way 🐺🐺🐺😈😈😈😈😈
Found this recently, and it has quickly become my new must-read. Though the supporting character perspectives do not interest me, I have not found myself zoning out to do other things as I do with other books.
Honestly it started out pretty good. the summoning was pretty cool the mc is ok and his power set seems alright. The problem is the pointless chapters that are 100% filler. this story as of chapter 110 is 40% filler chapters that either try to be funny or just another pov that doesn't really go anywhere. like the twins 2 chapters wasted on some dumb prank that wasn't funny in the slightest just to show how much the mc ate at the end of the 2nd filler chapter. reminds me of DBZ when goku was powering up for 5 episodes yelling all the while a flashback was happening.
Honestly, this novel left a deep impression on me. I mean who would have expected such a an awesome novel to be hanging around the corner? The author really did a wonderful work. His narrative is just to wonderful and intriguing, the way he brings the characters to life, leaves me in complete awe. This, is a job well done.
i want to find the Nobel in which men character was blind at the starting and orphan he was taken in some family for work because that family doesn't want anyone to see what they are doing he work for that family for sometime and after finding a cultivation technique in that family he regain his eye power can someone find this novel
Hello guys, it's the author here. Decided it was finally time to make my shameless review after 100 chapters. treated this as a QnA section where you can get answers to your questions, but no spoilers. when writing this novel I really wanted to create something unique that was not really out there yet, and as a fan of novels and comics that keep me guessing I was sure did the same here, weaving in little mysteries. The concept of dragon-mancers is an already explored yet not commonly used concept, so I combined it with a little apocalyptic Si-Fi setting. the begining part of the novel is a bit slow due to the fact I had to lay down some groundwork for future chapters. This is my best work yet and I'm really proud the amount of effort I put in this time. Hope you enjoy reading as much as I enjoy writing. Thank you.
Peak! Peak! did is say Peak! Peak! This story is one of the absolute best I have read second to Solo leveling hype in my head 😤😤...
The writer's imagition is very vivid, given reality to the characters. I can see the story before me. The story comes alive. I strongly recommend this book
Well, I read the summary, so I'll just comment on the summary. It seems that the idea is great, but I find it strange. People make fun of the weakness of the summoner category, but it appears later that they are wrong. I find this talk strange. If he used his own power, it seems logical, but he relied on the system, so it seems that the regime is the one who proved them wrong. Do you understand what I mean? If you look at it from another point of view, they are right, I will not talk about their mockery, but I will talk about their words about the weakness of the summoner
I can't understand the beef with the Summoner class man. There's not much explanation behind the people underestimating summoner class, with an SSS class too. The story is good though it's just a bit forced for me.
Wasn't sure what to expect but am really enjoying it so far looking forward to more chapters
Love the story so far, love dragons. Im here to see the eventual outcome of our mc above the clouds 360 pov, riding atop the snout of a dragon posing, arms crossed, half dragon form as his tail sways behind him (lorgenome style from gurren lagann) as it zooms across the sky along with an army of dragons in tow. But im here for the ride, CCB out! :~).
The story itself up to what I have available, (chapter 50) Has been very enjoyable and interesting. A few VERY minor spelling errors but consistency is there in terms of names and genders not changing every few paragraphs like in some books. Overall very enjoyable read, even though I admit I was a bit confused by the second summon so quickly after the first, but not sure how that will end up yet. In the end this is a really new story and ill update the review once more is available. My one major concern is Ive noticed a couple dropped stories by the author and im really hoping this isnt going to become one of those as it has a lot of promise. The world building is good, although not everything is well explained, probably on purpose to go more in depth into it later (structure of the cities, it was talking about sectors but that doesnt really get explained at all as of yet.)
If not for grammar or spelling issues it'd get a full 5/5. so far (as of now only 146 chapters) it's a great story! People will argue it's SL copy...while I could see that it'd be more to say it's a dragon version but no less worthy of praise. tbh this as well as a few other stories I've read are similar but different to SL and very well worth the read and need of recognition. Don't just drop becaus you believe it to be a knock off. read it all. enjoy the story. don't compare bananas to plantains! Give this author support!
The book is very interesting till chapter 11 that I have read recently but I can say for sure the story is good and the characters relation how they know each other and what ranks or power do they have really amazes me BTW 5 Stars recommended to read
I thought book had a good premise but there are some things i dont like. 1. He had an SSS Rank Talent. Even If Summoners are bad, they should think that such a high talent is something worth. 2. I was hoping there is no girlfriend/friend betraying him cliche. 3. When Cinder was summoned we saw her rank but after that no info panel for the other dragons and Daven summoning was even skipped. 4. He was threatening to get that sap from the world tree using force. I dont like MC's that resort to force when they dont get something and the other party is innocent. That's were i left. All in all: Not my Jam
揭示劇透 I only read the initial chapters, but I liked the world so far. The world building and mc's power sound pretty interesting. The grammar is very good, nothing to say about that
i love the development and the slow gaining of powers by the MC it's a good story
First of all, it's awesome. But some things need more work. 1. Some stories are out of place. Especially the PENALTY QUEST "It is so drawn out, instead of giving it its own arc, you squeezed it into a penalty quest making it boring and out of place". It is a penalty quest event but it lasted more than 5 chapters I think. It made me feel like I skipped a hundred chapters. 2. PROLONGED SCENES, when the reaper guild triggered the signal jammer I was surprised that it took 2 chapters before the scene played out. I think you should cut it short OR go for the fight scene then insert the trigger activation close to the end so as not to waste the build-up. I hope this help. Keep up the good work
揭示劇透 Up to chapter 182 I was enjoying the story, but 183-185 appear to be a platform malfunction. As if a totally different novel about a Gear Mage intruded. Customer support is useless again. I would love to read more about Alister but this other story is not even in the same universe. I'll check back to see it it gets fixed but otherwise I am done and will stop reading this story. Sad.
Idk what's the use of even reading it. The first few chapters show that MC and everyone else are brainless and the rest of the novel will be simply razing everything with an OP MC and same old cliche plots. You make a new novel then at least put more effort into it, not cliche everything while adding a grain of your own wishes.
Story is like many others of the kind, would say often even a bit better. Give it a try, but be warned that there are a lot of grammar mistakes. And author wont fix them or even try it. Read a bit into pay chapters and have to say, if grammar is important for you, dont buy them. If you can ignore those many mistakes go ahead
So alpha wolf dragon sigma male I hope MC continues to mog every little beta who dares get in his way 🐺🐺🐺😈😈😈😈😈
Found this recently, and it has quickly become my new must-read. Though the supporting character perspectives do not interest me, I have not found myself zoning out to do other things as I do with other books.
Honestly it started out pretty good. the summoning was pretty cool the mc is ok and his power set seems alright. The problem is the pointless chapters that are 100% filler. this story as of chapter 110 is 40% filler chapters that either try to be funny or just another pov that doesn't really go anywhere. like the twins 2 chapters wasted on some dumb prank that wasn't funny in the slightest just to show how much the mc ate at the end of the 2nd filler chapter. reminds me of DBZ when goku was powering up for 5 episodes yelling all the while a flashback was happening.
Honestly, this novel left a deep impression on me. I mean who would have expected such a an awesome novel to be hanging around the corner? The author really did a wonderful work. His narrative is just to wonderful and intriguing, the way he brings the characters to life, leaves me in complete awe. This, is a job well done.
i want to find the Nobel in which men character was blind at the starting and orphan he was taken in some family for work because that family doesn't want anyone to see what they are doing he work for that family for sometime and after finding a cultivation technique in that family he regain his eye power can someone find this novel
Hello guys, it's the author here. Decided it was finally time to make my shameless review after 100 chapters. treated this as a QnA section where you can get answers to your questions, but no spoilers. when writing this novel I really wanted to create something unique that was not really out there yet, and as a fan of novels and comics that keep me guessing I was sure did the same here, weaving in little mysteries. The concept of dragon-mancers is an already explored yet not commonly used concept, so I combined it with a little apocalyptic Si-Fi setting. the begining part of the novel is a bit slow due to the fact I had to lay down some groundwork for future chapters. This is my best work yet and I'm really proud the amount of effort I put in this time. Hope you enjoy reading as much as I enjoy writing. Thank you.
Peak! Peak! did is say Peak! Peak! This story is one of the absolute best I have read second to Solo leveling hype in my head 😤😤...
The writer's imagition is very vivid, given reality to the characters. I can see the story before me. The story comes alive. I strongly recommend this book
Well, I read the summary, so I'll just comment on the summary. It seems that the idea is great, but I find it strange. People make fun of the weakness of the summoner category, but it appears later that they are wrong. I find this talk strange. If he used his own power, it seems logical, but he relied on the system, so it seems that the regime is the one who proved them wrong. Do you understand what I mean? If you look at it from another point of view, they are right, I will not talk about their mockery, but I will talk about their words about the weakness of the summoner
I can't understand the beef with the Summoner class man. There's not much explanation behind the people underestimating summoner class, with an SSS class too. The story is good though it's just a bit forced for me.
Wasn't sure what to expect but am really enjoying it so far looking forward to more chapters
Love the story so far, love dragons. Im here to see the eventual outcome of our mc above the clouds 360 pov, riding atop the snout of a dragon posing, arms crossed, half dragon form as his tail sways behind him (lorgenome style from gurren lagann) as it zooms across the sky along with an army of dragons in tow. But im here for the ride, CCB out! :~).