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it feels like a chatgpt story trying to turn the redroom in a happy go lucky thing rated for all thing. The mc also never gets questioned about her use of invisibility cloaks and devices infront of others. The whole thing lacks in logic and soul
it feels like a chatgpt story trying to turn the redroom in a happy go lucky thing rated for all thing. The mc also never gets questioned about her use of invisibility cloaks and devices infront of others. The whole thing lacks in logic and soul