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I love novels that have this concept of taking video games to another world. Honestly, I had high hopes for this novel, but unfortunately, I didn’t end up liking it. Like in some novels with this theme, the process that the protagonist follows here is very silly. From simply copying and pasting the game, it magically goes super viral. There are forced plotlines, like how streamers get stuck in the game because it’s too difficult. We’re talking about Pokémon—no one is that dumb. But here, it seems like they’re playing Dark Souls, to the point where no one can beat the Pokémon game, and they have to ask the designer for help (who, by the way, did nothing more than upload the game). Another silly plot is how they slander the game for being incomplete, and then the designer solves it with a live stream, only for the next chapter to show that it really was incomplete. The protagonist says they need to buy consoles and connect to a local network to trade Pokémon, and even mentions that you don’t have access to Mewtwo on the PC version. But magically, no one cares, and they see it as something novel. In other words, the plots are very forced and illogical; the story wasn’t well executed. At least others try harder to make the process more believable. That’s my humble opinion, thanks for reading.
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i gave it a average score because it revise fanfic base on 开局制作精灵游戏：主播玩疯了 but i like how you did i hope you continue the work and add more of you idea in the novel cause i read the original it went bad due to some nationalism stuff so i hope you continue this cause i m immerse reading it
Haven't read this yet, but i just wanted to ask a question. Are you by chance the author who went by "Lord_Indrath"? or a username along that line?? I remember reading this fanfic before under that translator, but the translation was basically still just MTL copy paste 😂😂 I tried to ask the author if he wanted me to help proof read but got ignored 😂😂 I still have the book saved in my Library, but it's been removed since so whenever i try to click it, it just takes me to the error page 😂😂 Just curious to know if u were the same or diff guy
I really like the concept of the story, but it could be even better if you improved on the grammar as well as using the correct terms like for example “Flash” and not “Shining Technique”. Except for the grammar and the other mistakes, the story is amazing and interesting.
my reviews so far (most recent chapter) It would be this system that is not well explained, first I thought he could use points (which he earns with the games he creates) to improve his skills, but then the system also gives him a certain amount of memory, which from what I understand he can create the game he wants using this system memory, with all the details of the game coming directly from his memory, but then later he can also use points to build consoles (gba)? This confused me because it came out of nowhere and wasn't even explained properly, and then the system also distributes the consoles by itself? (this was also not explained) In short - there is a lack of explanations in this work (also reactions from people playing/watching/reading his works), other than that it's good.
I love the story I just wait to see how he reacts to the immortal boy Ash and when he makes merchandaise In addition to the favorite comedy trio
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it's a good one. It's interesting to see people's reaction to different aspects of pokemon. I have a question though, will MC only make pokemon games or will he make other's like Assassin's creed, Legend of Zelda, Mortal Kombat, Mario etc...
Story itself has a lot of promise, grammar as stated in the synopsis is a bit rough but doesn’t hurt the flow of the story a lot of times but Grammarly would really help. Pacing seems ok for the most part and the various reactions the author writes in help add to the development of how the world and people are reacting to whats occurring. Overall, it’s shaping up to be great if the grammar issues see some fixing then I easily see this being a consistently amazing story.
Chill read, really nice. Only downside is the lack of scenes the mc is involved in. It’s mostly the typical streamers pov or othe game companies reaction. But it’s honestly not even a downside since it’s fun seeing their reactions.
I love novels that have this concept of taking video games to another world. Honestly, I had high hopes for this novel, but unfortunately, I didn’t end up liking it. Like in some novels with this theme, the process that the protagonist follows here is very silly. From simply copying and pasting the game, it magically goes super viral. There are forced plotlines, like how streamers get stuck in the game because it’s too difficult. We’re talking about Pokémon—no one is that dumb. But here, it seems like they’re playing Dark Souls, to the point where no one can beat the Pokémon game, and they have to ask the designer for help (who, by the way, did nothing more than upload the game). Another silly plot is how they slander the game for being incomplete, and then the designer solves it with a live stream, only for the next chapter to show that it really was incomplete. The protagonist says they need to buy consoles and connect to a local network to trade Pokémon, and even mentions that you don’t have access to Mewtwo on the PC version. But magically, no one cares, and they see it as something novel. In other words, the plots are very forced and illogical; the story wasn’t well executed. At least others try harder to make the process more believable. That’s my humble opinion, thanks for reading.
揭示劇透 i gave it a average score because it revise fanfic base on 开局制作精灵游戏：主播玩疯了 but i like how you did i hope you continue the work and add more of you idea in the novel cause i read the original it went bad due to some nationalism stuff so i hope you continue this cause i m immerse reading it
Haven't read this yet, but i just wanted to ask a question. Are you by chance the author who went by "Lord_Indrath"? or a username along that line?? I remember reading this fanfic before under that translator, but the translation was basically still just MTL copy paste 😂😂 I tried to ask the author if he wanted me to help proof read but got ignored 😂😂 I still have the book saved in my Library, but it's been removed since so whenever i try to click it, it just takes me to the error page 😂😂 Just curious to know if u were the same or diff guy
I really like the concept of the story, but it could be even better if you improved on the grammar as well as using the correct terms like for example “Flash” and not “Shining Technique”. Except for the grammar and the other mistakes, the story is amazing and interesting.
my reviews so far (most recent chapter) It would be this system that is not well explained, first I thought he could use points (which he earns with the games he creates) to improve his skills, but then the system also gives him a certain amount of memory, which from what I understand he can create the game he wants using this system memory, with all the details of the game coming directly from his memory, but then later he can also use points to build consoles (gba)? This confused me because it came out of nowhere and wasn't even explained properly, and then the system also distributes the consoles by itself? (this was also not explained) In short - there is a lack of explanations in this work (also reactions from people playing/watching/reading his works), other than that it's good.
I love the story I just wait to see how he reacts to the immortal boy Ash and when he makes merchandaise In addition to the favorite comedy trio
揭示劇透 it's a good one. It's interesting to see people's reaction to different aspects of pokemon. I have a question though, will MC only make pokemon games or will he make other's like Assassin's creed, Legend of Zelda, Mortal Kombat, Mario etc...
Story itself has a lot of promise, grammar as stated in the synopsis is a bit rough but doesn’t hurt the flow of the story a lot of times but Grammarly would really help. Pacing seems ok for the most part and the various reactions the author writes in help add to the development of how the world and people are reacting to whats occurring. Overall, it’s shaping up to be great if the grammar issues see some fixing then I easily see this being a consistently amazing story.
Chill read, really nice. Only downside is the lack of scenes the mc is involved in. It’s mostly the typical streamers pov or othe game companies reaction. But it’s honestly not even a downside since it’s fun seeing their reactions.