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Parabéns ao autor pelo ótima história que ele criou, é uma das melhores história de Soul land que eu já pude ler, espero que o autor não desista de escrever ela.
please tell me this has a harem........................................................................................................................
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I really like this story, good work with the translation! .........................................................................................................
First I have to say this is a great novel, but this novel has been on haitus or been dropped. There have been no updates for 2 months currently & the author has started another book.
gosto muito das historias deste autor, e esta ñ é diferente pois sempre fico com um gostinho de quero mais assim, como sua outra fanfic de soul land
Good fanfic, the writing quality is only 1-2 levels below "A different Tang San" .............................................................................................................................................
It's a great story, but the problem I have with it is the choice of words for translation. A great example is a chapter called "Evolution of the Burning Technique", which, in my opinion, should be called Flame Mantra that the English fandom and most of the original story(BTTH) translation of the technique is called. I have no problems with the story, I really like it, but certain words of the translation throws me off and it feels like I'm reading it being google translated.
Parabéns ao autor pelo ótima história que ele criou, é uma das melhores história de Soul land que eu já pude ler, espero que o autor não desista de escrever ela.
please tell me this has a harem........................................................................................................................
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I really like this story, good work with the translation! .........................................................................................................
First I have to say this is a great novel, but this novel has been on haitus or been dropped. There have been no updates for 2 months currently & the author has started another book.
gosto muito das historias deste autor, e esta ñ é diferente pois sempre fico com um gostinho de quero mais assim, como sua outra fanfic de soul land
Good fanfic, the writing quality is only 1-2 levels below "A different Tang San" .............................................................................................................................................
It's a great story, but the problem I have with it is the choice of words for translation. A great example is a chapter called "Evolution of the Burning Technique", which, in my opinion, should be called Flame Mantra that the English fandom and most of the original story(BTTH) translation of the technique is called. I have no problems with the story, I really like it, but certain words of the translation throws me off and it feels like I'm reading it being google translated.