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Great story do far. pretty unique relative to other fanfics. I like the characters and powers. I definitely hope he takes more action in the future but I think we eventually will, there's more focus on character growth at the moment but thats just as important. Definitely should give it a try. Only thing thats lacking is grammar but its not enough to hurt the rating in my opinion. Keep up the good work.
this story have story like i summoning tom at start of one piece, are you have idea from that story author?
this story actually surpassed my expectation, the characters seem grounded and as "realistic" as they can be in a story. tom is adorable and funny, keeping the story cemented in the goofy fun story you'd read in your spare time type. there is a moment where an anime character gets involved and it typically doesn't do well on other stories, this auther (i feel) has done really well in including them without ruining the feel of the story (maybe just too strong? lol it's not a serious story so if you care about this then it probably won't be a read for you.) Again, this story isn't really a serious novel so if you; go into this expecting a laugh and you will enjoy this lots. go into this story expecting the mc to be op super smart lone wolf vigilante? Not for you sadly.
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I love the story idea and the way of writing and how the author impersonate every character and show it is personality in the way of talking and taking actions and thair reactions to some things
Since you already have Tom why not Jerry for his next summon, my god will it be chaotic just imagining it brought out memories long forgotten 🤣🤣
do be do be dobabi. He's a walking cat, he got two hands & two legs. He's super genius but can only meow. Most of his plans failed but he never gave up.
I was okay completely fine with overlooking this fanfics faults for alot of the beginning. It was still really cool and cute..... til he summoned naruto and hinata also now his naruto can summon people. This just became a mess of different genres. It would work if he had powers of a shinobi or even just the sharingan or something but now he all the sudden summons both naruto and hinata. Neither give him power. Both would want to play hero witch will eventually lead back to him. They can also summon thier own summons now. who knows if they are loyal to him. its a complete mess.
Great story do far. pretty unique relative to other fanfics. I like the characters and powers. I definitely hope he takes more action in the future but I think we eventually will, there's more focus on character growth at the moment but thats just as important. Definitely should give it a try. Only thing thats lacking is grammar but its not enough to hurt the rating in my opinion. Keep up the good work.
this story have story like i summoning tom at start of one piece, are you have idea from that story author?
this story actually surpassed my expectation, the characters seem grounded and as "realistic" as they can be in a story. tom is adorable and funny, keeping the story cemented in the goofy fun story you'd read in your spare time type. there is a moment where an anime character gets involved and it typically doesn't do well on other stories, this auther (i feel) has done really well in including them without ruining the feel of the story (maybe just too strong? lol it's not a serious story so if you care about this then it probably won't be a read for you.) Again, this story isn't really a serious novel so if you; go into this expecting a laugh and you will enjoy this lots. go into this story expecting the mc to be op super smart lone wolf vigilante? Not for you sadly.
揭示劇透 I love the story idea and the way of writing and how the author impersonate every character and show it is personality in the way of talking and taking actions and thair reactions to some things
Since you already have Tom why not Jerry for his next summon, my god will it be chaotic just imagining it brought out memories long forgotten 🤣🤣
do be do be dobabi. He's a walking cat, he got two hands & two legs. He's super genius but can only meow. Most of his plans failed but he never gave up.
I was okay completely fine with overlooking this fanfics faults for alot of the beginning. It was still really cool and cute..... til he summoned naruto and hinata also now his naruto can summon people. This just became a mess of different genres. It would work if he had powers of a shinobi or even just the sharingan or something but now he all the sudden summons both naruto and hinata. Neither give him power. Both would want to play hero witch will eventually lead back to him. They can also summon thier own summons now. who knows if they are loyal to him. its a complete mess.