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Don't stop please, this fanfiction could be the best one I've ever read, don't stop writing it, great idea, great character, beautiful world. I hope everything works out for you
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as long as the author doesn't mess up the next chapter, this will be a top danmachi fanfiction.The potential for story development is also very large with fresh and new concepts, the other 5 souls also seem to have brains, are not like cardboard and have real personalities. The preparation of the storyline is quite thorough, and does not contain bland chapters that only increase the number of chapters. Overall I like the story, it's just that I'm a little worried about the chapter update schedule, the author is like someone who writes because he wants to, and can disappear anytime when the desire to write is not there, so apart from the update schedule, I will give 5 stars.
The story is going very well, I have no complaints (just about the few chapters) keep up the good work. author- san.................................
It only has a few chapters at the time i started reading the story but It has some diffrrent concepts from the majority of other storys. The quality is very good and i Hope the author uploads chapters frequently.
I write this to improve my writing, my imagination, and for my enjoyment. I hope you like it, and if you don’t, that’s okay, there are more stories to read on this page. Enjoy, and below are the characteristics of the story. Story Characteristics: Characters from Other Worlds: Includes characters from different universes. Martial Arts: The protagonist will train in martial arts while traveling the world searching for a goddess worthy of him. World Travels: The plot unfolds in a wide world, not just in Orario. English: Although I don’t know English, I use tools like ChatGPT to help. Music: I am a music lover; the protagonist sings and dances whenever I want him to. Irregular Chapters: Chapter releases do not follow a fixed schedule (I try not to let more than a week pass since the last publication). Special Chapters: Focus on other reincarnated characters and characters from other franchises. Large Harem: When I say large, I really mean it. Adult Content (18+): I am experimenting with adult content. Neutral Protagonist: Merlin can be both a hero and a villain, depending on the situation. Heavy Themes: The story tackles dark themes such as slavery, massacres, and cannibalism. Freedom in the Plot: The story focuses on peaceful travels and various daily activities of the protagonist. Imperfect: The protagonist makes human decisions and will grow over time.
Don't stop please, this fanfiction could be the best one I've ever read, don't stop writing it, great idea, great character, beautiful world. I hope everything works out for you
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
as long as the author doesn't mess up the next chapter, this will be a top danmachi fanfiction.The potential for story development is also very large with fresh and new concepts, the other 5 souls also seem to have brains, are not like cardboard and have real personalities. The preparation of the storyline is quite thorough, and does not contain bland chapters that only increase the number of chapters. Overall I like the story, it's just that I'm a little worried about the chapter update schedule, the author is like someone who writes because he wants to, and can disappear anytime when the desire to write is not there, so apart from the update schedule, I will give 5 stars.
The story is going very well, I have no complaints (just about the few chapters) keep up the good work. author- san.................................
It only has a few chapters at the time i started reading the story but It has some diffrrent concepts from the majority of other storys. The quality is very good and i Hope the author uploads chapters frequently.
I write this to improve my writing, my imagination, and for my enjoyment. I hope you like it, and if you don’t, that’s okay, there are more stories to read on this page. Enjoy, and below are the characteristics of the story. Story Characteristics: Characters from Other Worlds: Includes characters from different universes. Martial Arts: The protagonist will train in martial arts while traveling the world searching for a goddess worthy of him. World Travels: The plot unfolds in a wide world, not just in Orario. English: Although I don’t know English, I use tools like ChatGPT to help. Music: I am a music lover; the protagonist sings and dances whenever I want him to. Irregular Chapters: Chapter releases do not follow a fixed schedule (I try not to let more than a week pass since the last publication). Special Chapters: Focus on other reincarnated characters and characters from other franchises. Large Harem: When I say large, I really mean it. Adult Content (18+): I am experimenting with adult content. Neutral Protagonist: Merlin can be both a hero and a villain, depending on the situation. Heavy Themes: The story tackles dark themes such as slavery, massacres, and cannibalism. Freedom in the Plot: The story focuses on peaceful travels and various daily activities of the protagonist. Imperfect: The protagonist makes human decisions and will grow over time.