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plz come back and write more this is one of the best avatar stores I've read so far
Love this book. Even thought it started on wattpad and got booted, it’s still one of the best sci fi fandoms I’ve read. And the artistry with how the story ebs and flows really makes for a good story
It a story that I didn’t think I would like at first because of crossing thing over with eachother. But I ended up actually liking the story and what it is I look forward to how the whole avatar 2 goes in this story heck even avatar 1 will be interesting
this one is a rare find not many avatar fics are made its nice to see one once in a while
Yuri. ..,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,....
This isn't a Xenomorph, it's a trap. ----------------------------------- ----------------------------------- -----------------------------------
it's just one of those disgusting open relationship fic that using harem tag as bait. don't bother. probably a author from wattpad or AO3
I don't know why this has a harem tag everyone just seems to be into everybody. I wish I knew this was an open relationship story and not a harem before reading this.
Not that many avatar fics on here so it is always nice to see one, hope it does not get dropped soon though since that is a trend with fics right now
grammar is really well written, and not broken English. also a very intriguing story having an alien(xenomorph) as the Mc. hope you don't drop this. [img=recommend]
揭示劇透 plz come back and write more this is one of the best avatar stores I've read so far
Love this book. Even thought it started on wattpad and got booted, it’s still one of the best sci fi fandoms I’ve read. And the artistry with how the story ebs and flows really makes for a good story
It a story that I didn’t think I would like at first because of crossing thing over with eachother. But I ended up actually liking the story and what it is I look forward to how the whole avatar 2 goes in this story heck even avatar 1 will be interesting
this one is a rare find not many avatar fics are made its nice to see one once in a while
Yuri. ..,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,......,...,....
This isn't a Xenomorph, it's a trap. ----------------------------------- ----------------------------------- -----------------------------------
it's just one of those disgusting open relationship fic that using harem tag as bait. don't bother. probably a author from wattpad or AO3
I don't know why this has a harem tag everyone just seems to be into everybody. I wish I knew this was an open relationship story and not a harem before reading this.
Not that many avatar fics on here so it is always nice to see one, hope it does not get dropped soon though since that is a trend with fics right now
grammar is really well written, and not broken English. also a very intriguing story having an alien(xenomorph) as the Mc. hope you don't drop this. [img=recommend]
揭示劇透
please continue this amazing book I would like to see it continued