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I read up to chapter 16 and here are the points I liked and didn't like, honestly: I liked it: The development is well constructed and slow, where the protagonist learns more about his powers and the world, the characters summoned are also developed in an interesting way. The story is just beginning and is very enjoyable to read. I didn't like it: one thing that bothers me personally is the MC's simple-minded mentality, it's understandable after all he was just an ordinary person, screams, anger, fear and more screams, as a leader he should Act logically, but this can be developed in the future. Now the main point "villain" and "dark" that was why I came to read this fic, but I was disappointed the MC is an average anime hero, I don't know if there will be any twist or personality change but It's something I've been waiting for since the beginning. Anyway, it's a good story with good development, I hope for new chapters.
I was hesitant to read it because I thought it was just gonna be another story of summoning a bunch of girls. I was wrong and the writing is not bad. 10/10 recommend reading.
Let's be real for a second, anyone would give his own story a 5 stars review, no matter how sh*tty it might be, right? RIGHT?!
I like this, I just hope you don't drop this author-san!!! In short, as you know from the title MC has a system that allows him to summon random anime characters via gacha, MC is transported to a fantasy world and from what I see it looks like he will build his own kingdom with his subordinates being the anime characters he summons. The MC's appearance is a handsome young man with blonde or golden hair with red and blue Heterochromia eyes
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I read up to chapter 16 and here are the points I liked and didn't like, honestly: I liked it: The development is well constructed and slow, where the protagonist learns more about his powers and the world, the characters summoned are also developed in an interesting way. The story is just beginning and is very enjoyable to read. I didn't like it: one thing that bothers me personally is the MC's simple-minded mentality, it's understandable after all he was just an ordinary person, screams, anger, fear and more screams, as a leader he should Act logically, but this can be developed in the future. Now the main point "villain" and "dark" that was why I came to read this fic, but I was disappointed the MC is an average anime hero, I don't know if there will be any twist or personality change but It's something I've been waiting for since the beginning. Anyway, it's a good story with good development, I hope for new chapters.
I was hesitant to read it because I thought it was just gonna be another story of summoning a bunch of girls. I was wrong and the writing is not bad. 10/10 recommend reading.
Let's be real for a second, anyone would give his own story a 5 stars review, no matter how sh*tty it might be, right? RIGHT?!
I like this, I just hope you don't drop this author-san!!! In short, as you know from the title MC has a system that allows him to summon random anime characters via gacha, MC is transported to a fantasy world and from what I see it looks like he will build his own kingdom with his subordinates being the anime characters he summons. The MC's appearance is a handsome young man with blonde or golden hair with red and blue Heterochromia eyes
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