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Haven't read it all but the descriptions are vivid. The author's attempt to immerse me into the chapters were successful. From the little I've read, this is a good novel!
From what i have read so far it is a good one. But you need to add more emotions in the characters and fix your synopsis. Remove "Chapter 1,2,3" from names since webnovel takes care of that as well
It shows promise with its intriguing premise and characters. Despite its low chapter count, so far it carries good flow. Recommend to give it a shot.
I like the premise, concept of the story, and if I may be of help, I'll advise adding a bit of sensory , as for the story I like the idea, and how the author has done so far, it's still to early to judge, but I'll give a detailed review when there's more chapters . for now , Author should write more
The first chapters [Spefically Chapter 1 & 3] are a bit choppy when it comes to grammar but that quickly gets resolved by the introduction of the 4th chapter. The world has been painted beautifully from the start and the characters are vibrant and joyful. It really feels like the world is real and the rural aspect of it is described in a serene way like a slice of life anime. The way the novel is progressing, it's only gonna get better.
Love the story but needs to have more emotions in the characters as they interact with each other. The world-building is so good keep up the good work. Never give up
Fun and interesting read so far, hope the author stays consistent with uploads ! def recommend giving this one a shot if this sounds like your kind of story
Haven't read it all but the descriptions are vivid. The author's attempt to immerse me into the chapters were successful. From the little I've read, this is a good novel!
From what i have read so far it is a good one. But you need to add more emotions in the characters and fix your synopsis. Remove "Chapter 1,2,3" from names since webnovel takes care of that as well
It shows promise with its intriguing premise and characters. Despite its low chapter count, so far it carries good flow. Recommend to give it a shot.
I like the premise, concept of the story, and if I may be of help, I'll advise adding a bit of sensory , as for the story I like the idea, and how the author has done so far, it's still to early to judge, but I'll give a detailed review when there's more chapters . for now , Author should write more
The first chapters [Spefically Chapter 1 & 3] are a bit choppy when it comes to grammar but that quickly gets resolved by the introduction of the 4th chapter. The world has been painted beautifully from the start and the characters are vibrant and joyful. It really feels like the world is real and the rural aspect of it is described in a serene way like a slice of life anime. The way the novel is progressing, it's only gonna get better.
Love the story but needs to have more emotions in the characters as they interact with each other. The world-building is so good keep up the good work. Never give up
Fun and interesting read so far, hope the author stays consistent with uploads ! def recommend giving this one a shot if this sounds like your kind of story